Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your answer more natural and concise: use past tense consistently, avoid repetition, and include one or two specific details (a memory or an activity). Limit to 3–4 sentences and use a linking phrase to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. My friends and I would spend whole afternoons playing on the swings and having picnics while our parents chatted nearby, which felt magical. Because of those memories, I often wish I could go back to those carefree days.

Sugerencia: Use clearer grammar and sentence structure, avoid filler words, and give a concise reason why you enjoy parks now but less than before. Use linking words (however, although) to show contrast.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks, although not as much as before. I like using the swings and slides because they bring back nostalgic memories, but now I visit less often due to a busy schedule.

Sugerencia: Be more specific and avoid repetition. State your main opinion clearly, give one concrete comparison or detail, and explain the benefit briefly. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like for example or therefore.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would. Bangkok lacks enough public green spaces compared with places like New Zealand, where parks are abundant and well-equipped. More parks here would give children safe places to play and families areas to relax.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, avoid repeating past visits, and mention a clear future plan or preference. Use one or two specific details about what attracts you to those parks and a linking word to connect past experience to future intent.

Ejemplo: I don't have a particular park in mind, but I would like to visit parks in New Zealand again. For example, the playgrounds in Palmerston were unique with large slides and nature trails, so I hope to return to explore more of them in the future.

× I do enjoy going to parks as a child because there are a lot of activities and things you can do at parks.

✓ I did enjoy going to parks as a child because there were a lot of activities and things you could do at parks.

The sentence mixes present tense 'do enjoy' with the time frame 'as a child' which requires past tense. Change verbs to past tense to match the time reference: 'did enjoy', 'were', 'could'. This keeps tense consistent and clear.

× And also I used to go there with my friends, with my childhood friends, so we get to spend time together and also our parents took care of us.

✓ I used to go there with my childhood friends, so we got to spend time together and our parents took care of us.

The clause 'get to spend' is present tense but the context is past ('used to go'). Change 'get' to 'got' to match past narrative. Also streamline repetition: remove duplicate 'with my friends'.

× So it was a really magical moment when I was young and I really want to go back time to do that again.

✓ It was a really magical time when I was young and I really wanted to go back in time to do that again.

The sentence begins in past tense ('was') but then uses 'want' (present). Change 'want' to 'wanted' and add 'in' for correct idiom 'go back in time'. Also 'moment' is better as 'time' here.

× I do still do like going to parks.

✓ I still like going to parks.

Redundant auxiliary 'do' appears twice. For present simple positive statements, use either 'I still like' or emphatic 'I do still like'. Simplest correct form is 'I still like'.

× My parents usually describe me as a child even now because I still like going on a swing playing sliders and every time I go to the park I it's giving me nostalgia.

✓ My parents usually describe me as a child even now because I still like going on swings and playing on slides, and every time I go to a park it gives me nostalgia.

Multiple issues: use plural 'swings' and correct noun 'slides' instead of 'sliders'; 'going to the park' to general 'a park'; remove extra 'I' and change 'it's giving me' to simple present 'it gives me' for habitual action. Also 'nostalgia' is uncountable and fits with 'gives me'.

× So I feel like I really want to go there but I just don't enjoy it as much as I used to.

✓ I feel like I really want to go there, but I just don't enjoy it as much as I used to.

Mainly punctuation: add comma before 'but'. Tenses are correct: present feeling and past comparison 'used to' are appropriate.

× I would say yes, because I live in Bangkok, Thailand, and they're not as much park as I think it should have because I've been to New Zealand and there are a lot of interesting parks and I feel like if we have a lot of a lot more parks, kids will be able to do more activities there.

✓ I would say yes, because I live in Bangkok, Thailand, and there are not as many parks as I think there should be. I have been to New Zealand and there are a lot of interesting parks, and I feel that if we had many more parks, kids would be able to do more activities there.

Replace incorrect contraction 'they're' and ungrammatical 'not as much park' with 'there are not as many parks' (plural and quantifier correction). Change 'as I think it should have' to 'as I think there should be'. Use 'have been' to show experience; change 'if we have a lot of a lot more parks' to conditional 'if we had many more parks' to match imagined scenario and use 'would' for result.

× I do not have any specific parks or the name of the park I wanna go to right now, but I've been to New Zealand.

✓ I do not have any specific park or the name of a park I want to go to right now, but I've been to New Zealand.

Use 'park' singular with 'any specific park' is more natural; replace informal 'wanna' with 'want to'. 'Any' works with singular countable in negative contexts when referring to an unspecified example.

× I've visited New Zealand before in Palmerston and there are a lot of interesting parks.

✓ I've visited New Zealand before, in Palmerston, and there were a lot of interesting parks.

If referring to the parks observed during that past visit, use past tense 'were'. If speaking of general fact about New Zealand, present 'are' could be acceptable; here context links to the past visit so past tense is clearer.

× There are a lot of sliders are really interesting ones.

✓ There are a lot of slides that are really interesting.

Sentence contains redundancy 'are' twice and uses 'sliders' (incorrect noun) instead of 'slides'. Rephrase to 'slides that are really interesting' to fix structure and word choice.

× So I feel like, yeah, I really want to go there.

✓ So I feel like, yeah, I really want to go there.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable in present tense expressing current desire; no change needed.