Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be clear and grammatical. Start with a direct topic sentence that answers the question, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use correct tense (past) and avoid repetition. For example, say: “Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child.” Then add a reason and a brief example using a linking word (e.g., “because” or “for example”).

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child because my parents often took me there to play. For example, I used to spend hours on the swings and play games with neighborhood friends.

Sugerencia: Keep the answer concise and correct the tense and word choice. Start with a clear topic sentence (present tense), then give two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid filler phrases like “as I am a fitness freak” without explanation; choose a more natural phrase. Limit to up to five short sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still like going to parks because I exercise there regularly. For instance, I go jogging and do stretches most mornings, and I enjoy the fresh air since I live in a busy city.

Sugerencia: Respond directly and use clear reasons with correct word order and vocabulary. Use linking words such as “because” and “therefore.” Be specific about benefits (air quality, exercise space, community). Avoid repeating similar phrases and correct grammar (singular/plural, word forms).

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks because they improve air quality and provide space for exercise. Therefore, more parks would help residents stay healthy and enjoy a cleaner environment.

Sugerencia: Be specific about which park or what kind of park you mean, and explain why. Use future tense correctly and a clear linking word (e.g., “because” or “so that”). Avoid vague phrases like “social contacts” — say “meet people” or “socialize.” Keep to one or two supporting details.

Ejemplo: Yes, in the future I would like to visit a large botanical garden nearby because it offers peaceful walking paths and opportunities to meet other nature lovers. I hope to go there to relax and make new friends.

× Well, I like to go to parks usually when I as a child as I.

✓ When I was a child, I usually liked to go to parks.

The original sentence mixes present and past tenses and has incorrect word order. The time phrase 'when I was a child' requires past tense ('liked'). Move the adverb 'usually' before the main verb and place the time clause at the start for clarity. Also remove the redundant words 'as I'. Suggestion: Use consistent past tense for actions in childhood and keep adverbs close to the verb.

× Well I usually like to go to parks now as a as I am a fitness freak and I move usually moved there to for jogging, running and exercises and for a fresh year as I live in a city so that's why I like to go to parks now.

✓ I usually like to go to parks now because I am a fitness enthusiast, and I go there for jogging, running, and exercise to get fresh air since I live in a city.

The original sentence has mixed tenses ('move usually moved') and poor word order. Use present simple ('like', 'am', 'go') for habitual actions. 'Fitness freak' is informal; 'fitness enthusiast' or 'very active' is clearer. Use 'go there' rather than 'move there', and 'fresh air' instead of 'fresh year'. Remove duplicate phrases and place conjunctions correctly. Suggestion: Keep present simple for routines and ensure verbs are consistent and not duplicated.

× Well I like to see more parks in my city as they will improve my our in the environment and give a fresh environment to the citizens as they will as it make improves the promotes the fitness and their health concerns problems.

✓ I would like to see more parks in my city because they would improve the environment and provide fresh air to citizens; they also promote fitness and help with health problems.

Multiple issues: incorrect pronoun ('my our'), incorrect verb forms and agreement ('make improves the promotes'), and awkward phrasing. Use 'would' for a hypothetical preference and singular 'environment' without extra words. Use 'provide fresh air' and 'promote fitness' with correct verbs. Remove redundant words like 'concerns problems'. Suggestion: Simplify the sentence into clear clauses and use correct verb forms and pronouns.

× Yes, well I usually want to move to a bigger parks that in the future as they get social contacts and furthermore.

✓ Yes, I would like to go to bigger parks in the future because they offer social opportunities.

The sentence uses incorrect verb forms and articles: 'want to move to a bigger parks' mixes infinitive, plural noun and article. For future preference, 'would like to' is more natural. Use 'go to bigger parks' or 'visit bigger parks' and 'offer social opportunities' instead of 'get social contacts'. Remove 'furthermore' if not followed by additional information. Suggestion: Use 'would like to' for polite future preferences, match singular/plural nouns and choose appropriate verbs ('visit', 'go to', 'offer').