Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the sentence grammatical, concise and logically ordered. Start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you liked parks, then add one or two specific supporting details (activities, who with) using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect verb forms.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child. I often went there with my friends to play games like cricket and to celebrate festivals such as Holi, so we spent a lot of fun, active time together.

Sugerencia: Correct grammar and reduce repetition. Give a direct response, then explain when and why you go, with one or two specific activities. Use linking words like "usually" or "because" to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. Usually, I visit them in my free time to play casual games with friends or to relax outdoors because it helps me unwind.

Sugerencia: Answer the question directly (state whether you would like more parks) and then give specific reasons. Avoid repeating adjectives and be precise about features you value (green space, facilities, accessibility).

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because although Karnal already has several parks, additional green spaces would improve air quality and provide more places for families to relax. For example, more shaded seating and playgrounds would be helpful.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear topic sentence naming the park, its location, and one or two specific reasons you want to visit (features, history, scenery). Avoid repeating words and fix pronouns. Use linking words like "because" or "for example."

Ejemplo: I would like to visit Taj Park in Jaipur in the future because it is famous for its beautiful gardens and peaceful atmosphere. For example, I heard it has well-maintained flower beds and scenic walking paths that are ideal for photography and relaxation.

× Yes, I like to going for as a child before I prefer to spend quality time with my friend and play some games with my friends like Holi and cricket and just phantom some time with my friends.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks as a child. I preferred to spend quality time with my friends and play games like Holi and cricket and just pass some time with them.

The original contains incorrect use of 'to' before a gerund ('like to going') and tense errors. Use 'liked' (past) to match 'as a child'. 'Like going' or 'liked going' is correct; remove 'to'. Also 'for' after 'going' is wrong: use 'going to parks'. 'Prefer' should be past 'preferred'. 'Phantom some time' is incorrect word choice; use 'pass some time'. Combine repetitive mentions of friends for clarity.

× Yes, I still like to go going to bars now because in my free time I go to park and play some games with my friends and some and spend some time with my friends.

✓ Yes, I still like going to parks now because in my free time I go to the park to play games and spend time with my friends.

'Like to go going' is redundant; use 'like going' or 'like to go'. 'Bars' is likely a typo for 'parks'. Use the article 'the park' or plural 'parks' consistently. Remove repetition 'and some and' and duplicate references to friends. Keep present tense 'like' and 'go' for current habits.

× In Karnal there are many parks and one of the tourist park is Karan Park and it is very famous for its nature and calm and calm and happy vibrant culture.

✓ In Karnal there are many parks and one of the tourist parks is Karan Park; it is very famous for its natural beauty and calm, happy, vibrant atmosphere.

'One of the tourist park' should be 'one of the tourist parks' (plural after 'one of the'). 'Nature' better expressed as 'natural beauty'. Remove repeated 'calm' and improve word order: 'calm, happy, vibrant atmosphere' uses adjectives correctly. Use a semicolon or period to separate clauses.

× I would like to talk about the park I want to go in the future is Taj Park, which is located in Jaipur because it is very famous and it is known for his beauty and he is very famous for about about its beauty and calm at.

✓ I would like to talk about the park I want to visit in the future: Taj Park, which is located in Jaipur. It is very famous for its beauty and calm atmosphere.

Original sentence has a broken structure: 'I would like to talk about the park I want to go in the future is...' should be rephrased as 'the park I want to visit in the future is' or split into two sentences. Use 'visit' rather than 'go' for clarity. 'His' and 'he' are incorrect pronouns for a park; use 'its'. Remove duplicated phrases 'about about' and awkward ending 'calm at' -> 'calm atmosphere'.