Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense (because question refers to childhood), avoid repetition, and give one or two specific details (what you did, who you went with). Use correct vocabulary (e.g., “park,” “playground”) and linking words like “so” or “because” correctly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child. I often went with my parents to a small park near our house where I used to play on the swings and slides because I loved being outdoors.

Sugerencia: Use present tense and clearer phrasing. Give one or two specific activities you do and a reason. Avoid vague or incorrect statements (e.g., “during the night” seems misplaced). Use linking words such as “because” and “for example.”

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they refresh my mind and help me relax. For example, I usually go jogging or do stretches there in the morning to stay healthy.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and expand with a clear reason and one specific example. Use linking words like “for instance” or “because.” Avoid listing parks without explaining why more parks are needed.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in Abu Dhabi because they improve air quality and provide places for exercise. For instance, we already have parks like Electra Park and Capital Park, but more small neighborhood parks would make it easier for people to visit regularly.

Sugerencia: Use future tense correctly and be concise. State the plan and add a specific detail about the park or activities you will do. Remove filler words like “uh” and avoid repeating phrases.

Ejemplo: Yes, I plan to visit the park near my home in Pakistan next month when I travel there. I will drive to the park with my family and spend the afternoon walking and having a picnic.

× Yes, I do like to visit the park as a child, so I haven't parked near to my home.

✓ Yes, I liked visiting the park as a child, so there wasn't a park near my home.

The speaker refers to childhood (past), so present tense 'do like' is incorrect; 'liked' is past tense. 'I haven't parked' is nonsensical here; likely intended to say there was no park near home. Use past tense 'there wasn't a park' and correct word order and article usage. Suggestion: use past tense consistently when talking about childhood and use 'there was/wasn't' to describe existence.

× So I usually went there with my parents and try to play the try to play the playground and.

✓ I usually went there with my parents and tried to play on the playground.

The sentence mixes past ('went') with present ('try') and repeats phrases. When narrating past habitual actions, use past tense for all verbs: 'tried' not 'try'. Also use the preposition 'on' for 'play on the playground' and remove repetition. Suggestion: maintain consistent past tense for past habits and proofread for duplication.

× Yes, I still like to visit the park now because it refresh my mind and I feel very good there.

✓ Yes, I still like visiting the park now because it refreshes my mind and I feel very good there.

Subject 'it' requires third person singular present verb form 'refreshes' not 'refresh'. Also 'like to visit' can be idiomatic, but 'like visiting' is smoother. Use third person singular present tense when describing general present effects.

× I go to the park and go do some work for the health.

✓ I go to the park and do some exercise for my health.

The phrase 'go do some work for the health' is unidiomatic and mixes 'go' unnecessarily. Use 'do some exercise' and possessive 'my health' to clarify purpose. Maintain present simple for habitual action.

× So park are very essential for all of the human being during the night.

✓ Parks are very important for all human beings during the night.

Plural noun 'park' must be 'parks' to agree with 'are'. 'Human being' should be plural 'human beings'. Also 'essential' is correct but 'important' is more natural; remove 'of the'. Clarify meaning of 'during the night' if intended; keep plural agreement.

× Yes, I live in Abu Dhabi and like to visit the park now so more park I visit here is Electra park and Capital park and Maintabi bus station park.

✓ Yes, I live in Abu Dhabi and like to visit parks; the ones I visit here are Electra Park, Capital Park and Maintabi Bus Station Park.

Use plural 'parks' when referring to more than one. Use 'the ones I visit' to introduce a list. Capitalize proper names and add commas. Maintain present simple for habitual preference.

× In future, I like to visit the uh, park near to my home in Pakistan, so I am planning to go Pakistan in coming month.

✓ In the future, I would like to visit the park near my home in Pakistan, so I am planning to go to Pakistan next month.

When talking about future desires, use 'would like' or 'want' not simple present 'like'. Add article 'the' before 'future'. Use 'near my home' not 'near to my home' and include preposition 'to' with 'go to Pakistan'. Use 'next month' rather than 'in coming month'.

× So surely when I will, uh, go to Pakistan, I go to that park by car and uh, enjoy the time there.

✓ So certainly when I go to Pakistan, I will go to that park by car and enjoy my time there.

English does not use 'when' with 'will' in the subordinate clause; use present simple 'when I go' and 'will' in the main clause or invert: 'I will go to that park'. Use 'enjoy my time' for natural phrasing. Maintain future tense consistency: 'will go' for planned future actions.