Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question directly, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and incorrect tense or word order.

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often played games with my friends on the grass and spent quiet afternoons reading under big trees, which made the parks feel both fun and peaceful.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, use correct articles and verb forms, and organize supporting details with linking words. Limit to 3–4 sentences and give specific examples of activities and frequency.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. I usually visit a nearby park several times a week to relax before exams or meet friends; we walk, chat and sometimes play badminton, which helps me relieve stress.

Sugerencia: Give a clear opinion with structured reasons linked by connectors. Fix fragmented phrases and filler words. Provide one or two specific benefits of more parks for the community.

Ejemplo: Definitely. More parks would give everyone better access to green space, which improves air quality and helps reduce stress. For example, additional small parks near housing areas would encourage exercise and provide quiet places for families to spend time.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct statement naming the park, then give concise, specific reasons using correct sentence structure and avoid repetition. Mention when you plan to go or what you expect to see.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit Cookfield National Park. I read about its conservation projects and scenic trails in a newspaper, and I hope to go next spring to see the landscapes, wildlife and photography spots that attracted me.

× When I was a child it is.

✓ When I was a child, it was.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses. The context refers to a past time ('When I was a child'), so the verb should be in the past tense ('was') rather than present ('is'). Also add a comma after the subordinate clause for clarity.

× It was the best place for me to play with my friends, relax, read books, or enjoy the beautiful nature of my town.

✓ It was the best place for me to play with my friends, relax, read books, or enjoy the beautiful nature of my town.

This sentence is grammatically correct in tense and structure. No changes needed. (Included to indicate no error of listed types.)

× Park is the 1st place that I go whenever I'm stressful with starting an exams or whenever I'm free or have nothing to do.

✓ The park is the first place I go whenever I feel stressed about starting exams or whenever I'm free or have nothing to do.

Missing definite article before 'park' and use of ordinal numeral '1st' is inappropriate in formal speech; spell out 'first'. 'I'm stressful' is incorrect: 'feel stressed' describes the person's state. 'starting an exams' has article/number error; use 'starting exams' or 'starting an exam'. Also remove unnecessary 'that' after 'place' and simplify word order.

× I also go to the park, go for work or chat with my friends, play some games there.

✓ I also go to the park to exercise, chat with my friends, or play some games there.

The original has parallelism and word choice issues: 'go for work' is unclear (likely 'go to exercise' or 'go for a walk'); maintain parallel verb forms after 'to' or use gerunds consistently. Rewriting clarifies intended activities and corrects structure.

× They become an indispensable part of my daily.

✓ They have become an indispensable part of my daily life.

'Daily' needs a noun here ('daily life'). Also use present perfect 'have become' to show the change over time that continues to the present. 'They' correctly refers to parks but the phrase needed completion.

× From my point of view, parks are the places for everyone to relax and recharge their energy parts have many trees which have uh, cleared the atmosphere and help reduce people's stress, increase their mood honestly.

✓ From my point of view, parks are places for everyone to relax and recharge their energy; they have many trees which help clean the air and reduce people's stress and improve their mood.

Several issues: unnecessary definite article 'the places' should be 'places'. Run-on sentence needs splitting; replace 'parts' which is incorrect here with a new clause starting with 'they'. 'Cleared the atmosphere' is wrong tense/wording — use 'clean the air' or 'improve air quality'. Use parallel verbs 'reduce' and 'improve' for effects on people. Remove filler 'uh' and 'honestly' or place appropriately.

× Cookfield National Park I first knew about it on a newspaper about protecting the environment.

✓ I first learned about Cookfield National Park from a newspaper article about protecting the environment.

Word order and redundancy are problems: start with the subject 'I' and use 'learned about' (past tense) rather than 'knew about'. 'On a newspaper' is incorrect preposition and missing 'article': use 'from a newspaper article'. Remove redundant 'it'.

× I felt like as was really interesting and amazing for me the park provided many services, beautiful landscape, pictures, scenery and beautiful.

✓ I felt it was really interesting and amazing; the park provided many services, a beautiful landscape, and scenic views.

Mixed and awkward tenses/phrasing: 'felt like as was' is ungrammatical — use 'felt it was'. 'For me' is unnecessary. List items need correct nouns and parallel structure: 'a beautiful landscape' and 'scenic views' instead of repeating 'beautiful' and using 'pictures, scenery' redundantly. Maintain past tense 'provided' to match 'felt'.