Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your answer grammatically correct and more concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Use past tense consistently and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often went with my family to have picnics and play outdoor games like tag and frisbee, which I always enjoyed because we spent quality time together.

Sugerencia: Use correct tense and smoother linking words. Give one clear reason and an example of what you do there. Avoid fragments and redundant phrases.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. Because my schedule is very busy, I usually visit a park at the end of the weekend to relax and clear my mind by walking or reading on a bench.

Sugerencia: Clarify your position (yes or no) then explain with specific reasons. Avoid contradiction and finish your sentence. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example.'

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because the existing ones are quite small. For example, larger parks would give busy people more space to exercise or relax on weekends.

Sugerencia: Organize your answer: state the park name, explain why you want to visit, and include a specific detail or activity. Use present or future tense consistently and avoid unclear phrases like 'variety of projects.'

Ejemplo: Yes, I want to visit the Rose Garden, which many people have recommended. It is famous for its wide variety of roses, and I would like to see the different species and take photographs. I am also interested in visiting Deer Park to see the animals.

× Yes, when I was a child, I like to go in part with my family for spending time with my family, also playing outdoor games.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I liked to go to parks with my family to spend time together and play outdoor games.

The response refers to past habits, so the past simple tense 'liked' is required instead of present 'like'. 'Go in part' is incorrect; use 'go to parks'. Use the infinitive 'to spend' after purpose and correct word order for clarity. Also remove repetition of 'with my family'. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× Yes, I still like to going park because I have a very busy schedule so at the end of the weekend I was going to park for relaxation of my mind also refreshed my mind and.

✓ Yes, I still like going to the park because I have a very busy schedule, so at the end of the weekend I go to the park to relax and refresh my mind.

After 'like', use either the gerund 'going' or the infinitive 'to go'; not 'to going'. Use 'go to the park' for correct preposition and article. Use present simple 'I go' for habitual actions instead of past 'I was going'. Use 'to relax and refresh my mind' for correct purpose construction and parallel verbs. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× No, I don't think so. I would like to more parks in my city because there are also very small parks in my city. Also people have their busy schedule so they.

✓ No, I don't think so. I would not like more parks in my city because there are already many small parks, and people have busy schedules so they rarely use them.

'Would like to more parks' is ungrammatical; use 'would like more parks' or 'would not like' depending on intended meaning. Clarified 'already' and corrected plural agreement 'schedules'. Completed the sentence by explaining consequence 'rarely use them'. Modal 'would' combined with base verb must be followed by the base form. Grammar problem type ID: 4

× Yes, I would like to go a very special park.

✓ Yes, I would like to go to a very special park.

When talking about going to a place, use the preposition 'to' after 'go'. Use the indefinite article 'a' before 'very special park'. The correct pattern is 'go to a park'. Grammar problem type ID: 22

× Many of the people told me about this park.

✓ Many people have told me about this park.

'Many of the people' is awkward; 'Many people' is more natural. Use present perfect 'have told' to indicate that people have told the speaker up to now. This matches the context of recalling recommendations. Grammar problem type ID: 27

× The park name is Rose Garden.

✓ The park's name is Rose Garden.

Use the possessive form 'the park's name' or 'the name of the park' for natural English. Alternatively, 'The park is called Rose Garden.' Grammar problem type ID: 22

× There was a variety of roses.

✓ There was a variety of roses there.

Grammatically 'There was a variety of roses' is acceptable but adding 'there' clarifies location. Alternatively, use plural verb 'There were many varieties of roses' if referring to different types. Ensure agreement between 'variety' and verb depending on meaning. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× I would like to see the variety of projects and I would like to go Deer Park.

✓ I would like to see the variety of roses, and I would also like to visit Deer Park.

'Variety of projects' seems incorrect in context; likely 'variety of roses'. Use 'visit Deer Park' or 'go to Deer Park' with the preposition 'to'. Combine ideas with 'and' and use 'also' for emphasis. Maintain parallel verb forms 'would like to see' and 'would like to visit'. Grammar problem type ID: 26}]} }{