Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答はおおむね意味が伝わりますが、文法ミスや語彙の誤用（“paying”は不適切）、冗長な繰り返し、まとまりのない構造が見られます。まず主題文で直接答えを述べ、その後に1〜2文で具体的な詳細（誰と、いつ、何をしたか）をつなぎの語（for example, after school, with my friends）を使って述べてください。発音や流暢さを改善するために簡潔な文を使い、反復を避けましょう。

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often went there with my friends after school to play games like tag and football, so we spent most evenings running around and having fun.

Sugerencia: 内容は伝わりますが、余分な繰り返し（“I will say I will say”）、文のまとまりの欠如、前置詞や語順の誤り（“cause bit how far away”）が目立ちます。まず簡潔に肯定・否定を述べ、その理由と具体例を1文ずつで続けてください。接続表現（however, because, so）を使うと論理がはっきりします。

Ejemplo: Yes, I still like parks, but I rarely visit them because they are quite far from my house. Instead, I often go to the nearby stadium to play sports like soccer with friends.

Sugerencia: ポイントは明確ですが、語彙の誤用（“perks”→parks、“rated with both”不明瞭）や文法的な崩れが目立ちます。質問にはまず短く直接答え、その後理由を述べる構成にしてください。具体的な問題点（playground不足、スペース不足）や提案（more courts, multi-purpose fields）を示すと説得力が増します。

Ejemplo: Yes, I would. Nowadays it is harder to find suitable places to play basketball or soccer, so having more parks or multi-purpose sports fields in the city would make it easier for people to exercise and meet friends.

Sugerencia: 答えは正しい方向ですが、たくさんの躊躇語（“I, I”, “yeah”, “I cannot say”）と曖昧な表現があるため流暢さと自信が欠けて見えます。まず行きたい場所を明確に言い、その理由を具体的に述べましょう。理由には観光名所や体験したいこと（hot springs, scenery, wildlife）を挙げ、1〜2文でまとめます。

Ejemplo: Yes, I would love to visit Yellowstone National Park. It's famous for its hot springs and spectacular landscapes, and I would like to see the geysers and wildlife in person because pictures look stunning.

× Yes I did, and park is for paying something with my friends.

✓ Yes, I did, and the park is for playing with my friends.

The verb 'is' must agree with the singular noun 'park' and the definite article 'the' is required for a specific place; 'paying' is incorrect here—'playing' matches the intended meaning. Suggestion: use 'the park' for a specific park and 'play' not 'pay'.

× And yeah I usually go when they're with my friend after school to play something.

✓ And yeah, I usually go when my friends are with me after school to play.

The original mixes pronouns and subject-verb order. Use plural 'friends' with 'are' for agreement and place the subject before the verb; 'play something' is vague—omit 'something' or specify the activity. Suggestion: 'my friends are with me' and end with 'to play'.

× I will say I will say yes but I usually don't go to the parks cause bit how far away from my house but nearby my house there is a stadium and I love it to go there and play some sport like soccer.

✓ I would say yes, but I usually don't go to the parks because they are a bit far from my house. However, there is a stadium near my house and I love going there to play sports like soccer.

Tense and modality: 'I will say' is unnatural here; 'I would say' or 'I would' fits. 'Cause' should be 'because'. 'Parks' requires plural agreement with 'they are'. Word order and infinitive use: 'love it to go' is incorrect—use 'love going' or 'love to go'. Suggestion: break sentence into two clear sentences and use 'they are a bit far' and 'love going there to play sports'.

× Yes, of course I in these days the number of perks we can play basketball or soccer like rated with both and bit harder to find somewhere we can play so.

✓ Yes, of course. Nowadays the number of parks where we can play basketball or soccer is limited, and it is a bit harder to find places to play.

Prepositions and vocabulary: 'in these days' should be 'nowadays'. 'Perks' is incorrect spelling; use 'parks'. Use 'where' to introduce relative clause for locations. 'Rated with both' is unclear—replace with 'where we can play basketball or soccer'. Suggestion: simplify and use 'places to play' for clarity.

× Yes, I, I heard a yeah, it was Yellowstone National Park.

✓ Yes, I heard of it; it was Yellowstone National Park.

Article and expression: 'heard a yeah' is ungrammatical. Use 'heard of it' to express familiarity. 'Yellowstone National Park' as a proper noun requires no article. Suggestion: use 'I heard of it' or 'I've heard of Yellowstone National Park'.

× I actually, I don't remember, but it's famous for the Hot Springs.

✓ Actually, I don't remember, but it's famous for its hot springs.

Capitalization and article: 'Hot Springs' need not be capitalized unless referring to a proper name; use possessive 'its' to show belonging. Suggestion: 'it's famous for its hot springs.'

× I, I cannot say I, I have no clue, but I think I, I saw a beautiful picture, so I wanna see it.

✓ I can't say—I have no clue—but I think I saw a beautiful picture, so I want to see it.

Redundant fillers 'I, I' and informal 'wanna' should be corrected. Use contractions appropriately: 'can't' and 'want to'. Punctuation and sentence flow improved by using dashes or commas. Suggestion: remove repeated 'I' and use 'want to' in formal speech.