Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the answer grammatically correct, more concise and include one specific memory. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid fillers like “etcetera.”

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because they were where I played with my friends. For example, I remember playing tag under the big willow tree every weekend, which made those days really special.

Sugerencia: Use a clear, natural structure: state your main point, then give one concise reason with linking words. Correct tense and phrasing (e.g., “I don’t have much free time” not “I am not having”). Avoid repetition and irrelevant details.

Ejemplo: Not really. I don’t have much free time at the moment because I’m preparing to study abroad and apply for a master’s programme, so I rarely visit parks these days.

Sugerencia: Be specific and avoid repetitive phrases. Start with a topic sentence, then give two concise reasons connected by linking words (e.g., “because” and “for example”). Use correct collocations (e.g., “benefit the environment”, “for families”).

Ejemplo: Yes, I would. More parks would benefit the environment by improving air quality, and they would give families a safe place to relax. For example, my family could spend weekends there, creating memories similar to those I had as a child.

Sugerencia: Keep the answer natural and concise. Begin with a clear statement, then explain why with one or two specific reasons. Avoid unsure or confusing phrasing like “I don't think so that it is a real park or a fake.”

Ejemplo: Yes, I would love to visit a place like Jurassic Park because I’ve always been fascinated by dinosaurs. Even if it’s fictional, it would be exciting to see lifelike exhibits and interactive displays about prehistoric animals.

× Yes, I like going to parks as a child because I had a lot of good memories over there, like playing with my friends, etcetera.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks as a child because I had a lot of good memories there, like playing with my friends.

The sentence refers to a past habit (going to parks as a child) so the verb should be past tense 'liked' rather than present 'like'. Also 'over there' is unnecessary and informal; 'there' is sufficient. Remove 'etcetera' for clarity and formality.

× No, I don't like going to parks at my current age because I am I, I am not having a lot of free time nowadays.

✓ No, I don't like going to parks at my current age because I don't have a lot of free time nowadays.

The phrase 'I am not having' is incorrect for the present simple state; use 'I don't have'. Remove the duplicated 'I'. Present simple expresses general states ('I don't like', 'I don't have').

× I am busy and I am aiming so that to study abroad and find a masters degree.

✓ I am busy and I am aiming to study abroad and get a master's degree.

The phrase 'aiming so that to' is incorrect. Use the verb 'aim' followed by the infinitive 'to study'. Use 'get a master's degree' (possessive apostrophe and article). Also 'masters degree' should be 'master's degree'.

× That's why I don't have much time and I don't like to going parks right now.

✓ That's why I don't have much time and I don't like going to parks right now.

After 'like' use the gerund 'going', not the infinitive with 'to going'. Also include the preposition 'to' before 'parks' ('going to parks').

× Yes, I'd love to see more parks in my city because they are good for our environment, they are good for kids and people and for my own family.

✓ Yes, I'd love to see more parks in my city because they are good for the environment, for children and for my family.

Use 'the environment' (definite article) and 'children' is the correct plural noun for 'kids' in formal speech. 'My own family' is wordy; 'my family' is natural. Also avoid repeating 'they are good' by listing objects succinctly.

× I love to be built parks so that they could go there and enjoy their self and make good memories as I had when I was a young.

✓ I would like parks to be built so that they could go there, enjoy themselves and make good memories like I did when I was young.

'I love to be built parks' is ungrammatical; use 'I would like parks to be built' or 'I would like more parks to be built'. Use reflexive pronoun 'themselves' not 'their self'. Use past 'like I did' and 'when I was young' (no article before 'young').

× Yes, I would love to go to the Jurassic Park.

✓ Yes, I would love to go to Jurassic Park.

Proper names of films/parks usually omit 'the' unless the official name includes it. 'Jurassic Park' is the name, so no article is needed.

× I don't think so that it is a real park or a fake, but it's just like my imagination park.

✓ I don't think it is a real park or a fake one; it's just a park from my imagination.

'I don't think so that' is incorrect; use 'I don't think that' or 'I don't think it is'. Use 'fake one' for clarity and 'park from my imagination' is more natural than 'my imagination park'.

× So due to dinosaurs, the creatures over there that are extinct and other adventurous things there, that's why I want to go to Jurassic Park.

✓ Because of the dinosaurs, which are extinct creatures, and other adventurous features, I would like to go to Jurassic Park.

Avoid redundant connectors 'So' and 'that's why'. Use 'Because of' or 'Due to' correctly, and restructure the clause: 'which are extinct creatures' clarifies 'dinosaurs'. 'Other adventurous things there' is vague; 'other adventurous features' is clearer. Use 'I would like' for politeness and correct tense.