Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your answer clearer and more grammatical. Start with a direct topic sentence that answers the question, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid filler sounds (uh) and repetition. Use linking words (because, so) to connect ideas and correct tense and word order (e.g., "when I was a child").

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks when I was a child because my parents often took me there to play. For example, I remember feeding ducks and playing on the swings, which made outdoor time fun and memorable.

Sugerencia: Give a fuller, more natural response: start with a clear yes/no sentence, then explain with specific details and use a linking word. Correct grammar (e.g., "running in the park is my exercise") and avoid short, fragmented sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because I use them for exercise. For instance, I usually go running in the park three times a week, which helps me stay fit and relax after work.

Sugerencia: Answer the question directly and expand with a reason and a short consequence. Replace fillers and give a comparison or suggestion to show development of the idea. Use linking words like "because" and "so".

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because public green spaces are limited. If there were more parks, people would have better places to exercise and children would have safer areas to play.

Sugerencia: Be specific: name the park or location, give a reason why you want to visit, and add a brief personal detail. Avoid hesitation and repetition. Use a linking phrase (for example, because) to connect the reason.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit a park in Bangkok called Lumpini Park because I have heard it is very peaceful and has lakes and walking paths. I would enjoy seeing the city skyline from the park and trying the outdoor activities there.

× I did like to go going through parks, uh, because I'm childhood, uh, go outside and I'd like to stay home more, more than.

✓ I did like going to parks when I was a child, because during my childhood I used to go outside, but I preferred staying at home.

The original sentence has multiple structure and tense issues: redundant 'did like to go going' (remove redundancy and use 'did like' with base or use 'liked'/'did like going'); 'I'm childhood' is incorrect phrase — use 'when I was a child' or 'during my childhood'; 'go outside and I'd like to stay home more, more than' mixes present and past and is unclear. Suggestions: choose a consistent past perspective, simplify to 'I liked going to parks when I was a child, but I preferred staying at home.' Ensure one verb form per action and proper time expression.

× Yes, because now I like to. Running in park is my exercise in my life.

✓ Yes, because now I like it. Running in the park is my exercise.

Problems: 'I like to.' is incomplete — needs an object ('it') or verb; 'Running in park' misses the definite article 'the' before 'park'; 'is my exercise in my life' is wordy and unnatural. Suggestions: use 'I like it' for a general preference, and 'Running in the park is my exercise' or 'Running in the park is how I exercise.'

× In my country, uh parks are not popular.

✓ In my country, parks are not popular.

Minor punctuation/spacing issue: remove filler 'uh' and ensure spacing. Grammatically the sentence is acceptable but could be smoother: 'Parks are not very common in my country' or 'Parks are not popular in my country.' No tense change needed.

× Yes, I have in is, is is in Bangkok and I think beautiful. You know, for me it's beautiful.

✓ Yes, I have one in Bangkok, and I think it's beautiful. For me, it's very beautiful.

Original is fragmented and contains repetition 'is, is is'. 'I have in is' unclear — likely means 'I have one in Bangkok.' Missing verbs and articles: include 'one' and 'it's' (it is). Suggestions: use clear subject-verb structure: 'I have one in Bangkok, and I think it's beautiful.' Optionally add 'For me' at sentence start for emphasis.