Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: حاول تقليل الترددات مثل "uh" و"um" والتحدث بجمل كاملة وواضحة. ابدأ بجملة موضوعية واضحة ثم أضف تفاصيل محددة أكثر (مثل ماذا كنت تفعل في الحديقة، من معك، ولماذا شعرت بالراحة). استخدم روابط بسيطة عند إضافة تفاصيل (مثل "because", "for example").

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoyed going to Godabark as a child because it made me feel peaceful and relaxed. For example, I used to play on the swings and walk with my parents, which helped me unwind.

Sugerencia: كن دقيقاً في التعبير عن المشاعر أو الأسباب وتجنب الأخطاء النحوية. ابدأ بجملة واضحة ترد مباشرة على السؤال ثم اشرح السبب بصيغة منطقية ومترابطة. استخدم كلمات مناسبة مثل "comfortable" أو "relaxed" وعبارات ربط مثل "because" أو "so".

Ejemplo: Yes, I still like going to parks because they help me relax when I feel stressed. For example, walking among trees makes me feel calmer and more comfortable.

Sugerencia: تجنب تركيب الجمل غير الصحيح وركّز على استخدام تعابير مناسبة مثل "I like ... because it gives". أعطِ تفاصيل محددة عن فوائد الحدائق (مثل الهواء النقي، المساحات الخضراء، أماكن للرياضة) واستخدم روابط لشرح السبب.

Ejemplo: Absolutely. I would like more parks in the city because they provide fresh air and attractive green spaces. For instance, Seymour Park is popular because people can exercise, relax, and enjoy nature there.

Sugerencia: قلل الترددات وركّب جملة واضحة تشرح أي حديقة تريد زيارتها ولماذا. استخدم تراكيب صحيحة مثل "the park near the river" وعبارات وصف دقيقة بدلاً من كلمات غير صحيحة. أضف أمثلة عن الأنشطة التي تريد القيام بها هناك.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit the park near the river because I enjoy the riverside views. For example, I would like to sit by the water, take photos, and walk along the promenade.

× Yes, uh, I like uh, Godabark because in the give me uh, peace and uh, comfortable.

✓ Yes, I liked going to Godabark because it gave me peace and was comfortable.

The student used incorrect adjective/adverb forms and word order. 'in the give me' is ungrammatical; use past tense 'liked' to match 'as a child', and 'gave me peace' uses correct verb + object. 'comfortable' needs a linking verb 'was' to describe the park. Suggestion: use correct verb forms and include linking verbs for adjectives. Use simple past for habitual past actions: 'I liked going to Godabark because it gave me peace and was comfortable.'

× Yes, I like going to the park now because I feel start on the uncomfortable.

✓ Yes, I like going to the park now because I feel uncomfortable.

The phrase 'feel start on the uncomfortable' is incorrect. Use the adjective 'uncomfortable' after 'feel' to describe current feelings. Remove unnecessary words 'start on'. Suggestion: say 'I feel uncomfortable' or 'I start to feel uncomfortable' if meaning becoming uncomfortable.

× Absolutely, I like Seymour Parks in the city because I give the fresh air on the beautiful place and the beautiful city.

✓ Absolutely. I like Seymour Park in the city because it gives fresh air and makes the city beautiful.

Multiple issues: plural/singular ('Parks' -> 'Park') and incorrect verb 'I give' should be 'it gives' to refer to the park. 'on the beautiful place' is incorrect preposition and phrasing. Use 'gives fresh air' and 'makes the city beautiful.' Suggestion: ensure subject matches verb and use appropriate verbs to describe effects: 'it gives' and 'makes.'

× Yes, absolutely. Uh, I want to go, uh, the park, uh, near the river. I like to go there because I'm the see, uh, river on the more good place.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I want to go to the park near the river. I like going there because I can see the river and it is a nicer place.

Problems include missing preposition 'to' after 'go', incorrect pronoun/auxiliary 'I'm the see' and awkward comparative 'on the more good place.' Replace with 'I can see the river' and 'it is a nicer place' for correct pronoun and comparative adjective usage. Suggestion: use 'go to', 'can see', and standard comparative forms like 'nicer'.