Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 문장 구조와 시제 일치를 개선하세요. 관사(a/the)와 복수형 사용 등 문법 실수를 고치고, 문장을 더 자연스럽게 연결하는 표현을 사용하면 점수가 오릅니다. 예를 들어 과거 습관을 말할 때는 'used to'를 쓰거나, 구체적 활동과 느낌을 간결히 연결하세요. 또한 반복 표현(very, good)이 많은데 더 다양한 형용사를 사용하세요.

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks when I was a child. Every weekend my family and I used to visit a nearby park, where I would ride my bike for hours. Those afternoons were full of fun and remain fond memories for me.

Sugerencia: 문법(부정확한 동사 형태와 관사)과 문장 연결을 바로잡으세요. 'like to go' 또는 'like going'처럼 자연스러운 구문을 사용하고, 두 아이디어(산책과 음악 듣기)를 연결할 때 연결어(for example, because)를 쓰면 논리가 좋아집니다. 'healing' 대신 'relaxing' 같은 더 적절한 단어를 사용하세요.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. I like walking along the paths and listening to music because it helps me relax and clear my mind.

Sugerencia: 의사 전달을 명확히 하세요. 'prefer' 대신 'would like' 또는 'I hope there will be' 같은 표현으로 의사를 정확히 나타내고, 장소와 이유를 연결해 구체적으로 말하세요. 문장 구조를 단순화하고 연결어(so that, because)를 사용해 목적을 설명하세요.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks near my home so that I can choose a nearby park whenever I want to go for a walk.

Sugerencia: 중복 표현('dream dream')과 어순·관사 오류를 고치세요. 이유를 더 구체적으로 설명하면 좋습니다(어떤 공원인지, 무엇을 하고 싶은지). 'the park in New York City' 대신 특정 공원명을 말하거나 'parks in New York City'처럼 일반화하세요. 문장을 자연스럽게 연결하는 접속사도 사용하세요.

Ejemplo: I'd love to visit parks in New York City, such as Central Park, because New York has always been my dream city and I'd enjoy walking there and seeing the scenery.

× Yes, I liked park when I was young.

✓ Yes, I liked the park when I was young.

'Park' is a countable singular noun and requires an article. Use 'the park' to refer to parks in general experience or a specific park from context. Suggestion: use 'the' with singular countable nouns when speaking about a specific or previously known place. Grammar problem type's ID: 22

× I have been to park for every weekend with my family.

✓ I went to the park every weekend with my family.

The original mixes present perfect progressive structure 'have been to' with time expression 'for every weekend' which is unnatural. Use simple past 'went' for habitual past actions with 'every weekend'. Also needs article 'the'. Suggestion: use 'went to the park every weekend' for past routines. Grammar problem type's ID: 11

× I rode a bike all afternoon and it was very, very good.

✓ I rode my bike all afternoon and it was very, very good.

Verb tense 'rode' is correct for past. Main issues are missing possessive 'my' for clarity. Suggestion: include possessive before 'bike' to sound natural. Grammar problem type's ID: 5

× It's good memory for me.

✓ It's a good memory for me.

'Memory' is a countable noun here and requires an article 'a'. Without it the sentence is ungrammatical. Suggestion: use 'a good memory' or 'good memories' depending on meaning. Grammar problem type's ID: 13

× Yes, I still like to going to the park.

✓ Yes, I still like going to the park.

After the verb 'like' use either the gerund 'going' or the infinitive 'to go', not 'to' plus gerund. Suggestion: use 'like going' or 'like to go'. Grammar problem type's ID: 6

× I like a walking through the paths and listening music with walk is very a good healing for me.

✓ I like walking along the paths and listening to music; walking is very healing for me.

Multiple issues: 'a walking' is incorrect — use 'walking' (gerund) or 'a walk'. 'through the paths' is less natural than 'along the paths'. 'listening music' requires preposition 'to'. The clause 'with walk is very a good healing for me' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'walking is very healing for me'. Remove unnecessary articles. Suggestion: simplify into two coordinated phrases and use correct prepositions. Grammar problem type's ID: 11

× Yes, I prefer many parks or near my house.

✓ Yes, I prefer having many parks near my house.

'Prefer many parks or near my house' is ungrammatical. Use 'prefer having' or 'I would prefer many parks near my house' to express preference. 'Many parks near my house' groups the idea correctly. Suggestion: use a verb phrase 'prefer having' or 'would prefer' before the object. Grammar problem type's ID: 14

× I hope so I choose the park when I want to go to walk.

✓ I hope so. I will choose the park when I want to go for a walk.

Original sentence mixes tenses and has incorrect infinitive 'to walk'. Use future 'will choose' to describe a decision and 'go for a walk' is the correct idiom. Also separate into two clauses for clarity. Suggestion: use 'will' for future decisions and 'go for a walk' for the activity. Grammar problem type's ID: 26

× I want to go to the park in the New York City because this is that city was my dream dream city.

✓ I want to go to the park in New York City because that city has always been my dream city.

Remove unnecessary article 'the' before 'New York City'. The clause 'this is that city was my dream dream city' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'has always been my dream city' to express ongoing desire. Also remove duplicated word 'dream'. Suggestion: use present perfect 'has been' for states lasting until now and correct word order. Grammar problem type's ID: 26

× So I want to walk the park.

✓ So I want to walk in the park.

English requires 'walk in the park' or 'walk through the park' rather than 'walk the park' (which can be informal but is less common). Use preposition 'in' or 'through' to indicate location. Suggestion: use 'walk in the park' or 'take a walk in the park'. Grammar problem type's ID: 11