Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more grammatical, concise and add a clear topic sentence followed by one or two specific supporting details. Use past tense consistently for childhood, avoid redundancy, and link ideas with a connective.

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often played on the swings and water slides with my friends, and many of my happiest memories, such as summer picnics and birthday parties, come from the local park.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and use correct tenses and clearer structure. Start with a topic sentence (do you still like parks?), give one reason with linking word, and finish with a brief comment about alternatives.

Ejemplo: Not as much now. Because I have studies and work, I rarely have time to visit parks; instead I usually relax at home by reading or watching films.

Sugerencia: Make your point more fluent and specific. Use clear linking words and correct grammar (e.g., 'if' or 'when'), avoid filler words, and give a brief concrete benefit or example.

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. More parks would mean more trees and green space, which would improve air quality and reduce heat in summer, making the city a healthier place to live.

Sugerencia: Be concise and coherent: answer the question directly, use conditional/past forms correctly, and give a specific example of a park you might visit and why. Avoid repetition and filler phrases.

Ejemplo: Not really in my city, but if I travel abroad I would like to visit famous parks such as Central Park in New York or Hyde Park in London because they reflect local culture and offer iconic sights and relaxing spaces.

× I like to go to parks as a child because I spend time playing swings and water slides with my mates and then I've most of my memories come from my local park.

✓ I liked going to parks as a child because I spent time on the swings and water slides with my mates, and most of my memories come from my local park.

The sentence mixes present simple with past time reference 'as a child'. Use past tense for habitual past actions: 'liked' and 'spent'. Also use correct collocation 'on the swings' and remove the unclear 'I've'. Ensure verb tense consistency so the time frame is clear.

× Well, to be fair, not as much when I was that young because I have studies and work to do and then when I'm relaxing I choose other ways of relaxing other than go to the park.

✓ Well, to be fair, not as much as when I was younger because I have studies and work to do, and when I'm relaxing I choose other ways of relaxing other than going to the park.

The sentence contains inconsistent comparative phrasing and mixes time references. Use 'as much as when I was younger' for comparison. Keep present tense for current habits ('I have', 'I choose') and use the gerund 'going' after 'other than'.

× Yeah, definitely, because it people plant trees and then increase the vegetation cover and umm so the air quality becomes becomes better and it makes the city more suitable for for person to live in.

✓ Yeah, definitely, because people can plant trees and increase vegetation cover, so the air quality becomes better and it makes the city more suitable for people to live in.

The original has an unnecessary pronoun 'it' before 'people' and duplicates words. Use 'people' as the subject. Add modal 'can' to express possibility. Use plural 'people' instead of 'person' to match general meaning and ensure singular/plural agreement.

× Well, not really, but if I'm traveling, traveling around the world and then I notice that there's there are some parks that like signature of the country.

✓ Well, not really, but if I'm travelling around the world and I notice that there are some parks that are like the signature of a country.

Keep tense consistent with conditional present/future reference 'if I'm travelling' then use present simple 'I notice' or present continuous; use 'there are' not duplicated 'there's there are'. Use 'are like the signature of a country' for clearer phrasing; 'a country' fits general reference.

× Well, maybe I'd like to choose, I'd like to go there because. Yeah.

✓ Well, maybe I'd like to go there because they are famous or important.

The original is fragmented and repeats 'I'd like'. Complete the reason clause after 'because' and avoid sentence fragments. Provide a concise reason to make the sentence grammatically complete.