Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and coherent: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid hesitations and repetition. Use linking words like 'but' or 'however' correctly and keep answers within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often visited the local park with my family to play games and have picnics. However, I don’t go as much now because I’m busier with work and studies.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, reduce filler words (uh, um) and correct small grammar issues. Use one linking word to contrast past and present (e.g., 'but' or 'however') and give a specific example of when you go to parks now.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still like parks, but I rarely go because I am busy with work. I sometimes go for a short walk in a park near my office with friends on weekends. Those walks help me relax and catch up with them.

Sugerencia: Organize your response: state your opinion clearly, then give specific reasons and a brief comparison. Use correct linking words (for example, 'because' and 'compared to') and avoid repeated words like 'chilling, chilling.'

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like more parks in my city because public green spaces make it easier to relax and exercise. Compared to Canada, where I lived before, Tokyo has fewer parks near residential areas, so I often lack a nearby place to unwind.

Sugerencia: Be specific and confident: name the park if you can, or describe it briefly and explain why you want to visit. Remove fillers and uncertain phrases. Keep it to 2–3 clear sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would love to visit Central Park in New York in the future because I have heard it is huge and has many attractions like lakes and gardens. I want to walk around the park, see the scenery, and relax there for a day.

× Yes I did. I used to go to the park often.

✓ Yes, I did. I used to go to the park often.

No grammatical change needed except adding a comma after Yes for clarity. The sentence correctly uses past tense 'used to' to describe a habitual past action.

× What I'm right now, what I'm not now.

✓ What I mean is, not now.

The original is ungrammatical and unclear. Use a clear phrase 'What I mean is' followed by 'not now' to convey the intended contrast between past and present. This fixes sentence structure and clarity.

× I used to like, uh, Parker, but now I'm so busy I have a lot of tasks to have to do.

✓ I used to like parks, but now I'm so busy I have a lot of tasks to do.

'Parker' is incorrect; context calls for plural 'parks' (singular/plural issue) and 'tasks to have to do' is redundant. Use the infinitive 'to do'. This corrects noun choice and verb phrase form.

× I'd say yes, I do uh, but I'm kind of business these days.

✓ I'd say yes, I do, but I'm kind of busy these days.

Use the adjective 'busy' not 'business'. 'Business' is a noun; 'busy' describes a person's state. This is an incorrect use of adjectives.

× I don't really have time to go to park, but I sometimes go on a walk to uh, with my friends.

✓ I don't really have time to go to the park, but I sometimes go for a walk with my friends.

Use the definite article 'the' with 'park' when speaking generally about going to the park in your area. Use the idiom 'go for a walk' rather than 'go on a walk', and remove the extraneous preposition 'to' before 'with my friends'.

× So yeah, I would say yes, I feel like uh, going to the, uh, park.

✓ So yeah, I would say yes, I feel like going to the park.

Remove filler sounds and unnecessary commas. 'Feel like going' correctly uses 'feel like' + gerund. Use 'the park' to refer to parks in general in the speaker's area.

× Differently as all I used to live in Canada, uh, there were, there were a lot of parks there.

✓ Definitely. When I used to live in Canada, there were a lot of parks there.

'Differently as all' is incorrect. Replace with 'Definitely' or 'Actually'. Maintain past tense 'used to live' and plural 'parks'. This fixes sentence structure and word choice.

× Umm, I enjoyed going to park and then chilling, chilling.

✓ Umm, I enjoyed going to the park and just chilling.

Add the definite article 'the' before 'park'. 'Chilling, chilling' is repetitive; use a single 'chilling' or 'just chilling'. This corrects article usage and redundant repetition.

× But I live in Tokyo right now. I feel like there are less park here.

✓ But I live in Tokyo right now. I feel like there are fewer parks here.

'Less' is used with uncountable nouns; for countable nouns like 'parks' use 'fewer'. Also make 'park' plural. This corrects quantifier and singular/plural errors.

× I don't have any place to chill.

✓ I don't have any place to relax.

'Chill' as a verb is informal; 'a place to relax' is more natural and grammatical as a noun phrase. Alternatively 'I don't have anywhere to hang out' would also work.

× MMM umm, there are, there's a big park in the New York I guess I think which code I forgot anyway, uh, there's a park there.

✓ Hmm, there is a big park in New York that I would like to visit, but I forgot its name or location.

Original is fragmented and contains redundancy and wrong article 'the New York'. Use 'there is' for a singular park and remove repeated phrases. Clarify that the speaker forgot the name or location. This corrects sentence structure and article use.

× Umm, I would like to go there in my future. I'm not sure where it's happening.

✓ Umm, I would like to go there in the future. I'm not sure when I'll go.

Use the phrase 'in the future' (not 'in my future') and express uncertainty about timing with 'I'm not sure when I'll go' rather than 'where it's happening', which is incorrect for visiting a place. This corrects future tense expression and word choice.