Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Give a direct, past-tense response that clearly addresses the question, avoid unclear phrases and irrelevant details, and keep it concise (max 5 sentences). Use linking words if you add reasons or examples. Be specific about what you did at parks or why you didn’t go.

Ejemplo: Not really — we didn’t go to parks much when I was a child. Instead, my family preferred going to a place called Passport Jeans to eat and spend time together. Because we rarely visited parks, I have fewer memories of playgrounds or picnics, but I enjoyed those rare visits when they happened.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and use present simple or present continuous for current habits. Explain briefly why you cannot go now with a specific reason and one supporting detail. Use linking words like 'but' and 'because' correctly and keep sentences natural.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do like parks, but I rarely visit them at the moment because I am very busy with work and study. If I had more free time, I would go for a walk there to relax and exercise.

Sugerencia: Good clear opinion. Improve by adding a specific reason and an example of benefits, and use more precise vocabulary instead of vague words like 'somehow'. Keep answers concise and coherent using linking words like 'because' and 'for example'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would love to see more parks in the city because they give residents easy access to green space and fresh air. For example, small neighborhood parks would encourage families to exercise outdoors and provide safe play areas for children.

Sugerencia: Be specific about each park and why you want to visit. Use correct names and grammar (e.g., 'Baguio' if meant). Mention particular activities you want to try and use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to make details concrete.

Ejemplo: Yes — I would like to visit Burnham Park and Baguio in the future. I’ve heard Burnham Park has boating and beautiful lakeside paths, and Baguio offers cool weather and outdoor markets, so I’d like to try boating and explore the local crafts.

× Remind the child we don't usually go to park, instead we go to Passport jeans to eat and to create memories with my family.

✓ I remember that as a child we didn't usually go to the park; instead we went to Passport Jeans to eat and create memories with my family.

Pronoun and tense issues: 'Remind the child' is incorrect contextually and 'remember' fits. Also use past tense 'didn't usually go' to match childhood. Include the definite article 'the park'. 'Passport Jeans' seems a proper noun and should be capitalized; use 'went' for past. Remove redundant 'to' before 'create memories'. Use a semicolon or conjunction to connect clauses for clarity.

× If I had a chance I would still go to the park, but due to some problem I don't have the time to go to park.

✓ If I had the chance I would still go to the park, but due to some problems I don't have time to go to the park.

Article and noun number errors: use 'the chance' (definite article for a specific hypothetical) and 'the park' (definite article). 'Some problem' should be plural 'some problems' or 'a problem'; 'the time' is fine but 'have time' is more natural without 'the'. Add 'the' before second 'park'. Tense and conditional structure are otherwise acceptable.

× I would love to see more parks in our city because it will help people to be connected to nature somehow.

✓ I would love to see more parks in our city because they would help people connect with nature.

Modality and tense consistency: 'I would love' suggests a conditional or desire; therefore 'will' should be 'would' to match. Use plural 'they' to refer to 'parks'. 'Help people to be connected to nature' is wordy — use 'help people connect with nature'. Avoid 'somehow' which is vague.

× Yes, I want to go to Burnham Park and Baggu because it's so cold there and there's a lot of activities that can be tried.

✓ Yes, I want to go to Burnham Park and Baguio because it is so cold there and there are a lot of activities to try.

Subject-verb agreement and word choice: 'it's so cold there and there's a lot of activities' mixes singular verb with plural noun — use 'there are a lot of activities'. 'Can be tried' is awkward; use 'to try'. Also correct place name 'Baggu' likely 'Baguio'. Use full 'it is' if preferred, but contraction is acceptable.