Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and use correct tense and fewer hesitations. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. For example, correct past tense (liked, went) and avoid filler words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I liked going to parks as a child. I often went there with my friends and family, and we played games or had picnics, which made me feel happy and relaxed.

Sugerencia: Use correct grammar (I still go / I was a student -> I am a student) and make the reason concise. Use linking words like "but" or "because" properly and keep to two or three sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks, but I don't go as often now because I am a junior high school student and I have little free time for family outings.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and avoid repetition. If the city already has many parks, say so clearly and give a reason or brief example. Use correct vocabulary and avoid unclear phrases like "park message."

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like more parks, although my city already has many. More parks would provide extra green space for exercise and family activities in our large provincial city.

Sugerencia: Be specific and reduce hesitations. Use correct names (e.g., "the Summer Palace" if that's intended) and explain why you want to visit using a linking word like "because". Keep it to two or three sentences.

Ejemplo: Honestly, I would like to visit the Summer Palace in Beijing because it is a famous cultural and historical site. I want to see the traditional architecture and learn more about Chinese history.

× Yes, I like to go to the parks.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks.

The question asks about childhood (past). The student used present tense 'like' which is inconsistent. Change to past tense 'liked' and use gerund 'going' for habitual past action. Also 'parks' without 'the' is more natural when speaking generally: 'going to parks'.

× When I was a child, I usually go to parks with my friends and my family.

✓ When I was a child, I usually went to parks with my friends and my family.

The time marker 'When I was a child' requires past tense. The verb 'go' should be in past simple 'went' to show habitual action in the past. 'Usually' is compatible with past simple 'usually went'.

× I think, uh, umm, that action can give me a sense of happiness.

✓ I think that activity gave me a sense of happiness.

'Action' is awkward here; 'activity' fits better. Because speaker refers to past childhood events, use past tense 'gave'. Also remove filler and the comma after 'think'. The article 'a' before 'sense' is correct; main error was tense and word choice.

× Yes, I still going to the parks now, but because I'm, I was a student and I was I'm in junior high school, I have not too much time to go to park with my friends and my family. OK.

✓ Yes, I still go to parks now, but because I'm a student in junior high school, I don't have much time to go to parks with my friends and my family.

'Still going' lacks auxiliary; correct present simple is 'still go'. The speaker mixed present and past: 'I'm, I was a student and I was I'm' is incorrect; keep present 'I'm a student'. Negative phrase 'have not too much time' is unidiomatic; use 'don't have much time'. Use plural 'parks' for general reference and include 'to' before 'parks'.

× in my city they have so many parks because my park message message is a big city in my province.

✓ In my city there are so many parks because my city is a big city in my province.

The phrase 'park message message' is unclear—likely a speech error; replace with 'city'. For existence use 'there are' rather than 'they have' when speaking about number of parks in a city. Capitalization aside, correct structure: 'In my city there are so many parks because my city is a big city in my province.'

× Hmm, to be honestly, uh, I want to go to Beijing and uh, to the Hehe Yuan Park.

✓ To be honest, I want to go to Beijing and to the Summer Palace (Yiheyuan).

Use idiomatic phrase 'to be honest' not 'to be honestly'. Remove fillers. The park name was likely 'Yiheyuan' (Summer Palace); use correct name or its translation. 'To the Hehe Yuan Park' is awkward—'to the Summer Palace (Yiheyuan)' is clearer. Maintain future intention with 'want to go'.

× I, I, I think I see the cultural and historical park, so I want to go there.

✓ I think I would like to see the cultural and historical sites there, so I want to go.

'I see' is present and literal; intended meaning is future/conditional desire—use 'would like to see' or 'want to see'. Also 'park' is singular and inaccurate; better: 'cultural and historical sites' to match Beijing attractions. This keeps the speaker's present desire about a future visit.