Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Give a clear, direct topic sentence that answers the question, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use correct tense and simple grammar: say whether you liked parks as a child, explain why briefly, and correct location phrasing (e.g. "central Vietnam"). Keep it to 2–3 sentences and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: Not really. I didn’t have the chance to visit parks as a child because my hometown in central Vietnam was very small and didn’t have any public parks. As a result, I spent most of my free time playing near my house.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question (Yes/No). Then give one or two specific supporting details linked logically (use linking words like "because" or "but"). Use correct verb forms and concise phrasing.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because I find walking there relaxing. For example, when I was at university in Danang I used to walk in the park every day, but now I am living elsewhere and have less free time.

Sugerencia: Answer the question directly and then give specific reasons using logical linking phrases (e.g. "because", "so"). Avoid repetition and unclear phrases; choose appropriate vocabulary such as "nature" and "high-rise buildings." Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because I prefer green spaces to concrete areas. Parks would give people a place to relax and feel connected to nature instead of being surrounded only by high-rise buildings.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer (Yes/No) and then clarify with a specific, coherent reason. Use correct vocabulary (e.g. "particular park" not "dilution park") and tidy up grammar. Mention whether you care about location, facilities, or convenience and avoid vague phrasing.

Ejemplo: No, I don't have a particular park in mind. I would prefer a good park near my house because it would be convenient for short walks after work and I value ease of access more than visiting a famous park.

× No, when I go to try, I don't.

✓ No, when I tried, I didn't.

The original mixes tenses and uses incorrect phrasing 'go to try'. The question refers to childhood, so past tense is required. Use 'when I tried' and 'I didn't' to maintain past reference.

× I didn't have a park in my hometown because I live in a small hometown in central of Vietnam.

✓ I didn't have a park in my hometown because I lived in a small town in central Vietnam.

Use past tense 'lived' to match 'didn't have'. 'Hometown' repeated is redundant; use 'town'. Omit 'in' before 'central Vietnam' and use article consistency.

× We don't have.

✓ We didn't have one.

This fragment lacks an object and wrong tense. Use past tense 'didn't have' and add 'one' to refer to 'a park'.

× If you ask me, I will.

✓ If you ask me, I will say yes.

The original 'I will' is incomplete. Add a verb or phrase to complete the conditional response. Also present simple in the if-clause and 'will' in the main clause is acceptable.

× I would say yeah, of course I like it.

✓ I would say, 'Yeah, of course I like it.'

This sentence needs clearer punctuation and reporting style. Grammatically it's acceptable, but adding a marker clarifies speech. (Note: follow-up corrections keep tense and meaning.)

× I like walk in the park.

✓ I like walking in the park.

After 'like' when expressing general preference use verb + -ing ('walking') rather than base form.

× When I was in university in Danang, I walked all day, but now I move outside on to live, so I don't have time to do that.

✓ When I was at university in Danang, I walked there all day, but now I have moved away to live elsewhere, so I don't have time to do that.

Use 'at university' and past tense for past situation. 'Move outside on to live' is incorrect; use present perfect 'have moved' to show change affecting the present and 'elsewhere' for clarity.

× Of course I like it because I like like natural was.

✓ Of course I like it because I like nature.

'Doubled like' is an error; 'natural was' is ungrammatical. Replace with the noun 'nature' to express preference.

× I don't know why all people obsessed with some kind of building high building.

✓ I don't know why people are obsessed with tall buildings.

Word order and verb 'are' needed for passive/continuous idea. 'Some kind of building high building' is redundant; use 'tall buildings.'

× I just want to have a park to work and, uh, feel alive in nature.

✓ I just want to have a park to work in and to feel alive in nature.

Add preposition 'in' after 'work' and parallel infinitive structure 'to work in and to feel' for clarity.

× Actually, I don't think I have some dilution park I want to go because it's just natural.

✓ Actually, I don't think I have a specific park I want to go to because I just want somewhere natural.

'Dilution park' is incorrect; likely intended 'specific' or 'particular.' Use 'a specific park' and 'go to' at end. Rephrase second clause for natural preference.

× I want to go somewhere near my house.

✓ I want to go somewhere near my house.

Sentence is correct; no change needed. (Kept for completeness.)

× It's convenient for me for long worked I guess, so I don't think I have cared about that.

✓ It's convenient for me after long work, I guess, so I don't really care about that.

'For long worked' is ungrammatical; use 'after long work' or 'after a long day's work.' 'I don't think I have cared' mixes tenses; use present 'I don't really care' to express current attitude.