Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant, with a good personal touch. To improve, make sentences more natural and fix small grammatical errors (e.g., “by the pound” → “by the pond”) and avoid starting sentences with conjunctions like “And.” Keep answers concise (max 4–5 sentences) and use one or two specific supporting details linked smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because my grandparents often took me there. I especially enjoyed swinging and feeding the ducks by the pond, which felt peaceful. Overall, spending time with my family at the park always made me happy and relaxed.

Sugerencia: Content is relevant but grammar and phrasing need correction. Use natural expressions (e.g., “makes me feel” not “feels me”), avoid repetition, and combine ideas with linking words for clarity. Also provide specific times and brief reasons. Keep to 3–4 sentences maximum.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks with both my family and friends because the atmosphere makes me feel safe and relaxed. I often go in the evenings after lunch when it is cooler, and we usually walk or sit and chat to refresh our minds.

Sugerencia: Good idea and reasons, but improve grammar and avoid redundancy (e.g., “pleasant, pleasant”). Use plural/singular correctly and more natural phrasing: “there are few parks” → “there are few parks” or “there are not many parks.” Use linking words to present benefits clearly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would. There are not many parks in my city, so I think the government should create more green spaces. More parks would provide cleaner air, safe places for children to play, and pleasant spots for families to relax in the evenings.

Sugerencia: Answer lacks accuracy and has multiple errors (e.g., “bags” → “parks”, “Delhi's Park” awkward). Avoid repeating the same phrase; instead give concise, specific reasons for wanting to visit. Combine sentences and use linking words to improve flow.

Ejemplo: Yes, there are several parks I want to visit in the future, especially a large park in Delhi. I would like to see its extensive greenery, well-planned layout, and high standards of cleanliness because those features make a park enjoyable.

× I especially enjoyed the swings and feeding the ducks by the pound.

✓ I especially enjoyed the swings and feeding the ducks by the pond.

The word 'pound' is a wrong word choice (vocabulary) not a grammar form; however it causes meaning error. Replace with 'pond'. This is lexical correction rather than a grammatical conjugation. Use 'pond' when referring to a small body of water where ducks swim.

× Yes I do, I still like going to the parks with my family and with my friends because the atmosphere feels me very safe, feel me very comfortable and also relax and refresh my mind.

✓ Yes, I do. I still like going to parks with my family and friends because the atmosphere makes me feel very safe, very comfortable, and relaxed and refreshed.

Multiple present-tense and verb choice issues: English uses 'make/feel + object + adjective' not 'feel me adjective'. Change 'feels me very safe' to 'makes me feel very safe' and 'feel me very comfortable' to 'very comfortable' or 'makes me feel very comfortable'. Also coordinate verbs properly: 'relaxed and refreshed' are adjectives describing state. Add necessary commas and split into two sentences for clarity.

× I usually prefer to go in the park with my friends at the evening time after the lunch.

✓ I usually prefer to go to the park with my friends in the evening after lunch.

Incorrect prepositions and articles: use 'go to the park' not 'go in the park'; use 'in the evening' rather than 'at the evening time'; use 'after lunch' not 'after the lunch' unless a specific meal is meant. These are standard collocations in present habitual descriptions.

× There are currently few parks in my city, so I would like the government to increase many more green parks.

✓ There are currently few parks in my city, so I would like the government to create more green parks.

'Increase many more green parks' is ungrammatical: 'increase' is transitive but not used with countable nouns in this way. Use 'create' or 'build' and 'more' (not 'many more' with 'increase'). Also keep agreement with 'parks' (plural) which is already correct.

× More green parks would give people's fresh air, safe places for the children to play, and pleasant, pleasant spots for the families to relax in the evening.

✓ More green parks would give people fresh air, safe places for children to play, and pleasant spots for families to relax in the evening.

'People's fresh air' is awkward; use 'people fresh air' or 'people with fresh air' but better: 'give people fresh air'. Avoid unnecessary definite articles: 'the children' and 'the families' are better as 'children' and 'families' in general statements. Remove duplicate word 'pleasant, pleasant' and keep parallel structure.

× Yes, there are many bags I would like to visit in the future.

✓ Yes, there are many parks I would like to visit in the future.

'Bags' is a wrong word choice; context requires 'parks'. This is a lexical plural noun correction. Ensure plural 'parks' matches 'many'.

× One of the best is the Delhi's Park.

✓ One of the best is Delhi Park.

Do not use the definite article with a proper noun plus possessive: 'the Delhi's Park' is ungrammatical. Use 'Delhi Park' or 'the park in Delhi'. If showing possession, say 'Delhi's park' without 'the'.

× I would like to see the greenery. I would like to see the atmosphere. I would like to see the arrangement. I would like to see the cleanliness in the future.

✓ I would like to see the greenery, the atmosphere, the layout, and the cleanliness in the future.

These short repetitive sentences are grammatically correct but stylistically poor. Combine into one sentence with parallel nouns: 'greenery, atmosphere, layout, and cleanliness'. Use 'layout' or 'arrangements' instead of 'arrangement' for natural collocation. Maintain future intent with 'would like to'.