Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve grammar, sentence structure and fluency. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two concise supporting details using correct verb forms and linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep it under five sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. My friend Abhishek and I went almost every day, where we would buy ice cream and play on the swings. Those visits were fun and helped me make many happy memories.

Sugerencia: Organise the answer with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to show sequence. Use correct tense and reduce repetition. Keep it concise (2–4 sentences) and include one brief reason or contrast.

Ejemplo: Not really, I rarely go to parks these days because I work long hours. I get up early, go to the office, and then go to the gym after work, so by the time I return home I have little free time.

Sugerencia: Complete your idea and give a specific reason. Use correct noun forms and add one supporting detail with a linking word. Avoid trailing off—finish the sentence clearly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because it is very large and many neighbourhoods lack green space. For example, additional parks would give residents places to relax and children somewhere safe to play.

Sugerencia: Clarify and simplify. Start with a clear topic sentence naming the park, then give a brief reason and a plan using correct grammar. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' correctly and avoid contradictory phrases such as 'every time I never'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would love to visit Green Park, which is one of the most popular parks near my home. I often plan to go on weekends because it has nice walking paths, but I usually cannot find the time; I hope to visit with my family soon.

× Yes, very much and me and my friend, his name is Abhishek, we went go to the park daily and we purchased the ice cream and enjoy very much.

✓ Yes, very much. My friend Abhishek and I used to go to the park every day, buy ice cream, and enjoy ourselves.

Multiple errors: subject order and pronoun use (Incorrect use of pronouns, ID 12) — 'me and my friend' should be 'my friend ... and I'; verb tense and aspect (Past tense issue, ID 5) — use 'used to go' or 'went' for habitual past; extra verb 'went go' is incorrect (Sentence structure errors, ID 26); word choice and parallel structure (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs / sentence structure, IDs 13 and 26) — 'purchased the ice cream and enjoy very much' should be 'buy ice cream and enjoy ourselves' to maintain parallel verbs and correct reflexive pronoun. Suggestion: use 'My friend Abhishek and I used to go to the park every day, buy ice cream, and enjoy ourselves.'

× Not really. In these days I am very busy and I don't have time because I get up early in the morning, then I am having my breakfast. After that I go to the office, then back to my home. After the office, then I go to the gym. After returning home, I don't have time to visit.

✓ Not really. These days I am very busy and I don't have time because I get up early, have breakfast, go to the office, return home, and then go to the gym. After returning home I don't have time to visit parks.

Problems: incorrect phrase 'In these days' (Incorrect use of prepositions/phrasing, ID 11) — use 'These days'; unnecessary progressive 'I am having my breakfast' (Present tense issue, ID 6) — simple present 'have breakfast' is correct for routines; sequence and redundancy issues (Sentence structure errors, ID 26) — streamline verbs into parallel simple present forms for habitual actions; missing object 'to visit' needs 'parks' or 'them' (Incorrect use of pronouns/ sentence structure, IDs 12 and 26). Suggestion: use a clear sequence with simple present for routines and include the object 'parks'.

× Yes, I really want to see more park in my city because my city is a very big city and I.

✓ Yes, I really want to see more parks in my city because it is very large.

Errors: singular/plural issue (ID 1) — 'more park' should be 'more parks'; sentence fragment (Sentence structure errors, ID 26) — 'and I.' is incomplete and should be removed or completed; repetition 'my city is a very big city' is redundant (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs, ID 13). Suggestion: use 'parks' and a concise clause like 'because it is very large.'

× Yes, my dream is one of the most popular park in my city.

✓ Yes, my dream is to visit one of the most popular parks in my city.

Errors: verb form/structure (Past tense issue not exactly but Sentence structure errors, ID 26) — 'my dream is one of the most popular park' is ungrammatical; missing infinitive to express desire and plural 'park' (Singular and plural issue, ID 1); correct phrase is 'my dream is to visit one of the most popular parks...'. Suggestion: include 'to visit' and use plural 'parks'.

× The name of Green Park is located by near my home and I try to go to the park in weekends but I every time I never go to the park.

✓ Green Park is located near my home and I try to go there on weekends, but I never go.

Errors: incorrect preposition 'by near' (Incorrect use of prepositions, ID 11) — use 'near'; article and noun phrase 'the name of Green Park is located' is wrong (Article errors / Sentence structure, IDs 22 and 26) — say 'Green Park is located near my home'; time expression 'in weekends' should be 'on weekends' (Incorrect use of prepositions, ID 11); double negative 'I every time I never go' is incorrect (Sentence structure/grammar, ID 26). Suggestion: simplify to 'I try to go there on weekends, but I never go.'

× So one day I will go on that park and with my family and I, I will expand some time.

✓ So one day I will go to that park with my family and spend some time there.

Errors: incorrect preposition 'go on that park' (Incorrect use of prepositions, ID 11) — use 'go to'; pronoun order 'with my family and I' is incorrect in object position (Incorrect use of pronouns, ID 12) — use 'with my family' or 'with my family and me' if needed; awkward verb 'expand some time' is wrong (Incorrect use of verbs / sentence structure, IDs 26 and 13) — use 'spend some time there'. Tense 'I will go' is fine for future. Suggestion: 'go to that park with my family and spend some time there.'