Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and clear. Start with a simple topic sentence answering the question, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use past tense consistently and avoid unclear phrases like "when I watch Child". Also keep it to fewer than five sentences and use linking words for coherence.

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often played on the swings and climbed trees with my friends, which made weekends very fun.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give a specific reason with a linking word. Replace vague phrase "and all" with concrete details about your schedule or preferences. Keep it concise and natural, within two or three sentences.

Ejemplo: Not really. These days I rarely visit parks because I work long hours during the week, and on weekends I usually rest at home or meet friends indoors.

Sugerencia: Clarify whether you mean you would like more parks or you cannot access them now. Start with a direct stance (Yes/No/Not sure), then explain briefly and specifically why, using linking words like "because" or "however". Avoid confusing phrasing like "I'm not able to see more parks."

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because the current green spaces are few and crowded, and additional parks would give residents more places to relax and exercise.

Sugerencia: This answer is unclear and contains irrelevant or incorrect phrases. State your position clearly (Yes/No) and give a specific example or reason. If you prefer mountains over parks, say so and explain briefly. Keep to one or two sentences and use correct vocabulary.

Ejemplo: No, I don't plan to visit parks specifically because I prefer going to mountains for hiking; I feel more relaxed in nature with trails and scenic views.

× When I watch Child, I love to go to parks.

✓ When I was a child, I loved going to parks.

The student used present tense 'watch' and capitalized 'Child' incorrectly; the intended meaning is past habitual action. Use past tense 'was' for 'a child' and past habitual 'loved going' (verb + -ing) to indicate repeated past activity. Also use the article 'a' before 'child'. Suggested improvement: Use correct time reference words (e.g., 'when I was a child') and match verbs to past habitual actions with '-ing' (loved going).

× Right now I don't like to go to parks because of busy schedules and all.

✓ Right now I don't like going to parks because of my busy schedule and so on.

Use present tense continuous preference: 'don't like going' (verb + -ing) is more natural for general dislikes. 'Busy schedules' should be singular 'my busy schedule' to refer to the student's own situation; 'and all' is informal — 'and so on' is clearer. Suggestion: use 'don't like going' and specify possessive 'my busy schedule'. Grammar IDs matched: 6 (Present tense issue) and 8 (Verb + -ing form).

× I'm not able to see more parks in my city because of a slow development in my area.

✓ I am not able to see more parks in my city because development in my area is slow.

The phrase 'a slow development' is awkward here; use uncountable noun 'development' and place adjective 'slow' after the verb for clarity. The modal 'I'm not able to' is acceptable but 'I cannot' could also work. Suggestion: use 'development in my area is slow' or 'there has been slow development in my area'. Grammar IDs matched: 4 (Modal verb usage) and 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions/article).

× No I don't like box as far as love mountain so I don't know any future goals to go to parks and all.

✓ No. I prefer mountains to urban parks, so I don't have any plans to visit parks in the future.

The original sentence has unclear vocabulary ('box'), incorrect comparative phrasing, and poor sentence structure. Use 'prefer X to Y' to compare preferences. 'Future goals to go to parks' is awkward; use 'plans to visit parks in the future'. Also add punctuation. Suggestion: use clear comparative structures ('prefer mountains to parks') and 'plans' for future intentions. Grammar IDs matched: 26 (Sentence structure errors) and 19 (Incorrect comparison object).