Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and incorrect tense/forms (use past simple). Use linking words if adding details.

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I used to visit a nearby park almost every day with my parents and older siblings, where we would play games and have picnics together.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer followed by a brief reason and one example. Use correct verb forms (simple present for habits) and avoid filler words. Use a linking word such as 'however' or 'but' to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Not really — I don't go to playgrounds anymore because they feel designed for children. However, I occasionally visit parks with friends for a picnic or with my family for a barbecue.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give specific reasons with clearer vocabulary. Avoid vague phrases and repetition. Use linking words (for example, 'because' and 'for example') and provide one concrete benefit.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like more parks in my city because they provide safe outdoor space for children to play and learn. For example, parks encourage physical activity and social interaction, which benefits both families and the wider community.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence and one or two specific reasons why. Use correct phrasing for future intentions (e.g., 'I would like to' or 'I hope to') and avoid tense errors. Add a linking phrase like 'because' to connect the reason.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would love to visit Disneyland in the USA in the future because it inspired me as a child. Many of the characters and shows I watched growing up are featured there, so it would be exciting to see them in person.

× When I was a child I would like to go to the parks every day.

✓ When I was a child I liked to go to the park every day.

The speaker describes a habitual action in the past, so the simple past tense 'liked' is appropriate rather than 'would like' which expresses a desire in the present. Also 'park' should be singular after 'the' when referring to parks in general use 'the park' or plural without 'the'. Use 'liked' to indicate past habit. Suggestion: Use simple past for past habits (I liked to/used to go).

× When I was a child I would like to go to the parks every day.

✓ When I was a child I liked to go to the parks every day.

If you keep 'parks' plural, keep the plural form but change the verb to past tense. However, native speakers often say 'the park' when referring to a local park. Ensure noun number matches intended meaning. Suggestion: Decide singular or plural contextually: 'to the park' for a specific local park, 'to parks' for parks in general.

× I was wishing to go past with my family and my older brother and sister.

✓ I wished to go out with my family and my older brother and sister.

The progressive past 'was wishing' is unnatural here for a simple desire; use simple past 'wished'. 'Go past' is incorrect in this context; likely intended 'go out' or 'go to the park'. Use correct verb 'wished' and correct phrasal verb 'go out' or 'go to the park'. Suggestion: Use simple past for past desires and correct prepositions for movement ('go to the park', 'go out with').

× No, not yet. I'm not liking to go to the parks and and and I'm not preferring to go because now I am older so the playgrounds over there will not make me enjoy it.

✓ No, not really. I don't like going to parks and I don't prefer going because now I am older, so the playgrounds there don't interest me.

Stative verbs like 'like' and 'prefer' are not used in progressive forms ('I'm not liking', 'I'm not preferring'). Use simple present negative: 'I don't like' and 'I don't prefer'. 'Will not make me enjoy it' is awkward; use 'don't interest me' or 'don't make me enjoy myself'. Also remove repeated words. Suggestion: Use simple present for states and preferences; avoid continuous with stative verbs; simplify phrasing for clarity.

× But only one time I will go to friends to do picnic or with a family to do a BBQ.

✓ But I might only go once to a friend's for a picnic or with my family for a BBQ.

The original mixes future 'will' with awkward expressions. Use 'might' or 'only once' to indicate limited future occurrence. Use correct possessive 'friend's' and noun forms 'a picnic' and 'a BBQ'. 'With a family' should be 'with my family'. Suggestion: Use modal verbs like 'might' for possibility and correct noun phrases ('go to a friend's house', 'have a BBQ with my family').

× That's all.

✓ That's all.

This short sentence is acceptable in spoken English to conclude a point. No grammatical correction needed. Suggestion: None.

× Yes, I like to see more parks in my city because parks are a good thing for enjoying especially especially for children.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because parks are good for enjoyment, especially for children.

Use 'would like' to express a preference or desire about the future. The phrase 'a good thing for enjoying' is awkward; use 'good for enjoyment' or 'good places for children to enjoy'. Avoid repeating words ('especially especially'). Suggestion: Use 'would like' for desires and concise noun phrases ('good for children').

× They will raise up with a good ideas inside the park and they will enjoy.

✓ They will grow up with good ideas from the park and they will enjoy themselves.

'Raise up' is incorrect here; children 'grow up'. 'a good ideas' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'good ideas' without 'a'. 'Inside the park' is unnecessary; use 'in the park' or 'from the park'. Add reflexive pronoun 'themselves' after 'enjoy'. Suggestion: Use correct collocations: 'grow up', 'good ideas', 'enjoy themselves'.

× So I would like to be more parks in my city and my country and also it's a good.

✓ So I would like there to be more parks in my city and country, because they are good.

The original lacks a proper clause: 'I would like to be more parks' is ungrammatical. Use 'I would like there to be more parks'. 'It's a good' is incomplete; specify 'they are good' or 'it's good for people'. Suggestion: Use 'I would like there to be...' to express desire for existence and complete comparative statements.

× Yeah, I'm liking to travel to USA and visit Disneyland Park.

✓ Yeah, I would like to travel to the USA and visit Disneyland Park.

Again, 'like' should not be in continuous form for preference; use 'would like' to express desire. Also include the article 'the' before 'USA'. Suggestion: Use 'would like to' for future desires; include articles for country abbreviations ('the USA').

× It's my dream and I hope that I can be traveling to there because there are many cartoons or series which I was watching in my young age, so I would like to visit them.

✓ It's my dream and I hope that I can travel there because there are many cartoons and shows that I watched when I was young, so I would like to see them.

Don't use 'be traveling to there'; use 'travel there' or 'be able to travel there'. 'Cartoons or series' prefers 'cartoons and shows'. Use simple past 'watched' for completed past actions and 'when I was young' not 'in my young age'. 'Visit them' is ambiguous; 'see them' (the parks/attractions) is clearer. Suggestion: Use correct verb forms and prepositions ('travel there'), correct conjunctions ('and'), and natural time expressions ('when I was young').