Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Speak in present or past tense consistently, make a clear topic sentence, reduce redundancy, and add specific details. Use linking words (for example, 'because', 'so', 'and') correctly and limit your answer to about 2–4 sentences. Focus on one or two vivid memories (who, what, when) and avoid unnecessary words like 'yesterday' when talking about childhood.

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because I used to go there every evening with my friends. We played tag, ate snacks, and I especially enjoyed swinging on the swings because it felt exciting and free.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence and give specific reasons. Use coherent linking (e.g., 'because', 'so', 'and') and correct grammar ('I still like', 'they are peaceful'). Avoid repeating words like 'now' and be concise. Mention particular activities or aspects you enjoy (walking, exercise, peaceful atmosphere).

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they remind me of my childhood and offer a peaceful place to relax. I often walk or sit under trees to read, and I like hearing birds and seeing families enjoying the area.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear opinion and give specific, coherent reasons using correct vocabulary (e.g., 'dirty', 'crowded') and linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Offer a brief suggestion or contrast (for example, improving maintenance rather than adding more parks). Keep sentences simple and grammatically correct.

Ejemplo: I would not want more parks right now because many existing parks are poorly maintained and overcrowded. Instead, the city should improve cleaning and security so current parks are more pleasant and safe for everyone.

Sugerencia: Be specific about the park and why you want to visit it. Organize your answer with a topic sentence and supporting details (location, features, activities). Avoid unclear phrases like 'what are the obstacles?' and use correct nouns (e.g., 'rock formations' or 'climbing structures'). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit Rock Garden in Chandigarh because it has unique sculptures made from recycled materials. I want to see the creative rock formations and the artistic layout, and perhaps take photographs of the sculptures.

× Yesterday like to going park when I was child because that time with my friends I used to play in the evening and dad is a joyful feeling for me and I like to do swings in my park.

✓ Yesterday I liked going to the park when I was a child because at that time I used to play with my friends in the evening and it gave me a joyful feeling; I liked swinging in the park.

Multiple past tense errors and other problems: 'like' should be past 'liked' to match 'yesterday' and 'when I was a child'; 'going park' requires article and gerund object: 'going to the park'; 'when I was child' needs article 'a child'; word order for 'used to play with my friends' and time expression 'in the evening' should be placed after the verb; 'dad is a joyful feeling' is incorrect meaning and grammar — likely intended 'it gave me a joyful feeling'; 'I like to do swings' should be 'I liked swinging' or 'I liked to swing'. Suggestion: keep past tense consistently and use correct articles and verb forms, and simplify clauses for clarity.

× Yes, I do still like to going to parks now because now I remember my childhood activities when I was doing that time and I love to going there because they are so many people and they are the peace nature of their.

✓ Yes, I still like going to parks because they remind me of my childhood activities; I love going there because there are many people and the parks are peaceful.

Errors: 'do still like to going' incorrectly mixes 'do' with infinitive + -ing; use 'still like going' (verb + -ing). 'when I was doing that time' is ungrammatical — use 'they remind me of my childhood' or omit. 'I love to going' should be 'I love going' (verb + -ing). 'they are so many people' incorrect word order; use 'there are many people'. 'they are the peace nature of their' is meaningless and grammatically wrong — likely 'the parks are peaceful' or 'it is peaceful'. Suggestion: use noun 'parks' as subject and 'there are' for existence, and keep gerund forms after 'like'/'love'.

× No, I don't like to see more park in my city because most of the parks are now The Dirty environment and so crowd there because so many people are there for their time pass.

✓ No, I don't want to see more parks in my city because most of the parks are now dirty and crowded; many people go there to pass the time.

Errors: 'like to see more park' should be 'want to see more parks' (plural and appropriate verb). 'The Dirty environment' incorrect capitalization and article; 'dirty' should be adjective modifying 'parks' or 'the environment'. 'so crowd there' should be 'crowded' (adjective). 'so many people are there for their time pass' is non-idiomatic — use 'many people go there to pass the time'. Suggestion: correct pluralization, use adjectives properly and choose idiomatic expressions.

× Yes, I like to go to the Rock park which is situated in the Chandigarh. I love to go there and want to see the what are the obstacles? They are made by the human.

✓ Yes, I would like to go to Rock Park, which is situated in Chandigarh. I would love to go there and see what obstacles have been made by humans.

Errors: 'the Rock park' and 'the Chandigarh' misuse definite article — proper names like Chandigarh don't need 'the'; park name capitalization and article should be 'Rock Park'. 'I like to go' is acceptable but 'would like' fits future intention. 'want to see the what are the obstacles?' is incorrect word order and unnecessary 'the' — use 'see what obstacles there are' or 'see what obstacles have been made'. 'They are made by the human' is awkward; use passive 'have been made by humans' or 'made by people'. Suggestion: correct articles with place names, fix word order in questions/clauses, and use plural 'humans' or 'people'.