Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your answer grammatical, concise and add one specific memory or detail. Use past tense for childhood and avoid filler words like “etc.” Also link sentences with a simple connector.

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks when I was small because I often played hide-and-seek and chased my friends around the big oak tree. Because the park had a sandpit and swings, we spent hours there and I still remember how excited we were on sunny afternoons.

Sugerencia: Keep answers natural and use consistent tense. Combine ideas with linking words and give a brief reason or feeling about current visits. Avoid repeating “visit the park” too often.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I go to the park about twice a week — usually after dinner on weekdays, and I walk there with my parents at the weekend because it helps us relax and catch up.

Sugerencia: Express your opinion clearly and support it with a specific reason or example. Use correct article and plural forms, and add a linking word to strengthen coherence.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would. I think the government should build more parks in the city because parks with trees and green space help reduce stress and improve air quality — for example, a small park near my office makes lunchtime walks much more pleasant.

Sugerencia: Correct grammar (park, not part) and tense (have gone/since childhood). Provide a brief future-oriented statement or reason even if you prefer your local park, and link ideas with a connector.

Ejemplo: Honestly, I don't have a specific new park in mind because I love the small park near my home; I have been going there since childhood and it holds many memories. However, I would like to visit a large botanical garden someday to see more plant species.

× I like going to parks when I'm small because I can spend time with my friends there chasing each other, playing hide and seek, etc.

✓ I liked going to parks when I was small because I could spend time with my friends there chasing each other, playing hide-and-seek, etc.

The candidate uses present tense (I like, I'm small, can) to refer to past childhood actions. Use past simple (liked, was) and past ability (could). Also use hyphens in compound noun 'play-and-seek' -> 'play-and-seek' is wrong; correct is 'play-and-seek' is incorrect; use 'play-and-seek' — actually use 'playing hide-and-seek'. Replace 'playing hide and seek' with 'playing hide-and-seek'. Use consistent past tense to match the time reference. Suggestion: Use past simple for habits in the past: 'I liked... I was... I could...'.

× Yes I do. I visit the park twice a week and usually I visit the park after a meal at night and in the weekend I will spend some time walking with my parents in the park.

✓ Yes, I do. I visit the park twice a week; usually I go to the park after an evening meal, and on weekends I spend time walking with my parents there.

Sentence mixes tenses and has awkward prepositions. 'After a meal at night' is better as 'after an evening meal'. Use 'on weekends' instead of 'in the weekend'. Use consistent present simple for regular habits: 'I visit/go', 'I spend'. Also add commas or semicolons for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'on weekends' and prefer 'go to the park' for naturalness; keep present simple for routine actions.

× Yes I do. I think government should build more parks in my city because park have many trees there and plants.

✓ Yes, I do. I think the government should build more parks in my city because parks have many trees and plants.

'Government' as an institution requires the definite article 'the government'. 'Park have' is plural/singular mismatch: 'park' (singular) with 'have' is incorrect; either use singular 'a park has' or plural 'parks have'. Also 'there' is unnecessary. Use 'parks have many trees and plants'. Suggestion: Add 'the' before 'government' and ensure subject-verb agreement: 'parks have' or 'a park has'.

× These plants can calm people down and relieve their stress.

✓ These plants can help calm people down and relieve their stress.

The original is mostly correct but sounds a little abrupt; adding 'help' makes the verb phrase more natural. 'Relieve their stress' is acceptable; 'help calm' is a common collocation. Suggestion: Use 'help calm' for natural phrasing: 'These plants can help calm people down and relieve their stress.'

× To be honest, I don't have any parts that I would like to visit in the future because I love the park nearby my home.

✓ To be honest, I don't have any parks that I would like to visit in the future because I love the park near my home.

'Parts' is a typo for 'parks'. Also 'nearby my home' is nonstandard; use 'near my home' or 'the park near my home'. Ensure noun matches intended meaning. Suggestion: Replace 'parts' with 'parks' and use 'near my home'.

× I go there since my childhood and that part contains many memories of mine.

✓ I have gone there since my childhood, and that park contains many of my memories.

'I go there since my childhood' incorrectly uses simple present with 'since' which requires present perfect: 'have gone' or 'have been going'. Also 'part' is a typo for 'park'. 'Contains many memories of mine' is awkward; use 'contains many of my memories' or better 'holds many memories for me'. Suggestion: Use present perfect continuous or present perfect ('I have been going there since my childhood' or 'I have gone there since my childhood') and correct 'part' to 'park'; prefer 'holds many memories for me' for natural expression.