Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and grammatically accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then give one or two specific supporting details. Correct tense and verb forms (e.g., 'I wasn't used to going out' / 'she didn't allow me'). Avoid redundancy.

Ejemplo: No, I didn’t like going to parks as a child. My mother was very strict and rarely let me go out, so I spent most of my free time at home reading or playing indoors.

Sugerencia: Provide a direct topic sentence and vary vocabulary. Use linking words to connect ideas (e.g., 'because', 'for example', 'so'). Combine similar sentences to avoid repetition ('I really go' and 'I really like'). Add one specific example of an activity you do in parks to enrich content.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy going to parks now because I like meeting friends and being outdoors. For example, on weekends I often go to the park to have a picnic or play football with my friends.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and avoid unclear or repetitive phrasing. Fix grammatical errors and clarify reasons: explain why more parks would help given your busy schedule. Use linking words ('because', 'so') and give a specific suggestion about what kind of parks you'd like.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like more parks in my city because they would give busy people like me easy places to relax near home. For example, small neighborhood parks with benches and exercise equipment would be convenient for a short break after work.

Sugerencia: Be more specific and avoid vague endings like 'and that's it.' Start with a clear statement of intention, then give concrete reasons and examples of places or features you want to see. Use correct conditional structure ('If I had the chance, I would visit parks in other countries').

Ejemplo: Yes, if I had the chance I would visit parks in other countries to see different landscape designs and cultural features. For example, I would love to visit Japan’s traditional gardens and large urban parks in Europe to compare their layouts and plant varieties.

× When I was a child, I was not used to go outside because my mother was too strict and every time I tried to ask her if I am allowed to go out, she's not allowing me.

✓ When I was a child, I was not used to going outside because my mother was too strict, and every time I tried to ask her if I was allowed to go out, she would not allow me.

Mix of past-tense forms and incorrect verb patterns. 'Used to' requires the -ing form when followed by a verb in this structure: 'used to going' or better 'not used to going'. The reported permission should be in past tense: 'if I was allowed'. 'She's not allowing me' mixes present with past context; change to past habitual 'she would not allow me' or 'she did not allow me'. Also add a comma before the conjunction for clarity.

× Now that I am already an adult, I can say that I really go.

✓ Now that I am an adult, I can say that I often go to parks.

Awkward and vague verb 'I really go' — 'really' does not suit simple activity frequency. Use present simple 'often go' or 'go to parks' to express habitual action in present. Removing 'already' sounds more natural: 'now that I am an adult'. Ensure verb fits context of frequency.

× I really like going to parks because I like being around with more people, especially with my friends.

✓ I really like going to parks because I like being around more people, especially my friends.

Do not use 'around with' — 'be around people' is correct. Also 'especially with my friends' is redundant; use 'especially my friends'. Preposition use and redundancy corrected for natural English.

× For example, when I have my free time, I always ask my friends to go to the park.

✓ For example, when I have free time, I always ask my friends to go to the park.

Article 'my' before 'free time' is unnecessary in this general habitual context; 'have free time' is more natural. Tense and aspect are correct (present simple for habitual action), so only minor wording adjusted.

× Yes, I would love to see different parks in our city because as an adult I am too busy with my work.

✓ Yes, I would love to have different parks in our city because as an adult I am too busy with my work.

The original 'see different parks in our city' is possible, but context asks 'Would you like to see more parks in your city?' The intended meaning is desire for more parks to exist; use 'have different parks' to express wanting more parks in the city. 'See' could imply visiting rather than wanting them in the city. Grammar is otherwise fine.

× I don't have enough time to go to to go anywhere even though I have my long day off.

✓ I don't have enough time to go anywhere, even on my long days off.

Repeated phrase 'to go to to go' is an error. Also 'even though I have my long day off' is awkward; use 'even on my long days off' for natural expression. Plural 'days off' matches habitual reference; punctuation improves readability.

× So if I would have a chance to go to different parties.

✓ So I would like to have a chance to visit different parks.

Sentence is incomplete and contains wrong word 'parties' instead of 'parks'. 'If I would have' is ungrammatical in conditional; use 'I would like to have a chance' or 'If I had a chance' to form a correct conditional. Also change to 'visit different parks' to match context.

× Yes, if I would be given a chance to go to parks in the future, I would go to park in different countries because I would love to see different designs, structures of parks and that's it.

✓ Yes, if I were given the chance to visit parks in the future, I would go to parks in different countries because I would love to see different designs and structures of parks.

Use correct conditional: 'if I were given' or 'if I were to be given' (subjunctive) rather than 'if I would be given'. 'Go to park' needs an article or plural: 'go to parks' or 'visit parks'. Remove informal 'and that's it'. Also join 'designs and structures' with 'and' and avoid comma splice.