Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be clear and grammatical: start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific details using correct verb forms and linking words. Avoid short fragments and repetition. Focus on concrete memories (what you played, who you were with, and a specific snack) and use past tense consistently.

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often played on the swings and slides with my friends, and we would buy fried dumplings from a nearby stall. Those afternoons were fun because we raced each other and shared snacks.

Sugerencia: Give a direct response in the present tense, then give two specific reasons with linking words. Fix grammar (e.g., 'go cycling' or 'go to parks') and use cohesive devices like 'because' or 'for example'. Be specific about what you enjoy in the scenery.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks, especially when I want to relax or have a picnic with my family. I like them because they have many tall trees and well-kept flower beds, and I often ride a bike along the paths to unwind.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and avoid repetition. Explain one or two clear reasons with linking words such as 'because' and 'so' and give a specific example of what new features you'd like (e.g., playgrounds, lakes). Keep to two or three sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they offer new places to explore and relax. For example, I would like parks with lakes and walking trails where people can exercise and families can spend time together.

Sugerencia: Be specific about a destination and give one or two reasons. Use future forms correctly (e.g., 'I would like to visit'). Avoid vague phrases like 'your kind of'. Mention a concrete cultural or natural feature you want to see.

Ejemplo: I would like to visit parks abroad, for example Japan's national parks, because I want to see different plants and traditional garden styles. I hope to experience local nature trails and learn about how people there design public green spaces.

× Yes, I remember when I was a child, I like to play and slides in the swing and.

✓ Yes, I remember when I was a child, I liked to play on the swings and the slides.

The sentence refers to past habits, so the verb should be in the past tense ('liked' not 'like'). Prepositions and noun forms were incorrect: use 'play on the swings' and 'the slides' for clarity. Also remove the extra 'and'.

× I remember playing with my childhood friends and buying the fan kind of foods in food store.

✓ I remember playing with my childhood friends and buying many kinds of snacks at the food stall.

The phrase 'the fan kind of foods' is unclear and ungrammatical. Use 'many kinds of snacks' to indicate variety. Use 'at the food stall' or 'in the food store'; 'at' is more natural for a stall. This fixes quantifier and noun choice.

× Yeah, still like going to bikes now, especially when I want to relax and having a picnic with my loved ones.

✓ Yes, I still like riding bikes now, especially when I want to relax and have a picnic with my loved ones.

Maintain present tense consistency: 'still like' is fine but 'going to bikes' is incorrect; use 'riding bikes'. After 'want to' use the base verb 'have', not the -ing form 'having'.

× Also I like the scenery, like a lot of trees and different kind of.

✓ Also I like the scenery, such as many trees and different kinds of plants.

'A lot of trees' is informal but acceptable; better is 'many trees'. 'Different kind of' is incomplete; use 'different kinds of plants' or 'different kinds of scenery' to be grammatical and specific.

× Yeah, I would like to see more parks in my city because I like exploring new things.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because I enjoy exploring new things.

'Yeah' to 'Yes' is optional; main issue is style: 'I like exploring' is present tense and acceptable, but 'I enjoy exploring' sounds more natural. No tense conflict here; change is stylistic.

× I I like traveling too and I want to see a different kind of landscape and I want to experience a different things.

✓ I like traveling too, and I want to see different kinds of landscapes and experience different things.

Remove the repeated 'I'. Use plural 'different kinds of landscapes' and 'different things' (not 'a different things'). Streamline to avoid repeating 'I want to'. This fixes sentence structure and plurality.

× Probably in the parks abroad, I want to experience a new culture, a new kind of scenery and your kind of landscape and you kind of environment and try new things.

✓ Probably in parks abroad, I want to experience new cultures, new kinds of scenery and different kinds of environments, and try new things.

Avoid using 'your' and 'you' when referring generally to foreign places; use neutral nouns ('different kinds of environments'). Make nouns plural and parallel ('new cultures', 'new kinds of scenery') for grammatical agreement and clearer meaning.