Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence in the past tense, use correct grammar and concise phrasing, and add one specific supporting detail. Use linking words to make the answer coherent. Avoid redundancy and keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: No, I didn’t enjoy going to parks as a child. I preferred playing video games at home because there were no good parks near my house, so I usually stayed inside and played with my friends online.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and briefly, using present perfect or present simple as appropriate. Correct verb forms and clearer linking words (e.g., "because", "so") will help. Mention one specific reason and keep to 2–3 sentences without repetition.

Ejemplo: Not really. I rarely visit parks now because I’m busy preparing for exams, and I usually relax by watching web series at home in the evenings.

Sugerencia: Give a direct opinion followed by one or two specific reasons. Use correct articles and plural forms, and link your ideas (e.g., "because", "so that"). Be concise and avoid awkward phrases like "request charge".

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. I think my city needs more parks because children would have safe places to exercise, which would improve their fitness and overall health.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct statement and include two specific details (what makes the park attractive and when you might go). Use natural expressions and correct word order. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I’d like to visit the Rose Garden in Chandigarh because friends tell me it’s very large and offers many free activities. I hope to go there on a weekend when I have more free time.

× No I don't like go to parks when I was child as I was more indulged towards the video games and there were no any good parks nearby my house so I prefer staying at home and do some another activities.

✓ No, I didn't like going to parks when I was a child because I was more interested in video games and there weren't any good parks near my house, so I preferred staying at home and doing other activities.

Mix of present and past tenses and verb form errors. The speaker refers to childhood (past), so use past tense: 'didn't like' and 'preferred'. Use the gerund after 'like' and 'prefer' when describing activities: 'going', 'doing'. 'When I was child' needs the article 'a child'. 'More indulged towards' is awkward; use 'more interested in'. 'There were no any' is incorrect; use 'there weren't any' or 'there were no'. Use 'near my house' rather than 'nearby my house'. Provide consistent past tense and correct verb forms.

× No, as I told previous that I did not go to park when I was a child and now I have so much hectic schedule nowadays as I am preparing for my exams.

✓ No, as I said earlier, I did not go to parks when I was a child, and now I have a very hectic schedule because I am preparing for my exams.

Tense and word choice errors. 'Told previous' should be 'said earlier'. Maintain past tense for childhood: 'did not go to parks'. Use 'parks' plural or 'the park'. 'So much hectic schedule nowadays' is ungrammatical; use 'a very hectic schedule' and avoid redundant 'now' and 'nowadays'. Use 'because' for reason. Keep tense consistency.

× So I did not go to parks anymore and I prefer washing web series which are more interesting rather than visiting the parks.

✓ So I don't go to parks anymore and I prefer watching web series, which are more interesting than visiting parks.

Incorrect verb and tense. 'Washing' is a misspelling of 'watching'. If the habit continues, use present simple: 'I don't go to parks anymore' and 'I prefer watching'. Use 'than' for comparisons and avoid unnecessary articles: 'visiting parks'. Use commas to separate clauses.

× Yes definitely as they are very less park in my city.

✓ Yes, definitely, because there are very few parks in my city.

Incorrect pluralization and quantifier. 'Very less park' is incorrect; use 'very few parks' or 'few parks'. 'They are' is incorrect reference; 'there are' introduces existence. Use 'because' for reason and commas for clarity.

× I would like to request charge that they should introduce more new parks for the young kids that they can indulge with physical activities rather than staying at home.

✓ I would like to request that the authorities should introduce more parks for young children so they can take part in physical activities rather than stay at home.

Pronoun and word choice errors. 'Request charge' is wrong; use 'request that the authorities' or 'ask the local government'. 'Young kids' can be 'young children'. 'Indulge with' is incorrect; use 'take part in' or 'engage in'. Use 'so they can' to show purpose and 'stay at home' (base form) after 'rather than'.

× This will increase their stamina and more another aspect of health.

✓ This will increase their stamina and improve other aspects of their health.

Awkward and incorrect phrasing. 'More another aspect' is ungrammatical; use 'other aspects' or 'various aspects'. Use 'improve' to show positive change. Add possessive 'their health' for clarity.

× Yes, I would like to visit Chandigarh Park as I have listened about it from my friends that it is very big park in Chandigarh and it has various activities in it which are free of cost and we can go anytime as it is open 24 hours.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit Chandigarh Park because I have heard about it from my friends; they say it is a very big park and has various activities that are free, and we can go anytime because it is open 24 hours.

Tense and phrasing corrections. 'Have listened about it' is incorrect; use 'have heard about it'. 'Very big park' needs an article: 'a very big park'. 'Various activities in it which are free of cost' is wordy; simplify to 'various activities that are free'. Use 'because' for reason and maintain consistent verb forms. Semicolons or commas help separate clauses for clarity.