Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Keep answers clear, grammatically correct and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence (e.g., Yes, I liked going to parks as a child.), then add one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Avoid repetition and correct tense and singular/plural agreement.

Ejemplo: Yes, I liked going to parks as a child. For example, the local park had a large playground and many children my age, so I often made friends there and spent entire afternoons playing. Because of the open space and friendly atmosphere, I visited the park many times each week.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and use correct tense and pronouns. Begin with a clear topic sentence (e.g., Not really, I don't go to parks much now.) Provide one specific reason and one contrasting detail using linking words like because or instead. Avoid unclear phrases and filler words.

Ejemplo: Not really, I don't go to parks much now because I usually study at the library and focus on my graduation. Also, I rarely have company to go with me, so instead I prefer quiet places where I can concentrate.

Sugerencia: Give a concise opinion followed by two clear, specific reasons linked logically. Use correct grammar and precise vocabulary (e.g., benefits, socialise, relax) and avoid invented words like “envelope time.”

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like the city to build more parks because they provide green space that improves people’s health and air quality. In addition, parks give young people places to socialise and gain confidence through group activities.

Sugerencia: Be specific and factual, and organise your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by concrete reasons. Avoid exaggeration and unclear phrases. Correct noun names and use linking words such as for example or because to explain why you want to visit.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit a famous park in the United States called (for example) Central Park in New York or a large amusement park like Six Flags. I want to go because they offer unique attractions, beautiful scenery, and many rides that I would enjoy.

× In my childhood I love to visit parks because the environment I was getting over there, there were hundreds of child who are made friends with them and the environment they were providing was up to the mark and they had a very vast play area.

✓ In my childhood I loved visiting parks because of the atmosphere there; there were hundreds of children who made friends with each other, the facilities were good, and they had a very large play area.

The student uses present tense 'love' and inconsistent forms when describing past habitual actions. Use simple past ('loved') for past habits. 'Visit parks' should be 'visiting parks' after 'loved'. 'Child' should be plural 'children' (singular/plural issue). 'Are made friends with them' is incorrect; use 'made friends with each other' to describe mutual past action. 'Up to the mark' is informal; 'good' or 'adequate' is clearer. 'Very vast' is redundant; use 'very large' or 'vast'. Suggestions: Use simple past for past habits, plural nouns for groups, and consistent verb forms.

× So in my childhood I have visit parks many times.

✓ So in my childhood I visited parks many times.

The student uses present perfect 'have visit' with incorrect verb form 'visit' instead of past participle 'visited'. For a finished past period ('in my childhood') simple past 'visited' is appropriate. Suggestion: use 'visited' or 'have visited' only when referring to life experience without a finished time frame; here use 'visited'.

× Who well as now I'm adult so I don't like to go to park because I have no no one with me.

✓ Well, now that I'm an adult, I don't like going to the park because I don't have anyone to go with me.

The sentence has wrong pronoun 'Who' and repeated 'no no one'. Use 'now that I'm an adult' to connect clauses. 'Go to park' needs the definite article 'the park' for a specific activity. Use 'going' after 'like'. Correct pronoun/phrasing: 'anyone to go with me'. Suggestion: clean filler words, use 'anyone' and proper article.

× So who can I go and have my company?

✓ So who can I go with to keep me company?

Sentence is ungrammatical and awkward. 'Go and have my company' is incorrect; idiomatic expression is 'go with someone to keep me company' or 'have someone for company'. Reorder prepositional phrase: 'go with' + person, and use 'keep me company'.

× So for now and when I've been young so I I avoid to go to parks rather than go to library and study for my graduation.

✓ So now and when I was young, I avoided going to parks and preferred to go to the library to study for my degree.

Mixed tenses: 'for now and when I've been young' is incorrect. Use 'now' and past reference 'when I was young'. 'Avoid to go' is ungrammatical; 'avoid' is followed by gerund 'going'. 'Rather than go to library' needs article 'the library' and better verb 'preferred'. 'Study for my graduation' is awkward; 'study for my degree' or 'to graduate' is clearer.

× So yes I have one to go to.

✓ So yes, I have one I would like to visit.

Original sentence is vague and ungrammatical. 'Have one to go to' should specify 'one I would like to visit' or 'one I want to go to'. Suggestion: make the object clear and use appropriate infinitive or relative clause.

× Yes being an adult and saying the youngster I I would like that city has has to build more parks for their betterment for to give them a good environment and also to have chance to communicate with others people so it will boost their confidence and they will have a envelope time to spend with them.

✓ Yes, as an adult speaking about youngsters, I would like the city to build more parks for their benefit, to give them a better environment and opportunities to interact with other people; this will boost their confidence and give them enjoyable time to spend.

Multiple issues: 'saying the youngster' should be 'speaking about youngsters' (pronoun/word choice). 'I would like that city has has to build' is ungrammatical; use 'I would like the city to build'. Article errors and repetition 'has has'. 'For their betterment for to give them' is incorrect phrasing; use 'for their benefit, to give them'. 'Chance to communicate with others people' should be 'opportunities to interact with other people'. 'Envelope time' is incorrect word choice; use 'enjoyable time'. Suggestion: simplify clauses, use infinitive 'to build', and correct noun phrases.

× Using America, there's Joe Aladdin Park, which is a huge park and the number one park in the whole world.

✓ In America, there's Joy Aladdin Park, which is a huge park and one of the best parks in the world.

'Using America' is incorrect preposition; use 'In America'. Proper noun likely 'Joy' not 'Joe', verify name. 'Number one park in the whole world' is exaggerated; 'one of the best parks in the world' is more natural. Article 'the number one park' is possible but sounds absolute; keep neutral. Suggestion: use correct prepositions and idiomatic expressions.

× I wish, and I had a wish list in which I want to go to that park and enjoy every single ride over there because it has a massive, massive growth in their country and the people are crazy.

✓ I wish to visit it, and I have a wish list that includes that park; I want to go there and enjoy every ride because it is very popular in that country and people love it.

Mixed tenses: 'I wish, and I had a wish list' mixes present and past. Use present 'I have a wish list'. 'I want to go to that park' is fine but 'over there' is redundant. 'Has a massive, massive growth in their country' is unclear; likely meant 'is very popular' or 'has grown massively'. 'People are crazy' is colloquial/ambiguous; 'people love it' is clearer. Suggestion: keep tense consistent, use clear verbs like 'is popular' and avoid slang.