Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your answer more natural and correct grammar, give a clear topic sentence, and avoid vague phrases like "and so on." Add one specific detail or memory and use linking words to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often visited with my parents, where we enjoyed the fresh breeze and walked among the green trees and colorful flowers. For example, I remember feeding ducks at the pond, which was always a highlight of our outings.

Sugerencia: Improve grammar and clarity (subject-verb agreement), give a concise topic sentence, and explain briefly why parks are less accessible where you live. Use a linking word to connect reasons.

Ejemplo: I still enjoy going to parks, but it is difficult at the moment because I have recently moved to Dubai. Consequently, I find there are fewer public parks nearby, so I rarely have the chance to visit them.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear opinion, fix small grammar and word order issues, and add a specific benefit or example to support your view. Use linking words like "because" and "for example."

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in Dubai because residents need green spaces for relaxation. For example, small neighborhood parks would give families a safe place to walk, children a playground to play in, and everyone a spot to enjoy fresh air.

Sugerencia: Make the response more direct and correct repetition and tense issues. Give a short reason or condition and use linking words like "however" or "but."

Ejemplo: I don't have a particular park in mind at the moment, but I would certainly go if a friend invited me. For instance, if a colleague suggests a weekend walk in a nearby park, I'd be happy to join.

× 'We can bridge the wind there, see the green trees, beautiful flowers and so on.'

✓ 'We could feel the breeze there, see the green trees, beautiful flowers, and so on.'

'can bridge the wind' is ungrammatical and uses the wrong verb and tense. The student refers to past habitual experiences in childhood, so 'could' or 'were able to' is appropriate. Also 'feel the breeze' is the correct collocation instead of 'bridge the wind'. Add a comma before the final item in the list for clarity.'

× 'I like to go to parks now but is not realistic because now I'm moving to Dubai.'

✓ 'I like to go to parks now, but it is not realistic because I am moving to Dubai.'

'is not realistic' lacks a subject; English requires an explicit subject ('it'). Also 'I'm moving' is fine for present continuous, but avoid repeating 'now'. Use commas to join clauses.'

× 'There are so few parks here.'

✓ 'There are very few parks here.'

'so few' is not wrong but in this context 'very few' is more natural. This is a stylistic improvement rather than a strict grammar fix; it clarifies the degree quantifier.'

× 'I wish I could see more parks in Dubai because residents should have place to take a walk, feel the breeze, see the beautiful flowers and trees and enjoy a good time with family members.'

✓ 'I wish there were more parks in Dubai because residents should have a place to take a walk, feel the breeze, see the beautiful flowers and trees, and enjoy a good time with family members.'

'I wish I could see more parks' is acceptable, but for a general wish about the city 'I wish there were more parks' is more natural (subjunctive). Also 'have place' is missing the article 'a'. Add commas to separate list items. Use 'were' for hypothetical / contrary-to-fact wish.'

× 'To be honest, up to now I don't really want to go to the specific park in the future, but if someone invites me to take a walk in the park with them I'll surely I will go.'

✓ 'To be honest, up to now I don't really want to go to any specific park in the future, but if someone invites me to take a walk in a park with them, I will surely go.'

'the specific park' is awkward; use 'any specific park'. The sentence contains a redundancy 'I'll surely I will go' — remove the duplicate and keep one prediction 'I will surely go'. Add commas for clarity and use 'a park' for a non-specific park.'}]}]}{