Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Jawaban Anda mengulangi pertanyaan penguji alih-alih menjawab. Anda harus langsung memberikan jawaban jelas (ya/tidak) dan menambahkan satu atau dua kalimat pendukung. Gunakan kalimat topik lalu detail spesifik, serta konektor jika perlu. Jaga panjang maksimal 5 kalimat.

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often went there with my parents and siblings to play on the swings and have picnics. Because the parks were close to our home, I could visit them after school, which made them an important part of my childhood.

Sugerencia: Sama seperti sebelumnya, Anda mengulangi pertanyaan tanpa memberikan jawaban. Jawab langsung, lalu beri alasan singkat dan contoh. Gunakan linking words seperti "because" atau "however" untuk koherensi.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks now because they help me relax and exercise. For example, I usually go jogging there on weekends and sometimes meet friends for a walk.

Sugerencia: Jawaban ini bagus karena langsung menjawab dan memberikan alasan serta contoh, tetapi ada beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa dan kata yang tidak tepat (mis: "exchange", "make is air server families"). Perbaiki tata bahasa, gunakan kosakata yang relevan (mis: "socialising", "make it easier for families"), dan jaga kalimat singkat serta jelas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because we need more green spaces for relaxation and socialising. For example, new parks near residential areas would make it easier for families to spend time outdoors and enjoy fresh air.

Sugerencia: Jawaban mengandung beberapa kesalahan kata dan struktur (mis: "the era", missing words, plural/singular). Jawab jelas, sebutkan nama tempat atau jenis taman, jelaskan alasan dengan detail spesifik (misalnya atraksi atau kegiatan) dan gunakan linking words. Batasi hingga 3–4 kalimat efektif.

Ejemplo: I would like to visit a famous riverside park in the future because it has interesting traditional markets and many local restaurants. I could spend a whole day exploring the stalls and trying local food, and then relax by the river in the evening.

× I would like to see more parks in my city because we need more green space for relaxation and exchange. For example, new parks near residential areas would make is air server families to spend time outdoors.

✓ I would like to see more parks in my city because we need more green space for relaxation and socializing. For example, new parks near residential areas would make it easier for families to spend time outdoors.

The sentence contains several issues: 1) 'exchange' is misused; 'socializing' or 'social interaction' fits the context (word choice). 2) 'is air server' appears to be a typographical/mistranscription error; the intended phrase is 'it easier'. Replace with 'it easier' to express facilitation. 3) 'families' is correct plural. Overall fix: use 'socializing' for clarity and 'make it easier for families' to correct the pronoun and verb phrase. Suggestion: proofread for typos and choose collocations like 'make it easier for someone to do something'.

× I would like to visit the era in the future because I it is interesting traditional markets and many local restaurant.

✓ I would like to visit the area in the future because it has interesting traditional markets and many local restaurants.

Multiple problems: 1) 'era' is incorrect word choice; 'area' likely intended (vocabulary). 2) 'I it is interesting' is ungrammatical: extra pronoun 'I' should be removed and subject properly used ('it has' or 'there are'). 3) 'traditional markets' needs a verb; 'has' or 'there are' works. 4) 'restaurant' should be plural 'restaurants' to match 'many'. The corrected sentence uses 'it has interesting traditional markets and many local restaurants.' Suggestion: ensure subject and verb agree and remove extra words; use plural nouns after quantifier 'many'.