Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and clear: start with a simple topic sentence answering the question, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and incorrect tense/forms. Use linking words (e.g., 'because', 'so', 'and') correctly. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child. I often played on the swings and slides at a small park near my house because it was safe and convenient. As a result, I visited the park almost every day after school.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, correct verb forms and avoid repetition. Add a specific reason or activity to make the reply more informative. Use a linking word to connect ideas (e.g., 'because' or 'so'). Keep it concise (2–3 sentences).

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks when I have free time because I like walking and relaxing there. I usually go for a short walk or read a book on a bench for about an hour.

Sugerencia: Clarify location first, then answer the question directly. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., 'town' or 'village' instead of 'blazer'), and give one specific reason why more parks are needed. Structure: topic sentence + supporting detail using a linking word like 'because' or 'so'.

Ejemplo: I don't actually live in a city; I live in a small town. However, I would like to see more parks there because they would give children safe places to play and provide green spaces for the community to relax.

Sugerencia: Give a clear yes/no answer with a brief reason. Avoid confusion and repeated negatives. If you say 'no', briefly explain why and optionally offer an alternative. Keep it to 1–2 sentences and use correct grammar.

Ejemplo: No, I don't have any specific parks I plan to visit in the future because I prefer travelling to mountains or beaches. If I did visit a park, it would be a large botanical garden rather than an ordinary local park.

× Yes, when my child I prefer to play in the parks, playgrounds and parks if the park is near my house hometown.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I preferred to play in parks and playgrounds if they were near my hometown.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and mixed tenses. 'when my child' should be 'when I was a child' (sentence structure and past tense). 'I prefer' should be past 'I preferred' to match 'when I was a child'. 'parks, playgrounds and parks' is repetitive; use 'parks and playgrounds'. 'my house hometown' is incorrect; use 'my hometown'. Ensure subject and verbs align and maintain past tense for childhood habits. Suggestion: Use 'When I was a child, I preferred...' and keep consistent past tense for habits.

× So that's why I prefer to go in parks on a daily basis.

✓ So that's why I prefer to go to parks on a daily basis.

The error is the incorrect preposition 'in' with 'go' and 'parks'. The correct collocation is 'go to parks'. The tense 'prefer' is fine (present preference). Suggestion: use 'go to' with places.

× Yes, nowadays when I'm free, I I usually go to parks and I am spending my free time in that park.

✓ Yes, nowadays when I'm free, I usually go to parks and spend my free time there.

There is a repeated word 'I I' and awkward verb tense mixture 'I usually go' (present simple) with 'I am spending' (present continuous). For habitual actions use present simple: 'I usually go... and spend my free time there'. Also replace 'in that park' with 'there' for natural reference. Suggestion: avoid repetition and keep consistent tense for habits.

× First of all, I am not living in city, I am I live in a hometown or blazer.

✓ First of all, I don't live in a city; I live in a small town or village.

Multiple issues: incorrect continuous form 'I am not living in city' should be simple present 'I don't live in a city' for a general fact. 'I am I live' duplicates subjects. 'hometown or blazer' is unclear; likely 'small town or village'. Also missing article 'a' before 'city'. Suggestion: use simple present for permanent situations and include correct articles.

× So I wanted to you, I want development in my hometown now.

✓ So I want development in my hometown now.

'I wanted to you' is ungrammatical and unnecessary. Use 'I want development in my hometown now' or more naturally 'I want my hometown to be developed' or 'I want more development in my hometown'. Tense: 'want' (present) expresses current desire. Suggestion: remove extraneous words and choose a clear structure for expressing desire.

× So of course just I see more parks in my city or village.

✓ So of course I would like to see more parks in my town or village.

Original 'I see more parks' is incorrect for desire — use 'would like to see' or 'want to see'. Also 'just I' has wrong word order. 'city or village' is awkward; choose 'town or village'. Suggestion: use 'would like to see' to express a wish politely.

× In the future, I don't, I don't like to go in Parker.

✓ In the future, I don't want to go to parks.

Errors: repeated 'I don't,' and wrong verb choice 'like to go in' and capitalization 'Parker'. Use 'want to go to parks' or 'like going to parks'. Use the infinitive 'to go' with 'want' and preposition 'to' with places. Suggestion: avoid repetition and use correct collocations.

× I don't think so that it is our goal to go and park.

✓ I don't think it is our goal to go to parks.

Original has incorrect clause order 'I don't think so that' — should be 'I don't think that' or 'I don't think it is...'. Use 'go to parks' not 'go and park'. Suggestion: restructure clause and correct preposition.

× So of course, no, my answer is no.

✓ So of course my answer is no.

Redundant commas and repeated negative 'no, my answer is no' is acceptable but repetitive. Simplify to 'So of course my answer is no.' Suggestion: avoid redundancy for clarity.