Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and clear: start with a topic sentence that answers the question, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct basic grammar (tense, articles, word choice) and avoid repetition. Keep to 2–4 sentences and use vocabulary relevant to parks (playground, picnic, run, relax).

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. For example, my parents often took me on weekend picnics where I could run around the playground and play games with other children. Those visits were my favorite way to spend free time.

Sugerencia: Give a clear direct answer, then briefly explain with specific reasons and a linking word (because, although, so). Avoid filler words and correct grammar (I am in Grade 12, I am busy studying, I don't have time). Keep it concise (2–3 sentences).

Ejemplo: Not really, because I am in Grade 12 and I am very busy studying and preparing for university. As a result, I rarely have time to visit parks during the week.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, then give specific benefits using linking words (because, for example, therefore). Use precise vocabulary (relax, meet friends, socialise, improve air quality) and one or two specific examples of how parks help people and environment. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide a place to relax and socialise with friends. For example, parks encourage outdoor exercise and improve air quality by adding more trees.

Sugerencia: Be specific: either name a type of park you want to visit (botanical garden, riverside park) or describe what you want from future parks. Use clear reasons introduced by linking words and correct grammar (I hope the government will build more local parks). Limit to 2–4 sentences and include one concrete detail or example.

Ejemplo: In the future, I would like to visit a large riverside park if one is built nearby. I hope the government will plant more trees and create walking paths because such features would help people relax and reduce air pollution.

× Yeah, when I watch a kid, I definitely like like to go the park because I extroverted person.

✓ Yeah, when I was a kid, I definitely liked to go to the park because I was an extroverted person.

The sentence uses incorrect pronouns and verb forms. 'When I watch a kid' should be 'when I was a kid' to refer to childhood. 'Like like to go the park' has repetition and missing preposition; use 'liked to go to the park'. 'I extroverted person' is missing the verb 'was' and an article: 'I was an extroverted person'. Suggestion: use correct past tense verbs and include necessary articles and prepositions.

× So I really like to like play the other DVD like outdoor activity.

✓ So I really liked playing other outdoor activities.

The original has redundant fillers and wrong noun usage 'DVD' and wrong form 'to like play'. Use gerund 'playing' after 'liked' and remove irrelevant 'DVD'. Also pluralize 'activities' to match meaning. Suggestion: avoid filler 'like' and use verb+ing after 'liked' for past habitual actions.

× Yeah, I can go to the box.

✓ I could climb on the sandbox.

'Go to the box' is unclear and likely refers to a sandbox or play area. The structure is awkward. Replace with a clear noun and use past ability 'could' for childhood context. Suggestion: choose precise nouns and correct modal tense for past ability.

× You can run around the park or sometime like my parents, like umm, participate the picnic on the weekend.

✓ You could run around the park, and sometimes my parents would have picnics on the weekend.

Use past modal 'could' for ability in childhood. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'Participate the picnic' is wrong; use 'have a picnic' or 'go on a picnic'. Also articles: 'the weekend' is acceptable but 'on weekends' is more natural. Suggestion: correct adverb forms and use appropriate verbs for activities.

× Uh, I think not really because like right now I'm a high school student in the grade 12.

✓ Uh, I don't really now because right now I'm a high school student in grade 12.

The original mixes negative structures incorrectly. Use 'I don't really' to negate. 'In the grade 12' should be 'in grade 12' or 'in the 12th grade'. Suggestion: use standard negative contractions and correct grade phrasing.

× So, umm, I think I'm quite busy for my studying and my like, choosing the major of my university.

✓ So, umm, I think I'm quite busy with my studies and choosing my university major.

Use 'busy with' not 'busy for'. 'Studying' should be 'studies' as a noun. 'Choosing the major of my university' is wordy; use 'choosing my university major'. Suggestion: use 'busy with' and noun forms for activities.

× So that's why I don't have more time to can go going to the park like many times like much time when I.

✓ So that's why I don't have much time to go to the park as often as I used to.

The sentence incorrectly combines modals 'to can' and gerunds 'go going'. Use 'don't have much time to go' and express frequency 'as often as I used to' for comparison with past. Suggestion: remove extra modal, use infinitive 'to go', and a clear comparative phrase.

× Yeah, definitely I'd really like to park because I think it's a good place to get relaxed and why and like just chill with your friend is the best place to can talking and build a relationship with people.

✓ Yeah, definitely I'd really like parks because I think they're good places to relax and just chill with friends; they are great for talking and building relationships with people.

Pronouns and agreement are incorrect: 'I'd like to park' should be 'I'd like parks' or 'I'd like more parks'. 'It's' should agree with plural 'parks' -> 'they're'. 'Get relaxed' should be 'relax'. 'Your friend' -> 'friends'. 'The best place to can talking' is ungrammatical; use 'great for talking'. Use gerund 'building' after 'for'. Suggestion: ensure pronoun-antecedent agreement and use correct verb forms.

× Yeah and I think like more park is like have more about environment because.

✓ Yeah, and I think more parks would help the environment.

The original is awkward and ungrammatical. 'More park is like have more about environment' should be rephrased to a clear conditional: 'more parks would help the environment'. Suggestion: use concise structures and correct verb forms.

× Well, I think in the future I hope the government can build more the local park, yeah, more tree, more local park for is the good place for the citizen can and why and relax and it can help more for the environment, reduce the air pollution.

✓ Well, in the future I hope the government can build more local parks with more trees; they would be good places for citizens to relax and would help the environment by reducing air pollution.

Use plural 'parks' and include 'more trees'. 'The local park' should be 'local parks'. Use modals correctly: 'can build' is acceptable but pair with conditional 'would be'. 'For the citizen can and why and relax' is ungrammatical; use 'for citizens to relax'. Also 'help more for the environment' -> 'help the environment'. Suggestion: use plural nouns, clear infinitive constructions 'for citizens to relax', and consistent future/conditional phrasing.