Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cümle yapısını düzeltin ve zaman uyumuna dikkat edin. Kısa, doğal bir konu cümlesi kurduktan sonra bir veya iki destekleyici ayrıntı ekleyin. Örneğin geçmişte kimlerle gittiğinizi ve ne yaptığınızı belirtin. Bağlaç ve doğru yardımcı fiil kullanımı üzerine çalışın.

Ejemplo: Yes, I liked going to the park with my friends when I was a child. We usually played football and climbed trees, which made our afternoons very fun.

Sugerencia: Cümledeki zaman ve sürekli durum ifadelerini doğal hale getirin; gereksiz tekrarları çıkarın. Sebep belirtirken daha akıcı bağlaçlar kullanın (because, so, so that). Kısa destekleyici detaylar ekleyin: hangi egzersizleri yaptığınız ve sosyal yönü nasıl olduğuna dair örnek verin.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because I exercise there regularly. I usually jog or do bodyweight exercises, and sometimes I chat with other people who are also training.

Sugerencia: Cümleyi daha net ve akıcı ifade edin; şehirden bahsederken doğru yapı kullanın. Sebep gösterirken 'because' veya 'because of' ile bağlayın ve sayısal/örnekleyici bir ayrıntı ekleyin (örneğin hangi semtlerde park eksikliği var).

Ejemplo: Yes, I would. In Istanbul many new buildings and shopping centers are being built, so there are fewer open spaces for parks, especially in the city center.

Sugerencia: Park ismi ve neden gitmek istediğinizi net ifade edin; olumlu ifadeler kullanın ve dilbilgisi hatalarını düzeltin. 'Because' ile neden verirken özgün ve spesifik ayrıntı ekleyin (örneğin hangi doğal özellikleri görmek istediğiniz).

Ejemplo: In the future I would like to visit Yedigöller National Park because it has many lakes, forests and diverse wildlife that I want to see and photograph.

× Yes, I was go to the park with my friends when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I used to go to the park with my friends when I was a child.

The student used 'was go', which is incorrect. Use 'used to' + base verb to describe habitual actions in the past. Alternatively, 'I went to the park with my friends' is acceptable. Suggestion: use 'used to go' for repeated past activities or 'went' for single/past events.

× Yes, I still like going to parks because I am doing my exercises and workouts in the park and maybe I am speaking other people when I doing my workouts.

✓ Yes, I still like going to parks because I do my exercises and workouts in the park and maybe I speak with other people when I do my workouts.

Multiple tense and verb form errors: continuous present 'am doing' is unnecessary for habitual actions—use simple present 'do'. 'I am speaking other people' is incorrect: use 'speak with other people' or 'talk to other people'. Also 'when I doing' misses auxiliary verb; use 'when I do'. Suggestion: use simple present for routine actions and correct verb patterns: 'do exercises', 'speak with'.

× Yes, but in my city so Istanbul and they are creating a lot of buildings and shopping centers, so there are not much open areas, areas for the park.

✓ Yes, but in my city, Istanbul, they are building many buildings and shopping centers, so there are not many open areas for parks.

The original sentence has awkward structure 'so Istanbul' and wrong quantifier 'not much' with countable plural 'areas'. Use commas to insert the city name, use 'building' instead of 'creating' for construction context, and 'many' for countable nouns. Also simplify 'areas for the park' to 'areas for parks'. Suggestion: say 'in my city, Istanbul, they are building many ... so there are not many open areas for parks.'

× In the future I want to go Yedugular Milli Park because there are not lot of animals and natural places inside the park.

✓ In the future I want to go to Yedigüller Milli Park because there are a lot of animals and natural places in the park.

Missing preposition 'to' after 'go'. Also the student wrote 'not lot of' which is ungrammatical and contradicts intent — likely meant there are many animals and natural areas; use 'a lot of' for quantity. If they meant there are few animals, use 'not many animals'. Also corrected park name spelling to 'Yedigüller'. Suggestion: include 'to' with 'go to' and use 'a lot of' or 'not many' appropriately.