Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cần trả lời trực tiếp, mạch lạc và tránh nhiều tiếng ồm (filler). Nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng (ví dụ: “Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child.”), sau đó nêu chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: hoạt động bạn làm ở công viên, tần suất, với ai) sử dụng liên từ như “because” hoặc “and” để kết nối ý. Tránh lặp từ và sửa ngữ pháp (ví dụ: “suggest my friend” → “invite my friends”). Giữ độ dài dưới 5 câu.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child. I often invited my friends to play badminton with me because we loved being active outdoors. We went almost every weekend, and it was a great way to spend time together and stay healthy.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời lẫn lộn về thì (hiện tại vs quá khứ) và nhiều tiếng ồm. Nên trả lời trực tiếp ở thì hiện tại nếu câu hỏi hỏi hiện tại, ví dụ: “Yes, I still like going to parks.” Sau đó thêm chi tiết cụ thể về tần suất, ai cùng đi, và lý do, dùng liên từ như “because” hoặc “so” để nối ý. Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và tránh lặp từ.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still like going to parks. I usually go with my friends to play badminton a few times a week because it helps me relax and exercise. It’s a fun social activity and good for my health.

Sugerencia: Cần trả lời rõ ràng và ngắn gọn, tránh cấu trúc lộn xộn. Bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề (ví dụ: “Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city.”), tiếp theo nêu lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: giảm stress, không gian cho sinh viên, hoạt động thể chất) và dùng liên từ như “because” hoặc “so”. Sửa ngữ pháp (ví dụ: “there are more area” → “there would be more space”) và loại bỏ lặp từ.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide space for people to relax and exercise. For example, students could use them to study outdoors or play sports, which would help reduce stress.

Sugerencia: Cần trả lời rõ ràng về một công viên cụ thể hoặc loại công viên mong muốn, sử dụng thì tương lai đơn hợp lý (“I want to go to...” hoặc “I would like to visit ...”). Thêm mô tả cụ thể (ví dụ: ‘lots of trees’, ‘clean air’, ‘walking paths’) và dùng liên từ như “because” để giải thích lý do. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: “there were Dara has” → sửa thành “which has”) và loại bỏ tiếng ồm.

Ejemplo: Yes, in the future I would like to visit a large, green park that has fresh air and many trees because I enjoy walking in nature. A park with well-maintained paths and benches would be perfect for relaxing and meeting friends.

× Uh, athlete, yes, uh, when I was a child, I love, I, I love going to the parks.

✓ Uh, actually, yes. When I was a child, I loved going to parks.

The verb tense should be past ('loved') because the time reference is 'when I was a child'. Also 'the parks' is unnecessary; use plural 'parks' without 'the'. Use 'actually' instead of 'athlete' for meaning clarity.

× I usually, uh, suggest, I usually suggest my friend go to park with me and to play badminton together, I think.

✓ I usually suggested that my friends go to the park with me to play badminton together.

When reporting habitual past actions, use past tense 'suggested'. 'Suggest' is followed by 'that' + subjunctive or 'that' + base form; with past reporting use 'suggested that my friends go'. Also 'friend' should be plural if referring to more than one; 'the park' is preferred when speaking of a specific park; remove redundant repetition.

× Yes, Nowaday, uh, when I was 15 years old, I still like going to parks.

✓ Nowadays, when I was 15 years old, I liked going to parks.

Mixing 'nowadays' (present) with 'when I was 15' (past) is inconsistent. Use 'liked' to match the past time reference. Also correct spelling 'Nowadays'.

× I, I still, uh, go to parks with my friends to go to play badminton together.

✓ I still went to parks with my friends to play badminton together.

Maintain past tense 'went' to match earlier past context. Remove redundant 'go to play' — use 'to play'. Reduce stuttering and repetitions for fluent sentence.

× It's a great idea and if if university. Appear more parks there are more area for me to play with my friends to reduce stress when I I.

✓ It's a great idea. If the university created more parks, there would be more areas for me and my friends to play and reduce stress.

Original sentence is fragmented and contains repetition. Use conditional 'If the university created' and 'there would be' for hypothetical situations. Use 'areas' plural and 'for me and my friends' for correct pronoun order and clarity. Remove double 'I'. Use infinitive 'to play' and concise 'reduce stress'.

× Yes, in the future, I want to go to a green parks.

✓ Yes, in the future, I want to go to a green park.

'Parks' is plural but 'a' requires singular noun. Use 'a green park' or 'green parks' without 'a'.

× Uh, there were uh, Dara has fresh air, many trees and the environment is good.

✓ Uh, there, the area has fresh air, many trees, and a good environment.

Mixing 'were' with present 'has' is incorrect. Use present 'has' to describe qualities of the place in a general statement. Replace 'Dara' with 'the area' unless 'Dara' is a proper noun; then 'Dara has fresh air...'. Use parallel structure and articles: 'a good environment'.