Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence and then one or two specific supporting details. Use correct tense and reduce hesitations. For example, say you liked parks, who you played with, what activities you did, and where. Also fix grammar: use past simple (I was, we played) and plural/singular agreement.

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often went with my cousins and a group of neighbourhood friends, and we played games like hide-and-seek and football on the grass. These outings were my favourite because we spent whole afternoons running around and exploring the playground.

Sugerencia: Answer directly first, then give a brief reason using linking words (but, because, so). Reduce fillers and repeat information. Use present simple or present continuous correctly. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Not often at the moment. Because I work full-time, I don’t have much free time to visit parks, but I would like to go more often when my schedule becomes less busy.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear opinion sentence, then give one specific reason using a linking word such as because. Use correct adjectives and nouns (more parks, more common, available space). Finish the sentence with a concrete benefit.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they would provide green space for exercise and relaxation. For example, if parks were more common in my neighbourhood, families and elderly people would have safe places to walk and socialise.

Sugerencia: Answer directly naming the park or city, then give one or two specific reasons why (scenery, activities, events). Avoid vague adjectives and hesitations; use accurate collocations (beautiful parks, well-known for).

Ejemplo: Yes, I would love to visit the parks in Hanoi in the future, especially places like Hoan Kiem Lake and the large public parks nearby. They are famous for their beautiful scenery and lively atmosphere, and I’d enjoy walking around the lake and seeing local life there.

× Yes, I when I was child I was really keen on playing with my group of friends.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I was really keen on playing with my group of friends.

Missing article 'a' before 'child' and misplaced 'I'. The sentence should begin 'Yes, when I was a child' to provide correct word order. Suggestion: place time clause after 'Yes' and include the indefinite article 'a' with singular countable noun 'child'.

× They are my cousin and we play outdoors at the.

✓ They were my cousins and we played outdoors together.

Pronoun 'They' refers to plural but 'my cousin' was singular; also tense should match past ('were','played'). The phrase 'at the.' is incomplete. Use 'together' for clarity. Suggestion: ensure number agreement between subject and noun and complete the location or use 'together' to finish the idea.

× Nowadays, because, umm, so busy with my work for uh, full full time, so I, I really have a time to, uh, walk in the park in the near future, I uh, would like.

✓ Nowadays I am so busy with my full-time work that I really do not have time to walk in the park, but I would like to in the near future.

Original mixes tenses and omits auxiliary verbs. 'Nowadays' requires present simple or present continuous; use 'I am so busy' and 'do not have time'. 'Full-time' is an adjective before 'work'. Use conjunction 'that' to show result and separate desire with 'but I would like to'. Suggestion: simplify the sentence, use correct auxiliary verbs and hyphenate 'full-time'.

× Yes, I would very lovely to see the more park, uh, that umm, uh, more common in my uh area because everyone will have a space to.

✓ Yes, I would very much like to see more parks that are common in my area because everyone would have a space.

'Very lovely' is incorrect collocation for expressing desire; use 'very much like'. 'The more park' should be 'more parks' (plural). 'More common in my area' needs a verb 'that are common'. 'Will have a space to' is incomplete; use 'would have a space'. Suggestion: use correct collocations ('would like to'), pluralize 'parks', and complete comparative clauses.

× Yes, in the future, I would like to to go to the uh, a park in Hanoi because it is famous for the wildly and beautiful park.

✓ Yes, in the future I would like to go to a park in Hanoi because it is famous for its wide and beautiful parks.

Duplicate 'to' removed. 'the uh, a park' confused articles; use 'a park'. 'Wildly' is an adverb; use adjective 'wide' or 'sprawling' and adjust noun agreement: 'parks' or 'its wide and beautiful park' depending on meaning. Also use possessive 'its'. Suggestion: choose correct adjective form and consistent singular/plural nouns.

× Uh, there are many people uh, in here.

✓ There are many people here.

Use 'here' without preposition 'in' when referring to location in a general statement. 'In here' is colloquial and usually used when physically inside a space; 'here' is more natural. Suggestion: remove unnecessary preposition.