Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Keep answers grammatically correct and concise. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using correct tense and plurality. Avoid vague endings. Focus on natural phrasing and limit to 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. When I was young I often went to the park with my family. I enjoyed playing games with my friends on the grass and feeding ducks by the pond. Those visits gave me happy childhood memories.

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence and add one specific condition or example. Use contractions and articles correctly (the park, on weekends) and keep sentences shorter to sound natural. Use linking words like 'however' or 'but' to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: I still like going to parks, but less often because I work long hours. However, if I have free time on weekends I always try to visit the park to relax and get some fresh air.

Sugerencia: Give a clear opinion sentence and then support it with one or two specific reasons. Use correct vocabulary and grammar (e.g., 'crowded with buildings', 'unfortunately', 'if the government had the chance'). Avoid repetition and ambiguous phrases.

Ejemplo: Definitely. I would like more parks because Bangkok is crowded with buildings and lacks green space. Unfortunately it may be difficult, but if the government created more parks it would improve air quality and residents' well‑being.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give a clear description or reason. Use correct sentence structure and specific details (name, location, what you liked). Avoid unclear phrases like 'I have a chapter' and ensure tense consistency.

Ejemplo: Yes, there is a new park near Central Park, the new community mall in Bangkok. I visited it once and enjoyed the modern playground and peaceful walking paths, so I would like to go back and spend more time there.

× When I was young I often went to park with my family.

✓ When I was young I often went to the park with my family.

The noun 'park' needs the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place the speaker visited regularly. This is a singular countable noun that requires an article. Suggestion: use 'the park' or 'parks' depending on meaning.

× I spent a lot of time there, played game with my friend and those time gave me a good.

✓ I spent a lot of time there, played games with my friends, and those times gave me a lot of joy.

Several issues: 'game' should be plural 'games' to match 'a lot of time' and multiple occasions; 'friend' should be plural 'friends' if referring to more than one or 'my friend' if singular—context suggests plural; 'those time' needs plural 'those times'; the phrase 'gave me a good' is incomplete and ungrammatical—replace with 'gave me a lot of joy' or 'gave me good memories'. Ensure past tense consistency is kept.

× To be honest, nowadays I'm a working woman so I spend a lot of my time doing work so I'd rarely go to park, but if I have a chance in weekend I will always go there.

✓ To be honest, nowadays I'm a working woman so I spend a lot of my time working, so I rarely go to the park, but if I have a chance on the weekend I will always go there.

Multiple corrections: 'doing work' is awkward—use 'working'; 'I'd rarely go' mixes conditional/modal incorrectly—use simple present 'I rarely go' to describe habitual action, or 'I rarely go' fits; 'to park' needs article 'the park'; 'in weekend' should be 'on the weekend' or 'at the weekend'. Keep tense consistent for habitual actions.

× Definitely yes, but in Bangkok I think nowadays it's very stuck all over the building so it's quite hard to make more park but unfor but fortunately if it's have a chance for the government to do more park I would.

✓ Definitely yes, but in Bangkok I think nowadays it is very crowded and full of buildings, so it is quite hard to create more parks. However, if the government had the opportunity to create more parks, I would support it.

This sentence has many structural and grammatical problems: 'very stuck all over the building' is incorrect—use 'crowded and full of buildings'; 'make more park' needs plural 'parks' and a better verb 'create' or 'build'; 'unfor but fortunately' is confused—use a single connector like 'however' or 'fortunately'; 'if it's have a chance for the government to do more park I would' mixes tenses and forms—use conditional 'if the government had the opportunity... I would support it.' Break into two sentences for clarity.

× In Bangkok have new park that stay in Central Park, which is the new community mall in Bangkok.

✓ In Bangkok there is a new park located in Central Park, which is a new community mall in Bangkok.

The sentence is missing the existential 'there is' construction for introducing a new park. Also use 'located' instead of 'stay' for places, and 'a new community mall' needs the indefinite article. Ensure correct word order: 'In Bangkok there is...'. Also 'Central Park' as a mall needs clarification but grammar corrected accordingly.

× So I have a chapter. I have chance go there one time. It's wonderful.

✓ So I had a chance to go there once. It was wonderful.

'I have a chapter' is meaningless here—likely confusion; use 'I had a chance' (past tense) to match the experience; 'have chance go' is missing 'to' and needs past tense: 'had a chance to go'; 'one time' is better as 'once'; 'It's wonderful' should be past 'It was wonderful' if describing a past visit. Maintain consistent past tense for past experiences.