Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details and a short linking phrase. Watch verb forms and plural/singular agreement (e.g., "I was really happy," "we have many great memories").

Ejemplo: Yes. I loved going to parks as a child because my family and I often spent weekends there. For example, we would have picnics and play games together, which created many happy memories.

Sugerencia: Clarify meaning and correct awkward phrases. Give one clear reason and a brief explanation using linking words like "because" or "so". Avoid repetition and check word choice (e.g., "pet" is incorrect here).

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they help me relax. For example, I usually go for a run or a walk there, and the fresh air and green space help me reduce stress.

Sugerencia: Give a direct opinion first, then one or two specific reasons with linking words. Use correct plural forms and concise phrasing. Avoid repeating the same idea twice.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because different parks can offer varied activities. For instance, one park could have playgrounds for children while another might have sports facilities and walking trails.

Sugerencia: Be specific and grammatical: name one or two parks or cities and explain why you want to visit them. Use linking phrases like "for example" or "because" and correct prepositions (e.g., "in other countries" not "in abroad").

Ejemplo: Yes, I would love to visit parks abroad, for example in Singapore and Sydney. I want to see Singapore's well-designed gardens and Sydney's coastal parks because they offer unique landscapes and recreational facilities.

× I really happy because I went to the park with my family, my friends and my cousins, so we have many great memory together.

✓ I was really happy because I went to the park with my family, my friends and my cousins, so we have many great memories together.

The sentence misses the linking verb 'was' to connect the subject and the adjective 'happy' (adjective use needs a verb). Also 'memory' should be plural 'memories' to match 'many'. Use past tense 'was' because the context is about childhood. Suggestion: include the correct past auxiliary and pluralize countable nouns. Grammar problem type ID:13

× I really happy because I went to the park with my family, my friends and my cousins, so we have many great memory together.

✓ I was really happy because I went to the park with my family, my friends and my cousins, so we had many great memories together.

The clause 'we have' conflicts with the past time frame 'when I was a child' and other past verbs; change to past 'we had' for consistent tense. Also plural 'memories' required. Suggestion: maintain consistent past tense within the same narrative. Grammar problem type ID:27

× The park is the most pet I obtain going going to.

✓ The park is the place I like going to the most.

The original has multiple incorrect words and tense. 'Most pet I obtain going going to' is not grammatical. Use present simple 'is' for a general preference and 'like going to the most' to express preference. Suggestion: keep simple present for habitual preferences and use correct vocabulary ('place' and 'like'). Grammar problem type ID:6

× I go to the park for a run, for a walk because it's telling me it's helping me relax.

✓ I go to the park for a run or a walk because it helps me relax.

The phrase 'it's telling me it's helping me relax' is incorrect and wordy. Use simple present 'helps' to express regular effect. Also use 'or' to list alternatives. Suggestion: use concise present simple for routine reasons and avoid unnecessary progressive constructions here. Grammar problem type ID:13

× Yes, I like I think it will be good to go to visit many park in my city and different park have many different activity, so I would like to go to visit many park in my city.

✓ Yes, I think it would be good to visit many parks in my city because different parks have many different activities, so I would like to visit many parks in my city.

Multiple issues: extra 'I like' is redundant; modal and tense should be 'would be' for hypothetical; 'go to visit' is redundant, use 'visit'; 'park' should be plural 'parks'; 'have many different activity' needs plural 'activities'. Suggestion: remove redundancy, use correct modal form, plural nouns, and simpler verbs. Grammar problem type ID:12

× Yes, it's have a park that I want to visit is in a world such as Shanghai Park or in Singapore or in Sydney, something like that.

✓ Yes, there is a park I want to visit in places like Shanghai, Singapore, or Sydney.

Original has incorrect 'it's have' and awkward 'in a world such as' phrasing. Use existential 'there is' for existence. Use 'in places like' or 'in cities such as' and list city names correctly. Suggestion: replace incorrect constructions with 'there is' and correct prepositions and expressions for locations. Grammar problem type ID:11

× I would like to visit the park in abroad.

✓ I would like to visit parks abroad.

Use 'abroad' without 'in' and typically plural 'parks' if speaking generally. 'The park in abroad' is ungrammatical. Suggestion: say 'visit parks abroad' or 'visit a park abroad' depending on meaning. Grammar problem type ID:22