Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more grammatical, concise and directly answer the question first. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No) then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct tense and articles (e.g., “as a child,” “the park,” “played”).

Ejemplo: No, I didn’t go to the park much as a child. Instead, my friends and I usually stayed at home and played computer games, so I spent most free time indoors rather than outside.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and use clearer sequence words. Use present simple for habits and link ideas with words like “because” or “so.” Fix pronouns and articles. Keep to 2–3 sentences max.

Ejemplo: Not really. As I said, I prefer staying at home to play video games with my friends, so I rarely visit parks these days.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear opinion (Yes/No) and then give specific reasons. Use correct plural forms and linking words like “because” and “for example.” Avoid filler sounds. Expand with one concrete benefit.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would. More parks would improve air quality because trees and plants absorb pollution; for example, a new park near busy roads could reduce dust and make the area more pleasant.

Sugerencia: Give a brief but complete answer rather than a single word. If you say “no,” add a reason or alternative. Use one or two sentences and a linking word to expand slightly.

Ejemplo: No, there aren’t any specific parks I want to visit. I usually don’t plan park visits, but I might go to a well-known botanical garden if I have time in the future.

× Well actually I seldom go to park no matter I'm a children or now because we love frame computer games in house.

✓ Well, actually I seldom went to parks whether I was a child or now because we love playing computer games at home.

Incorrect use of prepositions 'to park' and 'in house' and other issues: use 'go to parks' or 'go to the park' (preposition 'to' plus correct article/plural). 'In house' should be 'at home'. Also tense and word choice: the context asks about childhood, so use past 'went' for childhood clause and contrast with present; 'no matter I'm a children or now' is ungrammatical and needs restructuring to 'whether I was a child or now'. Replace 'frame computer games' with 'playing computer games'. Suggestion: separate the two time frames clearly and use appropriate prepositions 'to' and 'at'.

× As I just mentioned I like to play video game with my friends so later then go to park I will stay in house and play video games.

✓ As I just mentioned, I like to play video games with my friends, so rather than going to the park I stay at home and play video games.

Subject-verb agreement and related structure errors: 'video game' should be plural 'video games' to match 'I like to play'; 'later then go to park' is incorrect phraseology—use 'rather than going to the park' (gerund after rather than). 'I will stay in house' uses wrong article and preposition; use 'stay at home' and maintain present simple for habitual action 'I stay'. Suggestion: use plural for countable nouns, correct preposition 'to the park' and 'at home', and use gerund after 'rather than'.

× He there are more park in my city. I think that is good things because more plants can produce more clean air in the city. They will be helpful.

✓ There are more parks in my city. I think that is a good thing because more plants can produce cleaner air in the city. They will be helpful.

Plural and article errors: 'more park' should be plural 'more parks'. Remove stray 'He' at start. 'Good things' should be singular 'a good thing' to refer to the idea in general. 'More clean air' is acceptable but 'cleaner air' is more natural (comparative). Suggestion: use plural for countable nouns, use appropriate articles ('a good thing'), and use comparative adjective 'cleaner' when comparing air quality.