Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., "Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child."). Then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words (e.g., "because", "for example"). Keep to 2–3 short sentences and avoid fillers.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child because they were fun and safe. For example, I used to play on the swings and have picnics with my family.

Sugerencia: Use correct verb forms and clearer sentence structure. Begin with a topic sentence ("Yes, I still enjoy going to parks.") then add a reason and a specific detail using a linking phrase ("because", "for example"). Limit to 2–3 sentences and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they are peaceful. For example, I sometimes take my bag and sit on a bench to read books.

Sugerencia: Provide a complete opinion with a reason and a specific effect. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect your statements. Aim for a clear topic sentence plus one supporting detail.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they improve air quality and provide places for people to relax. For instance, new parks could encourage families to spend more time outdoors.

Sugerencia: Clarify your meaning and use simpler, grammatical sentences. If you mean you prefer quiet or private places, say so directly: begin with a clear answer (Yes/No) and explain briefly with a specific example. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and avoid unclear phrases.

Ejemplo: No, I don't have a particular park in mind for the future. I prefer quiet, secluded spots where I can relax alone, so I usually choose small neighborhood gardens rather than large parks.

× Yes, I like here.

✓ Yes, I liked going there.

The student used 'like' present tense and 'here' incorrectly for a past habit. The examiner asked about childhood, so use past tense 'liked' and the adverb 'there' to refer to parks. Also include 'going' to match the activity. Suggestion: Use past tense for past habits and choose correct locative adverb (there).

× Sometimes I go on I so interesting when I try.

✓ Sometimes I went to parks because I found them so interesting when I explored them.

This sentence is ungrammatical and has unclear structure. The student mixed pronouns and fragments. The past tense 'went' fits childhood context. Clarify subject and reasons: 'because I found them so interesting when I explored them.' Suggestion: Keep subject-verb-object order and express reason with 'because' or a participle clause.

× Yes, of course I still going in a park sometimes I I take my bag, I read some books. So actually I go.

✓ Yes, of course I still go to parks sometimes. I take my bag and read books there. I enjoy going.

The student used a present participle 'going' without auxiliary and incorrect preposition 'in a park.' Use simple present 'go' for habitual actions. Use preposition 'to' for 'go to a park.' Combine clauses with conjunctions and correct repetition. Suggestion: Use simple present for habits and 'go to' + place; avoid unnecessary repetitions.

× Yes, of course. I think more parks in my city.

✓ Yes, of course. I think there should be more parks in my city.

The original lacks a verb and is incomplete. To express desire for additional parks, use a modal or auxiliary such as 'should be' or 'are needed.' Suggestion: Use 'there should be' or 'we need' to make the sentence complete.

× No I don't want it anymore of SIP specific neighborhood so sometimes I I relaxation on my own self so I need live alone.

✓ No, I don't want to go to parks in a specific neighborhood anymore. Sometimes I just relax by myself, so I prefer to live alone.

Multiple pronoun and word choice errors: 'it' is vague, 'of SIP' is unclear, 'I I' repeated, 'relaxation on my own self' is incorrect reflexive use, and 'need live alone' missing 'to.' Use 'relax by myself' and 'prefer to live alone.' Suggestion: Use clear pronouns, correct reflexive forms ('by myself'), include infinitive 'to live,' and avoid unnecessary repetitions.