Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Keep the answer direct and clear. Start with a concise topic sentence (e.g. “Yes, I loved going to parks as a child.”), then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid unclear words and grammatical errors (e.g. “extreme like”, “the past”, “complaints”). Use correct verb forms and simpler phrasing to improve clarity.

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. For example, when I was about five or six my parents took me every weekend, and I enjoyed playing on the swings and running on the grass. Because my parents were free on weekends, those visits became a regular family routine.

Sugerencia: Answer directly then give one clear reason with a linking word. Correct vocabulary (park, spare time, unwind, after a hard day) and word order. Avoid extra filler phrases like “to know every quick”. Keep sentences short and coherent.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks when I have spare time. For instance, on Saturdays or Sundays I often invite my parents or friends to relax there because walking in the park helps me unwind after a hard day at work.

Sugerencia: Give a direct opinion then support it with one or two specific reasons using linking words like “because” or “so”. Use correct nouns (parks, local area, government) and avoid repetition. Be precise: explain why more parks are beneficial (health, community, children’s play).

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because many neighborhoods lack green spaces. More parks and playgrounds would give children safe places to play and help local residents exercise and socialize.

Sugerencia: Clarify the time frame and be specific about the park you want to visit. Start with a clear statement about a future desire, then add one reason and a brief plan. Avoid confusing tense shifts and incorrect phrases like “I was a try” or “owe a lot of money to go say”.

Ejemplo: In the future, I would love to visit Hyde Park in London. I have always dreamed of seeing its famous gardens and boating lake, and I plan to save money so I can travel there in the next few years.

× Yes, of course when I was a child around 5-6 years old, I extreme like going to the past with my parents and you know, every weekend I always expected that my parents will have a lot of spare times and they didn't need to go to their complaints or accomplish any deadlines or projects at.

✓ Yes, of course. When I was a child, around five or six years old, I really liked going to parks with my parents. Every weekend I expected that my parents would have a lot of free time and would not need to go to work or finish deadlines or projects.

Multiple tense and word-choice problems: 'extreme like' is incorrect; use 'really liked' (past simple) to match 'When I was a child'. 'Going to the past' is wrong word choice; 'going to parks' is intended. 'Will' should be 'would' to maintain past perspective (sequence of tenses). 'Spare times' should be 'free time' (uncountable). 'They didn't need to go to their complaints' is nonsensical; replace with 'would not need to go to work' or 'attend to work'. Suggestions: keep consistent past tense, use appropriate collocations (free time, go to work, finish deadlines).

× At the moment I seem like going to the past when I have spare time to know every quick and even on Saturday or on Sunday I always call for my parents or my friends to go to the park with me because I want to go there to unwind after a hard work day.

✓ At the moment I like going to parks when I have spare time. Even on Saturday or Sunday I often call my parents or friends to go to the park with me because I want to unwind after a hard day's work.

Mix of incorrect verbs and tense: 'seem like going to the past' is incorrect; use 'like going to parks' for present preference. 'To know every quick' is meaningless and removed. 'I always call for my parents' is unnatural; use 'I often call my parents or friends'. Use 'a hard day's work' for correct possessive and noun order. Suggestions: simplify sentences, use common collocations (spare time, unwind, hard day's work), keep present simple for habitual actions ('I like', 'I often call').

× Yes, I like to see more parts in my country because there are too large parts around my local and I wish the governments and the local councils can could build more parts and playgrounds for the local people and especially the children playing.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because there are too few parks locally. I wish the government and local councils could build more parks and playgrounds for local people, especially for children.

Multiple word-choice and modal errors: 'parts' should be 'parks'. 'Too large parts' is wrong meaning; likely 'too few parks'. 'My local' is incorrect; use 'locally' or 'my city'. 'Governments' should be singular 'the government' if referring to one country, and 'can could' is a double modal; use 'could'. 'Children playing' is awkward; use 'for children'. Suggestions: choose correct nouns (park), fix quantifier ('too few'), use single modal 'could' for hypothetical wishes, and simplify phrasing.

× When I was a try, I wish I could go to the dream path in the United Kingdoms and until the present I've been with that. And in the future I guess I could or I could owe a lot of money to go say.

✓ I have always wanted to visit a dream park in the United Kingdom. Until now I have not been there. In the future I hope I can save enough money to go.

This sentence has many structural and tense errors: 'When I was a try' is meaningless; intended meaning is a desire or attempt. 'Dream path' should be 'dream park'. 'United Kingdoms' should be 'the United Kingdom'. 'I've been with that' is incorrect; use 'I have not been there' if they haven't visited. Final clause 'I could or I could owe a lot of money to go say' is unclear; likely 'I hope I can save enough money to go.' Suggestions: express wishes with 'I have always wanted' or 'I hope', use correct country name, use present perfect for experiences ('I have not been'), and 'save money' for funding travel.