Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your answer more natural and concise by using a clear topic sentence, correcting grammar, and adding one specific detail. Avoid redundancy and keep it to 1–3 sentences. For example, say when and how often, and give a specific activity you enjoyed.

Ejemplo: Yes. When I was a child I went to the park every day to play football with my friends and to relax after school.

Sugerencia: Remove hesitations and fix word choice and grammar. Use a topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details joined by a linking word (e.g., because, so).

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because I often walk there for exercise and meet friends for coffee or a chat.

Sugerencia: Be concise and avoid repetition and hesitations. Start with a clear statement (yes/no), then give a specific reason with one supporting detail. Correct grammar (e.g., "my city is very large"), and use a linking word like "because" or "since."

Ejemplo: No, I don’t think we need more parks because my city is already large and has plenty of green spaces close to most neighborhoods.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer and then a specific example or plan to make the response more concrete. Correct grammar ("other parks", "I don’t have a particular park in mind"). Limit to 2–3 sentences and avoid filler words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I’d like to visit more parks in the future to explore different landscapes; for instance, I want to try the botanical garden next month because I enjoy seeing rare plants.

× When I was younger, I used to go to the parks on daily basis for playing and for relaxing my mood.

✓ When I was younger, I used to go to parks on a daily basis to play and to relax.

The errors: 'to the parks' uses unnecessary definite article; say 'go to parks' or 'go to the park'. 'on daily basis' needs article and preposition: 'on a daily basis'. 'for playing and for relaxing my mood' is wordy and unidiomatic. Use infinitives 'to play' and 'to relax' and drop 'my mood'. Suggestion: use 'go to parks' or 'go to the park' depending on meaning, and use 'on a daily basis' or simply 'daily'.

× Yes I do because I, uh, oftenly go to the parks for walking and to meet my friends.

✓ Yes, I do because I often go to parks to walk and to meet my friends.

'oftenly' is not a correct adverb form; use 'often'. 'to the parks' should be 'to parks' or 'to the park'. 'for walking' is better as the infinitive 'to walk'. Also add comma after 'Yes'. Suggestion: use 'often', use infinitive for purpose, and omit unnecessary articles.

× My city is very big city, it's it has already so many parks. So I can, I can never feel that uh, parks are limited in my city.

✓ My city is a very big city; it already has so many parks, so I can never feel that parks are limited in my city.

Missing article before 'very big city' — needs 'a'. Sentence has duplication 'it's it has' — remove one and use correct clause 'it already has'. 'I can never feel that parks are limited' is awkward but grammatically okay; you could say 'I never feel that parks are limited'. Suggestion: include the article 'a', remove duplication, combine clauses with proper punctuation, and prefer 'never' instead of 'can never feel' for clarity.

× Yes, I would definitely want to go another parks also to explore uh, the other beautiful parks uh, but I don't have a specific park on my wish list.

✓ Yes, I would definitely want to go to other parks to explore the beautiful parks, but I don't have a specific park on my wish list.

'another parks' is incorrect because 'another' is used with singular countable nouns. Use 'other parks' for plural. Also add 'to' before 'other parks'. Remove filler 'uh' and the redundant 'also' or place it appropriately. Suggestion: use 'other' with plurals and ensure correct preposition 'go to' before places.