Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cevap kısa ve zaman uyumuna dikkat eksikliği var. Geçmişten bahsederken 'liked' gibi doğru geçmiş zaman kullanımı, bir konu cümlesi ve en fazla 2-3 destekleyici cümle ekleyerek yanıtınızı genişletin. Ayrıca bağlaçlarla nedenleri veya anıyı açıklayın.

Ejemplo: Yes, I liked going to parks as a child. I often went there with my family because there was a big playground and lots of space to run. It was my favorite place to play on weekends.

Sugerencia: Yanıtınız belirsiz ve yanlış zaman kullanımına sahip. 'Used to' geçmiş alışkanlıkları belirtir; şimdiki durumu açıkça ifade edin. Konu cümlesi kurup, neden devam edip etmediğinizi ve ne sıklıkla gittiğinizi örnekleyin. Bağlaçlarla açıklama yapın.

Ejemplo: I still enjoy going to parks sometimes, but not as often as before because I'm busy with work. When I have free time, I go for a walk or jog to relax.

Sugerencia: Cevap doğrudan ve anlaşılır, ancak daha özgün detaylar ve gerekçe eklenmeli. Bir neden ve beklenen faydayı bağlaçla iliştirerek genişletin ve mümkünse bir örnek verin.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they improve air quality and provide recreation spaces for families. For example, new parks with playgrounds and bike paths would encourage people to be more active.

Sugerencia: Cevap kısa ve dilbilgisi hatası var ('I got' yanlış). Belirli bir park adı veriyorsanız neden gitmek istediğinizi ve ne zaman gitmeyi planladığınızı söyleyin. Konu cümlesi kurup 1-2 destekleyici cümle ekleyin.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit Luna Park in the future because it has famous rides and beautiful sea views. I hope to go there next summer with friends.

× I like it.

✓ I liked them.

The examiner asked about a past habitual action ('Did you like going to parks as a child?'). The student responded with the present simple 'I like it,' which does not match the past context. Use the past simple 'liked' for a past habit. Also 'going to parks' is plural, so refer to 'them' (parks) rather than 'it.' Suggestion: say 'I liked them' or 'I liked going to parks.'

× I used to like.

✓ I still like going to parks.

The examiner asked if the student still likes going to parks now. 'I used to like' indicates a past habit that no longer holds, which may contradict the intended meaning. To say you continue to enjoy parks, use present simple 'I still like' plus the gerund 'going.' Suggestion: 'I still like going to parks.'

× I would like to see more parks in my city.

✓ I would like to see more parks in my city.

This sentence correctly uses the conditional 'would like' to express a desire about the present/future. No grammatical correction needed.

× Yes, I got the Luna park.

✓ Yes, I'd like to go to Luna Park.

The question asked about parks the student wants to go to in the future. 'I got the Luna park' is ungrammatical: 'got' is incorrect tense and meaning here. Use a polite future intention or desire: 'I'd like to go to Luna Park' or 'I want to go to Luna Park.' Also use the proper name 'Luna Park' without 'the' unless the local name requires it. Suggestion: 'I'd like to go to Luna Park.'