Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Use correct verb tense, make the response concise and natural, and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense since the question is about childhood, then add one or two specific activities as supporting details, linked smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I spent hours in the playground doing the slide and swings, and I often played on the seesaw with my friends because it was exciting and social.

Sugerencia: Provide a fuller, natural response: state your current preference clearly and give a brief reason, using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid abrupt answers like 'Not anymore.'

Ejemplo: Not really; I prefer other activities now. At the moment I usually play video games or hang out with friends outdoors because they are more convenient and entertaining for me.

Sugerencia: Make your reason clear and concise, correct grammar (singular/plural, avoid repetition), and add one specific suggestion or effect of more parks. Use linking words to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would. There aren’t enough parks in my city, and I think more green spaces would improve residents’ quality of life by offering places to relax and exercise, rather than only focusing on commercial development.

Sugerencia: Be concise and use correct expressions (park, not part). Start with a clear topic sentence, then give vivid specific reasons and link them. Avoid repeating phrases like 'one of the things' twice.

Ejemplo: Yes — I’d love to visit Stanley Park in Vancouver. It’s famous for its dense trees and peaceful trails, and you can enjoy stunning views of both the ocean and the city skyline, which sounds very relaxing.

× Yes, I do like going to parks when I was a child and I really love playing in the playground.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks when I was a child and I really loved playing in the playground.

The sentence mixes present tense ('do like', 'really love') with a past time reference ('when I was a child'). Use past tense to match the time frame: 'liked' and 'loved'. Keep tense consistent for clear meaning.

× Usually in the park I would do sliding, swinging and doing seesaw.

✓ Usually in the park I would slide, swing and play on the seesaw.

The verbs after 'would' should be in base form ('slide', 'swing'). 'Doing seesaw' is incorrect; use 'play on the seesaw' or 'use the seesaw'. Use parallel verb forms for clarity.

× Not anymore. So currently I would rather do play video games and go outside with my friends.

✓ Not anymore. Currently I would rather play video games and go outside with my friends.

After 'would rather' use the base verb without 'do' ('play'). Also 'currently' fits without 'so'. Remove the extra auxiliary for grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I would like to see parks in my city because in my city there is not enough parks there and that most people really want to focus more on what's creating more income.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because there are not enough parks and most people focus more on creating income.

'There is not enough parks' is incorrect: with plural 'parks' use 'there are not enough parks'. Remove redundant 'there' and unnecessary 'that'. Simplify 'want to focus more on what's creating more income' to 'focus more on creating income' for clarity and correct verb structure.

× Yes, there is one part that I really want to go in the future and that is in Stanley Park, which is in Vancouver, Canada.

✓ Yes, there is one place I really want to go to in the future: Stanley Park in Vancouver, Canada.

Use 'place' instead of 'part' for a location you want to visit. Use 'go to' after 'want to go'. The original repeats 'that' unnecessarily; restructure for natural phrasing.

× One of the things I really like about Stanley Park is that there's a lot of trees there and it's very relaxing and that you can definitely see the view of the ocean as well as the city.

✓ One of the things I really like about Stanley Park is that there are a lot of trees, it is very relaxing, and you can definitely see the ocean and the city.

Use 'there are a lot of trees' (plural agreement). Avoid redundant 'there' and repeated 'that'. Use parallel clauses separated by commas and 'and'. 'See the view of the ocean as well as the city' is wordy; simplify to 'see the ocean and the city' for natural English.