Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve grammar (tenses and articles), reduce redundancy, and make the response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail and a brief example. Use past tense consistently for childhood events and avoid repeating the same idea.

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often played games with neighborhood children there, and we would spend hours on the swings and playing hide-and-seek. Those visits were my favorite way to spend afternoons because I enjoyed making friends and being outdoors.

Sugerencia: Use present simple correctly and be concise. Begin with a direct topic sentence (Yes/No + reason), then give one or two specific reasons linked logically. Correct verb forms and articles, and avoid repeating phrases like "so that's why."

Ejemplo: Not really. I rarely go to parks now because I have a lot of household chores and I spend evenings at an institute to improve my spoken English. As a result, I usually don't have free time to visit parks.

Sugerencia: Clarify location and give a direct opinion. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide a specific reason or example why more parks are beneficial. Avoid vague phrases and improve word choice (e.g., "reduce air pollution" rather than "reduce the pollution very much").

Ejemplo: Yes, I would. Although I live in a village, I think my city needs more parks because they help reduce air pollution and provide green spaces for exercise. For example, small community parks could encourage people to walk and improve local air quality.

Sugerencia: Be concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence naming the park and its location, then give one or two specific reasons why you want to visit, using correct grammar and articles. Replace awkward phrases like "I listen from many people" with "I have heard from many people."

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit the Rose Garden in Chandigarh. I have heard from many people that it is very beautiful and contains many varieties of roses and jasmine, which I love, so I want to explore the flower displays and take photographs.

× Yes, I like it too much because when I was child I love to play in the parks with other children and making friends.

✓ Yes, I liked it very much because when I was a child I loved to play in parks with other children and make friends.

Multiple tense and article issues: 'like' should be past 'liked' to match 'when I was a child'; missing article 'a' before 'child' (Article errors - ID 22) but primary is tense. 'love' should be past 'loved' for consistency (Past tense issue - ID 5). 'making friends' should be the base verb parallel with 'to play' -> 'make friends' (Verb + -ing form - ID 8). Use 'parks' without 'the' when speaking generally. Suggest using consistent past tense and parallel verb forms: 'liked', 'loved', 'make friends'.

× It was my favorite hobby in my childhood.

✓ It was my favorite hobby in my childhood.

Sentence is correct. It uses past tense 'was' appropriately to describe childhood; no grammatical correction needed. Keep as is.

× No, I didn't.

✓ No, I don't now.

Context asks about present habit: 'Do you still like going to parks now?' The student's reply 'No, I didn't.' incorrectly uses past tense. Use present simple negative 'No, I don't' or 'No, I don't anymore.' Use appropriate tense to answer a present-tense question.

× I don't like going to park nowadays because I have to do lot of work at home.

✓ I don't like going to parks nowadays because I have to do a lot of work at home.

Several issues: count noun 'park' needs plural 'parks' or 'the park' (Singular and plural issue - ID 1). Missing article before 'lot' -> 'a lot' (Article errors - ID 22). 'Nowadays' fits present tense. Suggest: 'I don't like going to parks nowadays because I have to do a lot of work at home.'

× Moreover, I am studying on my spoken English, so I have to go to the institute for practicing.

✓ Moreover, I am studying my spoken English, so I have to go to the institute to practice.

Incorrect preposition 'on' after 'studying' should be omitted or replaced: 'studying my spoken English' or 'working on my spoken English' (Incorrect use of prepositions - ID 11). 'for practicing' is unnatural; use infinitive 'to practice' (Verb + -ing form / infinitive issue - ID 8). Suggest: 'I am working on my spoken English, so I have to go to the institute to practice.'

× So that's why I don't have a time to go to the parks.

✓ So that's why I don't have time to go to the parks.

'a time' is incorrect; 'time' as an uncountable noun does not need an article here (Article errors - ID 22). Keep 'the parks' if referring to parks generally in that area, or 'parks' without 'the' for general. Suggest: 'I don't have time to go to the parks.'

× Well, I live in a village, but in my city I love to see the parks.

✓ Well, I live in a village, but I would like to see more parks in my city.

Meaning and structure are unclear. 'In my city I love to see the parks' is awkward. Use 'would like to see more parks in my city' to match the examiner's question about wanting more parks (Sentence structure errors - ID 26). Also 'love to see' could be 'would like to see' for politeness/possibility.

× Due to increasing air pollution, parks can reduce the pollution very much.

✓ Because of increasing air pollution, parks can help reduce pollution significantly.

Phrase 'reduce the pollution very much' is awkward. Use 'help reduce pollution significantly' for natural expression. 'Due to' is acceptable but 'because of' is clearer here. No major tense errors; improvement is stylistic and word choice (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs - ID 13).

× Yes, in the future I want to go to the Rose garden which is located in Chandigarh.

✓ Yes, in the future I want to go to the Rose Garden which is located in Chandigarh.

Minor capitalization: 'Rose Garden' is a proper noun and should be capitalized. Sentence tense is appropriate ('want to go' for future intention). Also 'which is located in Chandigarh' is correct. No major grammatical errors; this is a style/capitalization note (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs - ID 13).

× It is very beautiful park in the Chandigarh.

✓ It is a very beautiful park in Chandigarh.

Missing indefinite article 'a' before 'very beautiful park' (Article errors - ID 22). Remove 'the' before 'Chandigarh' because city names do not take 'the' (Incorrect use of the definite article - ID 17). Suggest: 'It is a very beautiful park in Chandigarh.'

× I listen from many people and I love flowers of different kinds such as rose and Jasmine.

✓ I have heard about it from many people and I love flowers of different kinds such as roses and jasmine.

'I listen from many people' is incorrect; use 'I have heard about it from many people' (Verb in the past participle / present perfect - ID 9). 'rose' should be plural 'roses' when speaking generally; 'Jasmine' should be lowercase 'jasmine' unless referring to a proper noun (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs / Singular and plural issue - ID 1 & 13). Suggest: 'I have heard about it from many people, and I love flowers of different kinds such as roses and jasmine.'

× So that's why I want to explore the park the.

✓ So that's why I want to visit and explore that park.

'Explore the park the' has a misplaced article and wrong word order. Remove the extra 'the' and use 'visit and explore that park' for clarity (Sentence structure errors - ID 26).