Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be clear and concise: start with a direct topic sentence, avoid tense errors and filler words, and give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct vocabulary (e.g. playground, swings) and grammar (past tense) will improve clarity.

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. My father often took me to a small local park where I played on the swings and ran around with my friends, which made me very happy.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear topic sentence and give balanced reasons without absolute statements. Use linking words (because, so) and correct phrasing (e.g. "I don't go to parks much because..."). Avoid calling parks a "waste of time"—explain your priorities instead.

Ejemplo: I don't go to parks much nowadays because I have been very busy with my studies and household responsibilities. As a result, I haven't visited a park in about five years, although I do think parks can be relaxing when you have time.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give specific reasons. Reduce hesitation and unclear phrases. Use linking words (for example, because) and precise vocabulary (e.g. "public parks", "green spaces"). Explain benefits (recreation, environment, convenience) clearly and avoid unclear references.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like my city to create more public parks because there are very few green spaces where I live. More parks would provide places for exercise, family outings, and cleaner air for everyone.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence and name a specific park or type of park to make your answer concrete. Use linking words (for example, I would like to visit..., because...) and describe what you want to experience with specific details (landscapes, activities). Reduce fillers.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit some famous parks abroad, such as Central Park in New York or Hyde Park in London, because I want to see the landscapes, try local outdoor activities, and relax in large urban green spaces.

× Yes, I really loved going to parks when I worked.

✓ Yes, I really loved going to parks when I was a child.

The sentence uses 'when I worked' which is incorrect in this context; the question asked about childhood. Use past-tense clause 'when I was a child' to indicate the time period. Also 'loved' is correct past tense for the habit.

× Uh, my dad often took me to a small local park that uh, where I play on the screen and turn around with my friends and would make me feel really enjoy.

✓ Uh, my dad often took me to a small local park where I played on the swings, ran around with my friends, and had a lot of fun.

The original mixes tenses and clauses ('that uh, where') and uses incorrect verbs and phrases ('play on the screen', 'turn around', 'would make me feel really enjoy'). Correct by using past tense consistent with 'took' ('played', 'ran'), correct the object 'swings' instead of 'screen', and replace 'would make me feel really enjoy' with 'had a lot of fun' for natural English.

× No I don't really go to parks anymore.

✓ No, I don't really go to parks anymore.

Missing comma after 'No' is a punctuation issue but sentence grammar is fine; added comma for clarity. The present tense 'don't really go' correctly expresses current habit.

× I haven't been to a park for about 5 years now.

✓ I haven't been to a park for about five years.

The present perfect 'haven't been' is correct for an experience up to now. 'Now' is redundant when using 'for about five years'; spelling out numbers under ten is preferred in formal speech but not mandatory. Adjusted to be more natural.

× I'm an adult so I'm too busy with my study and cooking.

✓ I'm an adult, so I'm too busy with my studies and cooking.

Use plural 'studies' when referring to one's academic work in general. Added comma after introductory clause for clarity.

× Uh so I think go into parks is a waste of time.

✓ Uh, so I think going to parks is a waste of time.

After 'think' use a gerund ('going') rather than base verb 'go'. Also use 'to parks' rather than 'into parks'. Added comma for clarity.

× Yes, I want, uh, my city create more parks because I see, I don't see any parks in my country, in my city now.

✓ Yes, I want my city to create more parks because I don't see many parks in my city or country now.

After 'want' use the infinitive with 'to' ('want my city to create'). The original repeats ideas awkwardly; simplified to 'don't see many parks' and corrected word order 'in my city or country'.

× Uh, so I think, uh, it's more convenient to land my, uh, sister.

✓ Uh, so I think it's more convenient for my sister to have nearby parks.

The phrase 'convenient to land my sister' is incorrect and unclear. Use 'convenient for my sister' and express the intended idea: parks being nearby are convenient for her. Replaced 'land' with 'have nearby parks' to make sense.

× I really want to, uh, go to some famous parks in, uh, another country in the future.

✓ I really want to go to some famous parks in other countries in the future.

Sentence is understandable but 'in another country' singular conflicts with 'some famous parks' plural; use 'other countries' to match plurality. Future intent expressed correctly with 'want to'.

× I want to travel and, uh, uh, experience about this, uh, green space.

✓ I want to travel and experience these green spaces.

Do not use 'experience about'; use 'experience' directly with the object ('experience these green spaces'). 'This' changed to 'these' to match plural 'parks/green spaces'. Simplified redundant fillers and corrected noun number agreement.