Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve clarity, grammar and cohesion. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct tense and word choice, avoid repetition, and add one supporting detail. Use a linking word to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes. I enjoyed going to the public park after school when I was a child. I often asked my father to take me there, and we would play on the swings and feed the ducks by the pond.

Sugerencia: Make the answer more concise and natural. Begin with a direct statement, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words like because or so. Avoid fillers (umm, you know) and redundant phrases.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they help me relax and clear my mind. For example, I go jogging there or sit on a bench to read when I need a break from work.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer and support it with specific reasons and a suggestion. Correct grammar (singular/plural), remove hesitations, and use linking words such as because and for example to make it coherent.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks because our town currently has only one small park. For example, additional parks would give families more places to exercise and children safe spaces to play.

Sugerencia: Answer clearly and provide specific details about why you want to go again. Use correct tense and pronunciation of the park name (e.g. 'Gansevoort' or confirm name), avoid repetition and fillers, and include a linking word to explain reasons.

Ejemplo: Yes. I would like to visit Central Park in New York again because it has many activities and lovely scenery. I went there many years ago and remember people playing sports and relaxing on the grass, so I want to experience that atmosphere once more.

× I did like to go to the park when I was a shower after after school hours.

✓ I did like to go to the park when I was a child after school.

The phrase 'was a shower' is incorrect; likely intended 'was a child'. 'After after' is duplicated. 'After school hours' is wordy; 'after school' is natural. Use the correct noun 'child' and remove duplication and extra words.

× I always ask my dad to take me to the park.

✓ I always asked my dad to take me to the park.

The context is past (childhood), so the verb should be in past tense. Change present 'ask' to past 'asked' to match time reference.

× I mean the public park.

✓ I mean the public park.

This sentence is acceptable, but keep article 'the' because referring to a specific public park previously mentioned; no change required.

× There's one park called Park in my hometown.

✓ There's one park called 'Park' in my hometown.

The sentence needs clarity: if the park's name is 'Park', it should be set apart (here shown with quotes). Also keep 'There is' contraction 'There's' is fine.

× Yes, I like to go to the park to relax myself or do some outdoor activities and, you know, to calm myself whenever I need to reset my mind or some sort of umm, stay alone or something like that.

✓ Yes, I like to go to the park to relax or do outdoor activities and to calm myself whenever I need to reset my mind or be alone.

Remove reflexive 'myself' where unnecessary; 'relax' and 'do' are parallel verbs. 'Some sort of umm, stay alone' is ungrammatical; replace with 'be alone'. Clean up filler words for clarity.

× I would say yes because there are only one park in the town where I live at the moment and it's not that really big part.

✓ I would say yes because there is only one park in the town where I live at the moment and it's not really big.

Use singular verb 'is' with 'one park' (singular). 'There are only one park' is incorrect. 'Not that really big part' is awkward; use 'not really big'.

× So I don't really mind if in the town only have one park, but they should do more some sort of.

✓ So I don't really mind if the town only has one park, but they should build more parks.

Sentence structure is wrong: subject 'the town' requires verb 'has'. 'They should do more some sort of' is vague and ungrammatical; clarify intent as 'build more parks'.

× Yeah, that's a one park in New York City.

✓ Yeah, there's a park in New York City.

'That's a one park' is incorrect English. Use 'there's a park' or 'that's a park'. Also article 'a' with 'one' is redundant; choose one form.

× It's called Gansinto Park.

✓ It's called Gan Sinto Park.

Assuming the park name is two words, separate them; if different spelling is intended, verify proper noun. Present correction splits into likely correct form.

× I actually been there once before, but it was long, long time ago.

✓ I actually went there once before, but it was a long, long time ago.

'I actually been' omits auxiliary; choose past simple 'went' or present perfect 'have been'. Context uses specific time 'a long time ago', so past simple 'went' fits. Add article 'a' before 'long time ago'.

× Umm, I've been there.

✓ I've been there.

This sentence is fine; filler 'Umm' removed for clarity. Present perfect 'I've been there' is appropriate to indicate experience.

× I've seen there's a lot of outdoor activity, people hang out.

✓ I've seen that there are a lot of outdoor activities and people hanging out.

'I've seen there's' is informal and mixes clauses; use 'I've seen that there are'. 'Activity' should be plural 'activities'. Use 'people hanging out' or 'people who hang out' for correct participle use.

× That's fantastic.

✓ That's fantastic.

Sentence is correct as an exclamation; no grammatical change needed.