Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答直接但不够流畅与具体。要用更自然的时态和连贯句子，避免重复（如“in my memory”与“remember”重复）。可以加一到两句具体细节（玩什么游戏、和谁、什么时候去），并用连接词使表达更顺畅。

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. There was a small park near my home where my friends and I would play tag and fly kites every weekend, and we often stayed until sunset.

Sugerencia: 语法错误较多，时态和主谓一致需改进。回答不够自然，表达原因时应更清晰并提供具体信息（例如现在多忙或城市里公园少）。使用连接词（so, because）改善逻辑。

Ejemplo: Not as much as before, because I now live in another city for school and have a busy timetable, so I rarely have time to visit parks.

Sugerencia: 回答尝试表达观点但词汇和句子结构混乱（'UMM'不清楚）。应更准确地描述城市特点并给出理由。使用具体例子但注意语法（like to go / like going）。句子不宜过长，保持自然表达。

Ejemplo: Yes, I would. Although my city has some large parks like Xuanwu Lake, I think more small neighbourhood parks would make it easier for residents to relax without travelling far.

Sugerencia: 回答不清楚且逻辑混乱，缺少完整句子与明确理由。应直接回答问题并用一到两句支持说明（例如喜欢做其他活动或已经去过想去的公园）。注意时态和连词的使用。

Ejemplo: Not really. I usually prefer going shopping or watching films with friends, and I already visit the main parks near my university, so I don't have a specific park planned to visit in the future.

× Of course. In my memory, I remember the parks near my own neighborhood, so I often go to parks and play games with my friends. Yes.

✓ Of course. I remember the parks near my neighborhood; I often went to those parks and played games with my friends.

原句时态混用且语义指儿童时期的习惯，应使用一般过去时。将“I often go to parks”改为“I often went to those parks and played games with my friends”以与“as a child”语境一致。建议：提到过去的习惯用一般过去时或used to。

× Actually, I'm not living there. I'm go to another city, go to school and make new friends. So I don't still like going to park now.

✓ Actually, I no longer live there. I moved to another city to go to school and make new friends. So I don't still like going to parks there now.

原句存在时态和动词形式错误：“I'm not living there”在此情境下用一般现在完成或一般现在时不合适，改为“no longer live”；“I'm go”是错误的动词形式，应为“moved”或“I went/ I moved”表示过去迁移；“going to park”缺少复数或冠词，改为“going to parks”。建议：表达过去事实用过去时或现在完成时；注意动词be后接ing的正确用法；注意可数名词复数或冠词。

× In my opinion, I think my city is a UMM parks and building together city. I can see the big parks, for example Shell Lake in Nanjing. Many people like go to these parks.

✓ In my opinion, my city is a mix of parks and buildings. I can see large parks, for example Shell Lake in Nanjing. Many people like going to these parks.

原句有措辞和词序问题："a UMM parks and building together city"不是正确表达，改为"a mix of parks and buildings"；"big parks"更自然为"large parks"；"like go to"为动词搭配错误，动词like后接动名词，应为"like going to"。建议：注意固定搭配（like + -ing）和名词单复数及搭配用法。

× Actually not, because I like. Visited some buildings that go to parks I like, go shopping, watch film with my friends.

✓ Not really, because I have already visited some parks and buildings I like; I go shopping and watch films with my friends.

原句碎片化、缺主语和正确动词形式：“Actually not, because I like.”不完整，需补全为“Not really, because I have already visited some parks and buildings I like.”“Visited some buildings”缺主语和时态，应用完成时表示已经参观过；“go shopping, watch film”需与主语一致并用复数形式“films”。建议：保持句子完整，使用适当时态（现在完成表示经历），并确保动词形式和主谓一致。