Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise and organize answer: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and correct basic grammar (e.g. tense, articles, plural). Use vocabulary precisely (nostalgic, memorable).

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. For example, my family often had picnics there and my friends and I played games like hide-and-seek and swimming in the pond. Those visits are very nostalgic because they gave me many happy memories.

Sugerencia: Use correct tense and concise structure: begin with a direct statement, then give specific reasons with linking words. Avoid vague phrases and unfinished sentences. Improve grammar: use present tense for habitual actions (I usually go), correct noun forms (scenery, views), and smoother linking (because, so).

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. I usually go to the nearby park when I have free time because it helps me relax after a busy workday. Also, the park has beautiful gardens and scenic views, which makes it a pleasant place to unwind.

Sugerencia: Give a clear, concise answer with one concrete reason and accurate vocabulary. Avoid unclear fragments and pronunciation-driven misspellings (e.g. 'fuse sculptures'). Use linking words (because, for example) and correct grammar (makes us feel).

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they improve quality of life. For example, I hope to visit Goshen near my hometown someday, since I heard it has beautiful sculptures and well-kept gardens that are both relaxing and visually striking.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give one specific plan or reason. Use correct prepositions and articles (in my free time, visit Memorial Park in Herona). Keep it to two or three sentences and include linking words (so, because).

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit Memorial Park in Herona with my family when we have free time. I want to go there to relax and recharge because I heard the park has many beautiful views and peaceful spots for a family picnic.

× Yes, I really love parks.

✓ Yes, I really loved parks as a child.

The question asks about liking parks as a child (past time). Use past tense 'loved' to match the time frame. Suggestion: match verb tense to the time reference in the question.

× I clearly remember when I was a child we always went to the park to play swim and we always went there to gather a picnic and play it around by hide and seek with my friends.

✓ I clearly remember that when I was a child we always went to the park to swim, have picnics, and play games like hide-and-seek with my friends.

Multiple problems: run-on sentence and incorrect verb forms ('play swim') and awkward phrasing. Rearrange into parallel verbs 'to swim, have picnics, and play games' and use 'hide-and-seek' as a compound noun. Suggestion: break long ideas into a clear list with parallel structures.

× I feel nostalgic and I gain more memorable, shallow memories, so that's why I really love to go in part.

✓ I felt nostalgic and gained many cherished memories, so that's why I really loved going to the park.

Tense mismatch (present vs past) and incorrect adjective choice ('shallow' is wrong; use 'cherished' or 'fond') and wrong preposition 'in part'. Match past tense and use appropriate adjectives. Suggestion: choose adjectives that convey positive memory and ensure tense consistency.

× Yes, of course, sometimes when I have a free time, I usually went to the park nearby in our hometown because I feel relaxed and comfortable after the busy hour to my work especially, it is my stress reliever to start my new day.

✓ Yes, of course. Sometimes when I have free time, I usually go to the park nearby in our hometown because I feel relaxed and comfortable after a busy workday; it is a stress reliever for me.

Mixed tenses: 'have' (present) followed by 'went' (past) should be 'go' (present). Remove article 'a' before 'free time' and fix awkward phrasing 'busy hour to my work' to 'busy workday'. Suggestion: keep present tense for current habits and simplify clauses.

× And I could say that our park is really impressive because there are a lot of sceneries view like gardens and.

✓ I would say that our park is really impressive because there are many scenic views, like gardens.

'A lot of sceneries view' is ungrammatical; use 'many scenic views' or 'a lot of scenic views'. Remove trailing 'and' and use 'gardens' as an example. Suggestion: use adjective 'scenic' to modify 'views' and keep noun phrases correct.

× Yes, of course, because in my life I am fascinated to visit some of beautiful parks.

✓ Yes, of course, because I am keen to visit some beautiful parks in my life.

Incorrect word order and quantifier 'some of beautiful parks' should be 'some beautiful parks'. 'Fascinated to visit' is awkward; use 'keen to visit' or 'interested in visiting'. Suggestion: use correct quantifier placement and choose collocations like 'interested in' or 'keen to'.

× In the future I would like to visit Goshen near in our hometown because I heard there are a lot of beautiful.

✓ In the future I would like to visit Goshen near our hometown because I heard there are a lot of beautiful places there.

'Near in our hometown' is wrong; use 'near our hometown'. The sentence is incomplete; add 'places there'. Suggestion: place 'near' directly before the location and complete the noun phrase.

× Fuse sculptures and gardens which makes we feel a breathtaking and relaxing.

✓ Its sculptures and gardens make us feel breathless and relaxed.

Subject-verb agreement and pronoun errors: 'which makes we' should be 'which make us' or simply 'make us'. 'A breathtaking and relaxing' lacks a noun; use adjectives correctly ('breathless' is better than 'breathtaking' as a feeling). Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and correct pronoun 'us', and include a clear complement.

× Yes, of course, I would like to visit there when I have a free time together with my family to spend our vacation there.

✓ Yes, of course. I would like to visit there when I have free time and go with my family to spend our vacation there.

Article error 'a free time' should be 'free time'; tense and repetition improved. Suggestion: remove the indefinite article before 'free time' and avoid repeating 'there' unnecessarily.

× And I always really want to relax and to recharge my energy and I will say that I want to go in.

✓ I always want to relax and recharge my energy, and I would say that I want to go.

Unnecessary 'to' before second verb and awkward 'go in'. Use parallel infinitives 'relax and recharge' and use 'go' without 'in'. Suggestion: keep verb forms parallel and avoid extra particles.

× In the city of Memorial Park, it is located in Herona near in our city because I heard there are a lot of beautiful scenes there.

✓ Memorial Park is located in Herona near our city, and I heard there are a lot of beautiful scenes there.

'In the city of Memorial Park, it is located in Herona' is redundant and 'near in our city' is wrong. Use 'located in Herona near our city.' Suggestion: avoid redundancy and use correct preposition order 'near our city'.