Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and incorrect verb forms (e.g., say "I used to go to parks with my family and cousins" instead of "I was going to there"). Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I used to go with my family and cousins and we often played on the swings and had picnics, which made those afternoons very enjoyable because we spent quality time together.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence and then specific details about what you do in parks now. Correct tense and word choice: say "I started going on my own last year" and avoid filler words like "like" and vague phrases such as "writing some crazy." Use linking words such as "now" and "usually" to show routine.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. Since last year I often go on my own or meet friends there to play football or relax and read, which helps me unwind after a busy week.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give two clear, specific reasons using correct grammar. Avoid repeating "like" and unclear phrasing. Use linking words such as "because" and "also" to connect points and explain benefits for different groups.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would. More parks would give residents more options for recreation and exercise, and they would provide families and children safe outdoor spaces to play. Additionally, parks improve air quality and make the city more attractive.

Sugerencia: Begin with a direct answer and avoid conversational fillers such as "Are you serious?" and repeated "like." State the specific park you want to visit and give reasons why, using clear supporting details. Keep it to 1–3 sentences and use correct verb forms.

Ejemplo: Yes — I would love to visit Disneyland in the future. It's my dream destination because of the themed attractions and family-friendly atmosphere, and I hope to go there with my family or close friends.

× Yes, I really liked going to park when I was young.

✓ Yes, I really liked going to the park when I was young.

Use the definite article 'the' with 'park' when referring to parks in general experiences or a specific park visited in childhood. Without an article, the noun is incorrect. Use 'the park' or 'parks' depending on meaning.

× I was going to there with my family and my cousins, like other people than me because I was at the age that I can't go like alone to a park to play like with somebody.

✓ I used to go there with my family and my cousins, unlike other children my age, because I couldn't go to a park alone to play with someone.

Multiple issues: 'going to there' should be 'go there' or 'used to go there'; 'like other people than me' is incorrect—use 'unlike other children my age'; 'I can't' should match past tense 'couldn't'; 'to a park to play like with somebody' should be 'to a park alone to play with someone'. Maintain consistent past tense and correct prepositions.

× So I really enjoyed to playing in the park when I was young.

✓ So I really enjoyed playing in the park when I was young.

The verb 'enjoy' is followed by a gerund, not an infinitive. Use 'enjoyed playing' rather than 'enjoyed to playing'.

× Yes, I still like going to parks now.

✓ Yes, I still like going to parks now.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable but keep present simple to express a current habit. No change needed.

× From last year I started going like on my own and usually I'm going with my friends to play like some games there or like writing some crazy.

✓ Since last year I have started going on my own, and usually I go with my friends to play games there or to do something fun.

Use 'since' with present perfect ('have started') to indicate an action beginning in the past and continuing. Replace 'usually I'm going' with simple present 'I usually go' for habitual actions. 'Play like some games' -> 'play games'; 'writing some crazy' is unclear—'do something fun' conveys intent.

× Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because like you will have like more options to go somewhere and have some fun.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because you will have more options for places to go and more ways to have fun.

Remove filler 'like'; use 'because' correctly to link clauses; use 'options for places to go' or 'more options to go somewhere' and 'more ways to have fun' for clarity.

× Also like some other two other person's perspective, it will be like also will be good.

✓ Also, from other people's perspectives, that would be good.

'some other two other person's perspective' is ungrammatical. Use plural 'people' and possessive 'perspectives'. Avoid redundant 'also' and incorrect word order; use conditional 'would be' for hypothetical opinion.

× Are you serious? Like any park I wanna go to in the theater is a Disneyland, you know, it's like my dream park.

✓ Are you serious? The park I want to go to in the future is Disneyland; it's my dream park.

Original has run-on and informal 'wanna' and wrong 'in the theater'. Use 'want to' and clarify time 'in the future' instead of 'in the theater'. Ensure each clause has proper verbs and punctuation.

× Like it's not that park, but it's my dream like place I wanna go in the future with my family or with my like, friends.

✓ It's not an ordinary park, but it's my dream place to visit in the future with my family or my friends.

Avoid informal fillers 'like' and 'wanna'; use 'dream place to visit' for clarity. 'With my family or my friends' is preferable to 'with my like, friends'.