Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the answer more natural and grammatically correct: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, use past tense consistently, and add a specific detail with a linking word. Keep it to under five sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. Usually I went there every weekend to get some fresh air and play on the swings. For example, my friends and I often had little picnics near the pond.

Sugerencia: Use present simple for habitual actions, avoid repetition, make sentences fluent and correct (e.g., 'sit on benches and chat'), and add a brief reason using a linking word.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. I often visit them with my friends, and we sit on benches and chat because it is a relaxed place to catch up.

Sugerencia: Correct grammar and be specific: use a clear topic sentence, explain reasons with linking words, and provide realistic, specific effects rather than unclear numbers. Keep it concise.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like more parks in my city because they help people relax and improve air quality. For example, more trees and green spaces can reduce pollution and make streets cooler in summer.

Sugerencia: Use correct subject-verb agreement, avoid hesitation (uh), and be specific about reasons. Mention what you plan to do there and link ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: I want to visit Daan Forest Park in the future because it is the largest park in Taipei and has many rental bikes. I would like to cycle around the lake and relax on the lawns.

× Yes, I like to go to park.

✓ Yes, I liked going to the park.

Student used simple present 'like' but is answering about childhood; past tense should be used to match time frame. Also English requires the definite article 'the' before 'park' when referring to parks in general experience. Suggestion: use past tense 'liked' and include 'the' before 'park'.

× When I was young, usually I would go to park every weekend and take a breath.

✓ When I was young, I usually went to the park every weekend and took a breath.

Problems: missing definite article 'the' before 'park' and inconsistent verb tense/modal usage. 'Would' can express habitual past but here simple past 'went' fits better; 'take a breath' should be past 'took a breath' to match past time. Suggestion: use 'I usually went' and 'the park' and 'took a breath'.

× Yes, now I will visit the park with my friends too.

✓ Yes, now I visit the park with my friends too.

Using 'will' implies future intention but the question asks about current habit. Use present simple 'visit' for regular action. Suggestion: use present simple for habits: 'I visit'. Alternatively 'I usually visit' to emphasize frequency.

× We will go there, go to the park and sit on the chair and chatting.

✓ We go there, sit on the benches, and chat.

Mixed tenses and incorrect verb forms: 'will' vs habitual, redundant 'go there, go to the park', and 'chatting' (gerund) after 'and' without auxiliary. Also 'the chair' is unnatural; plural 'benches' or 'a bench' preferred. Suggestion: use parallel verb forms in present simple for habits: 'go, sit, and chat' or 'we go there, sit on the benches, and chat'.

× Of course, have more parks in my city can help everybody feel relaxed and also can refresh our air from PM to .5.

✓ Of course, having more parks in my city can help everybody feel relaxed and can also improve our air quality from PM 2.5.

Sentence structure issue: use gerund 'having' as subject, not 'have', and avoid two separate 'can' placements awkwardly; keep 'can' before both verbs or use once. Also 'refresh our air from PM to .5' is unclear; likely meant 'reduce PM 2.5' or 'improve air quality from PM 2.5'. Suggestion: use 'having more parks... can help... and can also improve our air quality by reducing PM 2.5'.

× I want to go to DA and Forest Park because it is the biggest park in Taipei City and also uh, it have many bikes there for people to.

✓ I want to go to Daan and Forest Park because they are the biggest parks in Taipei City, and they also have many bikes for people to use.

Multiple errors: 'it is' should agree in number with two parks (plural 'they are' and 'parks'). 'It have' should be 'they have' for subject-verb agreement. Sentence ends incomplete 'for people to' — add 'use'. Also proper name 'DA' likely 'Daan'. Suggestion: ensure matching plural subject and verb, complete the infinitive 'to use', and use correct park names.