Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the answer more natural by using past tense consistently, avoid repetition, and add one specific detail to support your statement. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and use a linking word to show sequence or reason.

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because I played soccer and basketball there. For example, I used to meet my friends after school and we would practice penalty kicks for an hour. That regular play helped me stay fit and made the parks feel like a second home.

Sugerencia: Use present simple consistently, remove filler words, and organize ideas with a linking phrase (e.g., “for exercise” or “to relax”). Be more concise and give one concrete example of when or how often you go.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. I usually go twice a week to practice soccer and to walk, because it helps me relax and stay active. For instance, I played there last Saturday morning with a friend.

Sugerencia: Avoid repetition and clarify your main point. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give a specific preference (type of park) and a reason using a linking word (e.g., “because” or “so”).

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because green spaces improve quality of life. In particular, I wish for parks with wide walking paths and open fields for soccer, since those features encourage people to exercise and socialize.

Sugerencia: Be concise and use correct article use and name formatting. Start with a clear statement, then give a specific reason why you want to visit and one detail about what you would do there.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit Central Park in New York because it is famous and very large. I want to walk its trails and join a casual soccer game there, since it seems like a lively place with lots of outdoor activities.

× Yes, I like going to the park as a child very much because I love playing soccer and also playing basketball.

✓ Yes, I liked going to the park as a child very much because I loved playing soccer and basketball.

The speaker refers to past habits as a child, so past tense verbs should be used (liked, loved) rather than present tense (like, love). Use consistent past tense for past situations and avoid redundant 'also playing'. Suggestion: Replace present-tense verbs with past-tense forms when talking about childhood routines.

× So when I was a child I played soccer with my friend after school almost every day.

✓ So when I was a child I played soccer with my friends after school almost every day.

If the activity happened with more than one friend or generally with peers, plural 'friends' is more natural; if it was a single friend, it is correct as 'friend'. The original sentence may imply repeated group activity, so plural improves clarity. Ensure subject and noun number match meaning.

× Yes, I sure like going to the park now and I sometimes go to the park and to play, to practice soccer and just walking around and I like it can be very relaxed and makes me active.

✓ Yes, I still like going to the park now. I sometimes go there to play, to practice soccer, or just to walk around. I find it very relaxing and it makes me feel active.

Several tense and form issues: 'sure like' is unnatural; use 'still like'. Parallel structure required for activities: 'to play, to practice, or to walk' or use gerunds consistently. 'Just walking around' needs 'to' for parallel infinitive or convert to gerund with rephrasing. 'I like it can be very relaxed' is ungrammatical; use 'I find it very relaxing.' Maintain present simple for current habits.

× Yes, I would like to share more more park in my city.

✓ Yes, I would like to have more parks in my city.

'Share more more park' is incorrect use of words and quantifiers. The intended meaning is a greater number of parks, so use 'more parks' and 'have' instead of 'share'. Remove the duplicated 'more'.

× Actually I can see a lot of park around my area.

✓ Actually I can see a lot of parks around my area.

'A lot of' should be followed by a plural count noun 'parks' not the singular 'park.' Use plural when indicating many of something.

× But if I can see more special path park with green and having space to play soccer and walk around.

✓ But I would like to see more parks with special paths, green areas, and space to play soccer and walk around.

The original is a fragment and has incorrect structure. Use a main clause 'I would like to see' and list features in parallel form: 'parks with special paths, green areas, and space to play soccer and walk around.' This fixes verb modality and noun forms.

× Yes, I have and I would like to visit park and Central Park called Central Park in New York which is very famous park to walk around to play with some people and also it is very good area.

✓ Yes, I have, and I would like to visit Central Park in New York, which is a very famous park for walking and playing with others; it is also a very nice area.

Multiple issues: 'visit park and Central Park called Central Park' is repetitive and missing articles. Use 'visit Central Park in New York' and include the article 'a very famous park' for count noun. Use 'for walking and playing with others' rather than 'to walk around to play with some people.' 'Very good area' is unidiomatic; use 'very nice area.' Maintain conditional/modal consistency with 'would like' for future desire.