Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct, correct grammar, and use clear past-tense narrative. Limit to 2–4 sentences, start with a topic sentence, then give one specific supporting detail with correct vocabulary. Avoid redundant phrases and incorrect word forms.

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often played on the playground with my friends and we had picnics under big trees, which are some of my happiest childhood memories.

Sugerencia: Use present tense for habits and be concise. Correct sentence structure and pronoun use. Combine ideas with linking words (for example, 'especially' and 'because') and give a specific example of what you enjoy about parks when traveling.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy visiting parks, especially when I travel, because they show local culture and everyday life. For example, in Japan I liked seeing families garden and people exercising in public parks.

Sugerencia: Answer the question directly, then give a clear reason and a specific detail. Fix basic grammar (article use, prepositions, vocabulary like 'near' not 'in my bag'). Keep to 2–3 sentences and link reason to desire for more parks.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like more parks in my city because green spaces improve people's wellbeing. I live in Seoul and there are many mountains and parks near my house, so I often hike there, but more small local parks would be convenient for neighbours.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer (yes/no or a specific place), then add a clear reason and a detail. Mention a specific park or city in Europe to be more concrete and avoid repeating phrases. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example.'

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit parks in Europe, especially Hyde Park in London, because it is famous for its wide open spaces and concerts. Visiting such parks would let me experience European leisure culture and historic landscapes.

× Of course I'd like to go to the park as I'm also children.

✓ Of course I liked going to the park when I was a child.

The original mixes present and past and uses the wrong pronoun/number 'children' for the speaker. The question asks about childhood, so use past tense 'liked' and 'when I was a child' for singular first-person reference. Use consistent tense: past simple for habitual past actions.

× I played with my friends on the playlog playground and had a picnic on the trees.

✓ I played with my friends on the playground and had a picnic under the trees.

'Playlog' seems incorrect or unnecessary; use 'playground'. Picnic is done 'under' or 'in' the trees, not 'on' the trees. 'On the playground' is correct for playing; 'under the trees' is correct for having a picnic.

× That was very meaningful memories to me.

✓ Those were very meaningful memories to me.

The subject 'memories' is plural, so use 'those' and plural verb form 'were'. 'That' + 'was' would be used for a singular idea. Ensure noun and demonstrative/pronoun agree in number.

× Yes, I'd like to go to the parks there now, especially when I'm traveling.

✓ Yes, I like to go to parks there now, especially when I'm traveling.

The student used 'I'd like' (I would like) which implies conditional desire rather than habitual present. The question asks about current habits, so present simple 'I like to go to parks' is more appropriate. 'Parks' plural is acceptable when speaking generally.

× I. Should go to the park in the location that are travelling.

✓ I should go to the parks in the locations I am traveling to.

Remove the stray period after 'I'. Use plural 'parks' and 'locations' to match general reference, and use relative clause 'locations I am traveling to' with subject-verb agreement ('locations... are' is wrong here). Also keep modal 'should' plus base verb 'go'.

× It is very good to see their local culture.

✓ It is a good way to see the local culture.

'Very good to see their local culture' is awkward. Rephrase to 'a good way to see the local culture' or 'it is a great way to experience local culture.' Also avoid 'their' when the subject is generic; 'the local culture' is clearer.

× Yes, I'm living in Seoul.

✓ Yes, I live in Seoul.

Use present simple 'I live' for a permanent or long-term situation rather than present continuous 'I'm living,' which implies temporary residence. Either can be correct contextually, but present simple is more natural when stating one's home city.

× Seoul has a lot of mountains and park.

✓ Seoul has a lot of mountains and parks.

Parallel nouns should be plural when referring to multiple items: 'a lot of mountains and parks.' Using singular 'park' conflicts with 'a lot of'.

× There is a mountain in my bag of my house.

✓ There is a mountain near my house.

The phrase 'in my bag of my house' is incorrect. Use 'near my house' or 'by my house' to indicate proximity. 'In my backyard' would be appropriate if the mountain were literally inside the property, but 'near my house' is the likely intended meaning.

× I usually go then.

✓ I usually go there.

'Then' refers to time; the intended word for place is 'there.' Use 'there' to indicate location.

× I don't know about the name of parks, but as I mentioned earlier, I like to go to the park when I'm traveling, so I want to go to Europe, so I want to go to the park.

✓ I don't know the names of specific parks, but as I mentioned earlier, I like to visit parks when I'm traveling, so I want to go to Europe and visit parks there.

Multiple issues: use plural 'names' for multiple parks, and 'specific' clarifies meaning. Replace repetitive 'go to the park' with 'visit parks' for variety and correctness. Also correct article usage and sentence flow by combining ideas with 'and' rather than repeating 'so I want to go to the park.' Use 'visit parks there' to indicate parks in Europe.